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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIII RAKHI HOW R U ? Well....It's MANALI and not Rakhi,dear ! 😆 😆 😆 😆

SUPERBBBBBBB
MARVELLOUS
MINDBLOWING
LOVELY
ROCKING
PLZ PLZ UD SOON
Thanks a ton dear.


LOVE
DEEPA

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

hi
mana
Hey Rakhiiii !!! 😊
thanks for mind blowing update and long update. You are most welcome !!

thanks ke tune bahut bahut jaldi update kar dia. Iskeliye Welcome bolna theek nahi hoga....😆

great.Thanks ya...

loved the update.it's too too good. Thanks again...😊

naina is so matured now, kitne acchi tarah se baat karne lagi hain, halat ko samajh ne lagi hain. Hmmm...

Lala iska kya karu, haad hain, kitna kuch akr dia ab kma ke peeche pare hain,but lala bhool raha hainuha raj ke fav cadets hain jinhone aapne mentor se learn kya hain aise situation kaise samala jaye, Yeah...When his army is there fighting for KMA, LALA kuch nahi bigad sakta...

abhi is helping naina and others but naina cannot trust him again easily,
Loved to see gunny help naina and understand her problem. I know u liked Naina not trusting Abhi more than Gunny helping Naina ! 😆 😆 😆

loved the conversation between naina and bc, Thanks dear !!

update soon.Yup......


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Excellent part Thanks Nisha.
Lala is upto his dirty tricks...and wants to close down KMA. And has given the cadets an extremely difficult task as a condition to save KMA. Well.....The moron he is, he is bound to do such things ! 😡
Naina and the cadets are trying their best to find new recruits.
Shalini and her friends are worried about her safety...but she is determined to stay on her goal and refuses to show any fear. Naina was always the one to fight in the front...not the one who would get scared and stay back .
Gunny is trying to help naina and seems that their plan is working. Well we all pray for that...
BC is impressed to see the confidence, determination and bravery in naina. He even admits that he has never believed that Raj could have shot Col Chandra. He tells naina that he is proud of her and that he will support her in any way possible.
Waiting to see what happens at the headquarters. please post the next part soon
Thanks for liking it dear... will be updating soon....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

my reply to you for both the updts....Hi lipi !! How are you dear???


superb!!!!mindblowing!!!!fantablous!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏 Thanks a ton yaar !


loved d way in the first1 cadets celebrated her birthday ...almost leaving naina in shock.....👏😊 Thanks again...Smile


den the letter of hope for naina as her wishes from rajveer.....
den the coming of bunty and bringing ray of hope.....😊


all was brilliant ...simply loving d way ur taking ahead dis fic....👏👏👏👏 I am so happy and also relieved that you liked it and didnt find it boring....thanks...Smile


now for second part....yup...


loved it d way u began with d devil part of lala coming and letting his desire known to all ...

BC's health going down... He couldnt tolerate what Lala was doing to his academy...


den gunny and cadets chalk out plan...👏

den gunny and naina making plan and involving BC too.....👏👏 Glad that you liked it...and Yup...i thought it would be easier for them to function if they would have backing of some senior officer....and who else will be more apt than BC...?


everything was perfect......simply njoying d way ur bringing out naina's briiance and showing strength of cadets ......toooo goood...also d dialogues wer awesome..👏👏👏👏👏.
Thanks a zillion dear !! Smile

in all superb updt....
👏 ***bows down ****



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: saanch_69

Hi dear Heylo Saanchu !! 😊


The update was really amazing.....I read it after a long time. Thanks dear...😊


But I don't know why anything related to LRL seems so vacant without the real stunner....though you've tried n succeeded brilliantly in en-capturing the essence well. Well you said it....anything related to LRL seems vacant without the real stunner...😛


But there is always a hitch.

I loved Gunny's convo with Naina...n the way they tried to increase KMA's admission rate. The amazing Six really. Thanks again...😊


Do update soon. I will....



