Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 52

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update. loved the part
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear
fantastic
superb
awesome
mindblowing
bc 's flashback was great and the whole paart was
wowwwwwwwwwwwww
agar next update ready hai to wo bhi jaldi se post kardo
cont soonnnnnnnnnn👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Manaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....

Mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha... 😲 tu itni punctual kaise ho gayi... 😲 matlab bina dhamkiyon ke update... 😲😲😲 yaar tu to bullet train ya fir jet plane jaisi bann gayi hai...matlab tu itni jaldi update kar kaise sakti hai.... 😲 chal tune jo kiya bahut ache se kiya hai...so m very happy about this...😊😛😊


Aur mai tujhse bhi bahut khush hun...aakhir tujhe bhi hum sab ki tarah Raj ko laane ki jaldi hai...aur haan...ye to kehna hi bhul gayi...update ka size bhi itna bada tha....😲 Tu hum sabko itne jhatke de rahi hai...agar hum RN ke diwano ko kuch hua na to ilaazz bhi tujhe hi karna padega,... soch le... 😆acha hai...teri kamai ho jayegi... 😉

Chal ab sidheeeeeeeeeeeeee update pe aati hun... to kaisa tha update.... arey MARVELLOUS, FANTASTIC, SUPERB,... aur nahi bol sakti kyunki mujhe Himesh Reshamiya pasand nahi hai...isliye yahin stop kar diya...😆😆😆

Par tera update mujhe na bahut hi pasand hai...abhi kal hi mai aur preet baat kar rahe the ki teri writing style bahut khubsurat hai... sach me... yaar kamaal ka update tha... padhkar meri bachen khil gayi... this is for you for this marvellous update...🤗 🤗 🤗

Naina kitni matured hoti jaa rahi hai... I was expecting this KMA shut down episode...matlab LRL par serial ho aur KMA band hone waala episode na ho aisa ho hi nahi sakta na... That Lala is a beast....😡 Raj ko nuksaan pahunchane ke baad bhi isska jee nahi bhara na...idiot...rascal...

Loved the way the cadets were trying to motivate the civilians were just amazing...yaar mere rongte khade ho gaye... this was just outstanding... Naina saved the girl and my god...what a speech... Rajveer's protegee through and through... yaar yahan emoticon nahi hai meri khushi ko express karne ke liye...m so overwhelmed....

Naina ko Shalini aur uske friends ne bahar jaane se mana kar diya... ab kya karen.,.. naina apna khayal nahi rakhti na...ab wo kaam to raj kiya karta tha...😉 Yaar now m getting more eager to see him back...

Lala has strarted his counterattack... and gunny and naina have hit upon a plan...par wo kya hai yehi samajh me nahi aa raha... gunny ko bhi ehesaas ho raha hai ki Naina aur raj ki bonding kitni deep hai...😉

The flashback of Naina...matlab the convo between Naina and BC was just Fabulous... yaar mai kiski taarif karun aur kisse chodun...pura ka pura update hi itna khubsurat aur patriotic tha ki I can't single out a single special scene...Mujhe likhne me training dena shuru kar de Mana... I seriously need it...

2 updates down...2 updates more according to your estimate for Raj's entry... m waiting....

Continue soon...

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Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Toh ab Lala KMA ko bandh karwaana chahtha hai.............he is such a jerk 😡.ye kab maregaa yaar.........par hamaare cadets ke hothe hue ye kaise mumkin hoga???vo sab milkar jo kar rahe hai voh sach mein taarif ke aabil hai 👏 👏 👏.aur iss baar toh faculty bhi unnke saath hai.sab milkar ek taraf KMA ko bachaane ki koshish kar rahe hai aur doosri taraf logo mein desh bhakthi ki bhaavnaa bhi jagaa rahe hai.........very good 👏.and the flash back convo between Naina and BC was very very good............ab pataa nahi ye Naina aur Gunny HQ mein kya karne jaa rahe hai???jaldi bataa do yaar...........

sorry doc,iss baar teri jitni badi updaate meri utni hi choti comment.... adjust karlenaa.........ye bhi main jaldi mein likh rahi hu........pataa hai bohuth pehle hi kardena chahiye tha.........par nahi hua.......agli baar dhyaan rakhungi.................don't mind.............

Edited by esha143 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update !!!
I luved this Naina ....plzz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoooooooooome....
superb....
fantabulous.........
excellent.........
wonderful...
lovely........
just too good.........
thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb very nice mana
sach main tumne is bar jaldi up kiya and the up is as usuall very very good
plz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
HIII RAKHI HOW R U ?
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PLZ PLZ UD SOON

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
mana
thanks for mind blowing update and long update.
thanks ke tune bahut bahut jaldi update kar dia.
great.
loved the update.it's too too good.
naina is so matured now, kitne acchi tarah se baat karne lagi hain, halat ko samajh ne lagi hain.
Lala iska kya karu, haad hain, kitna kuch akr dia ab kma ke peeche pare hain,but lala bhool raha hainuha raj ke fav cadets hain jinhone aapne mentor se learn kya hain aise situation kaise samala jaye,
abhi is helping naina and others but naina cannot trust him again easily,
Loved to see gunny help naina and understand her problem.
loved the conversation between naina and bc,
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Excellent part
Lala is upto his dirty tricks...and wants to close down KMA. And has given the cadets an extremely difficult task as a condition to save KMA.
Naina and the cadets are trying their best to find new recruits.
Shalini and her friends are worried about her safety...but she is determined to stay on her goal and refuses to show any fear.
Gunny is trying to help naina and seems that their plan is working.
BC is impressed to see the confidence, determination and bravery in naina. He even admits that he has never believed that Raj could have shot Col Chandra. He tells naina that he is proud of her and that he will support her in any way possible.
Waiting to see what happens at the headquarters. please post the next part soon

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