All the loveSmile Love ya too ! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Hey Doc😃 RANCHO !!!!!! ahh...I know it's Priya's account...but why do i feel that it's you ???😛 😆 😆
sorry for d late....😃!!! Its okkkkk !!! 😊
maine tum se kaha tha ki main kal raat ko hi kar dunga😛...par kar nahi paya...prob yeh thi ki mujhe candel light dinner par jana pada...😳!!! ab naraz mat hona...tum soch rahi hogi ki main tumhare hote hue kisi aur k sath kaise candel light dinner k liye ja sakta hun...😳!!! ab voh toh meri majburi thi...kya karun...😃??? current chala gaya tha...aur mujhe majburan apni dinner candel jala kar karna pada...😆!!! ab naraz mat hona plz...tumhara udaas sa chehra dekhta hun toh...mera dil dhadkna band ho jata hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Dont worry dear !!! Alll Izzzzzzz Welll !!! 😆 😆 😆
ok...ab tumhare ud par aate hain...!!! hmmm....
sach kahun toh mujhe tum se yeh umeed nahi thi...matlab doc aur police ka kaam toh yehi hota hai na ki hamesha last me pahunchte hain...!!! DOC nahi....Sirf POLICE !!! Agar tum bhool rahe ho toh tumhari GF bhi DOC hai....Agar maine usse yeh bata diya toh bahot mehenga padega tumhe !! batau usse ???😛 😛 😛
par tum toh baht fast nikli...aur itni jaldi ud bhi kar diya...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 Uffff !!! Mujhe toh nazar lag jayegi ! 😛
ab aate hain tumhare aaj k vishya par...jis ne ki mujhe baht PRABHAVEET kiya hai...!!! itna PRABHAVEET kiya hai ki...main sirf itna hi kah sakta hun ki 'mujhe tum par GARV hai...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃!!! voh SALMAN KHAN aur SHILPA SHETTY ka GARV nahi...yeh hum jaise aam logon k GARV ki baat karr raha hun...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Ahhh....ohkk !! Thanks for explanation !! Mujhe yeh Salmaan ki hi GARV lagi ...😛 Waise bhi aajkal tumhara aur Salmaan ka YAARANA kuch zyada hi hai na...toh mera aisa sochna jayez hai !
simple word me kaha jaye...jo ki sab k samajh me aaye toh yeh UD ek damm...AWESOME....SUPERBB aur MINDBLOWING tha...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! aur sach kahun toh is UD ka size bhi mujhe kafi hadh tak thik hi laga....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 APNI GIRLFRIEND KE CHASHMEIN BORROW KARKE PADHNA NEXT TIME !!! 😡 😡 😡😆 😆 😆 😆😆
ek baat ki khushi hai yeh jaan kar hui ki tum bhi RAJ ko miss karr rahi ho...tabhi tumhe use lane ki jaldi hai...!!! ab Raj ko maine is UD me bhi miss kiya...par mujhe laga ki ab Delhi jyada dur nahi hai...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 Sahi kaha ! 😊
yeh ud sach me baht khubsurat tha...dil khush ho gaya...samne hoti toh hugs milte...phir bhi itne dur se sirf emoticon ki post karr sakta hun...accept karr lena...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Mil gaye !!! 😃 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
naina ko tumne kitna mature dikhya hai...varna LRL me toh naina ko ek aisi ziddi ladki ka character dikhya gaya tha...jo sirf zidd se kaam karti hai...sochti kuch bhi nahi hai...!!! par yahan par naina ka pura character badala hua hai...i loved dis naina...!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Thanks for liking it dear ! Even I was fed up of that immature and stupid jerk naina they showed in LRL....so thought of changing her char a bit...glad that you liked it.
yeh Lala k kya kahne...!!! vaise us ka bhi koi kasur nahi hai...villan hai bhai...ab aise gande harkat karega...tabhi toh us ki peetai hogi na...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆!!! koi baat nahi ek baar hamare RAJ ko aa jane do...voh aur us k fauj mil kar LALA ko gana gana sikha denge...taki hamesa LALA apna hi naam gungunata rahega..."LA>>>LA>>>LA>>>LA" Priya !!! ooopsss !!! RAncho !! You are toooo much !! 😆 😆 😆 😆
aur phir sare cadets ne jis tarah se civilians ko motivate kiya...naina ne jiss tarah se us bachhi ko bachaya...aur us ka baad ka us ka voh speech....sab kuch itna achha tha ki kya batayun....!!! simply gr88888888888888...akhir rajveer ki protege hai...asar toh rahega hi...par yeh taiyaal tumhare liye hai...kyoun ki tum is ki haqdaar ho👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks again sweetie ! I wondered whether it would create the feel i wanted it to create....par now am bit relieved as everyone liked it...😊
shalini aur bakiyoun ne sahi kiya naina k sath...!!! vaise bhi voh kahan kisi ki baat maanti hai...voh toh bass ek hi insaan ki har ek baat maanti thi aur voh hai RAJVEER...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Arey Uski bhi kaha maanti hai !!! Woh usse baatein manwaati hai ! 😛 Aur woh bechara bhi hairaan, pareshaan, vivash , lachar hokar iski baat maan hi leta hai ! 😆 😆 😆
ab LALA apni chaal khel raha hai...!!! par humain yakeen hai ki kisi ko kuch nahi hoga...!!! yakeen Raj par ya naina par nahi...balki tum par hai...!!! kyoun ki Raj ko toh tumne kahin chupa rakha hai...aur naina toh chali use dhundhne...ab bacha koun...tumhi na...??? toh phir hum bharosha karen toh kis par kare...??? hamare paas toh tumhare alwa aur koi option bhi nahi hai...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Haan na....maine aur koi Option choda hi kaha hai??? 😛
gunny ko bhi pata chal gaya ki naina aur raj ka rishta vebicol ki tarah majbut hai...tutega nahi....😃!!! gunny aur naina ka plan...jis ki wajah se BC bhi aa gaya maidan me....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
flashback me naina aur Tau jee ki baat baht badhiya thi...!!! matlab ek damm superbbbbbb....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 !!! abhimanyu bhi naina ki help karr raha hai...par naina us par trust nahi karti...yeh sahi hai...lagta hai use bhi allergy hai Abhi se....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Haan....MERI aur TERI tarah !!! Yeh allergy CONTAGIOUS hai...jo koi hamare contact mein aata hai usse hojati hai ! 😛
is ud k sare scenes baht achhe the...naina k scenes...BC ka...gunny aur baki sabhi ka....!!! kisi ek scene ki tarif karna mushkil hai....pura ka pura ud itne achhi tarah se likha gaya tha aur sab k emotions aur sare scenes itne achhe se describe kiye gaye the ki...sirf achha ya baht achha kahna na-insafi hoga...!!! aur hum SHER hai...na-insafi kabhi bardast nahi kar sakte...!!! itna hi kah sakta hun ki...LRL me raj k gayab hone k baad agar yeh sab dikhya gaya hota toh hum me se koi bhi fic nahi likh raha hota...!!! kisi ko TV se furshat hi nahi milti....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Sach mein yaar !!! Achchi khaasi serial ka kabada hogaya !
ab mujhe pata hai ki Raj baht jaldi aa jayega...!!! naina use la kar rahegi...!!! Oyeeeeeeeeeee !!! Naina nahi MAIN !!!!! 😆
main bass raj k bare me naina se itna hi kah sakta hun...'bahki hawa sa tha voh...udti patang sa tha voh...kahan gaya use JALDI dhundho"😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
lo ho gaya aap ka comment...ab toh khush ho na...!!! ab next ud jaldi se post karo...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Meri khushi tere comment se nahi, tere UD padhne bhar se hai !! 😃
tumhara......
Phunsukh Wangdoo😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ( honth ghuma...siti baja...siti baja k bol...Mana "aaalll izzzz wellllll")😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
DEKHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!!! I knew it !!! I SO SO SO KNEW IT !!!! 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Toh ab Lala KMA ko bandh karwaana chahtha hai.............he is such a jerk 😡. Well...i had thought of the word called 'MONSTER' for him...but never mind.😛
ye kab maregaa yaar......... Let RAJ be BACK FROM DEAD first...then.....😉
par hamaare cadets ke hothe hue ye kaise mumkin hoga???vo sab milkar jo kar rahe hai voh sach mein taarif ke aabil hai 👏 👏 👏.
Bilkul...Faculty kuch kare ya na kare, Cadets are there to save their KMA.
aur iss baar toh faculty bhi unnke saath hai. Atleast they are supporting them....
sab milkar ek taraf KMA ko bachaane ki koshish kar rahe hai aur doosri taraf logo mein desh bhakthi ki bhaavnaa bhi jagaa rahe hai.........very good 👏.and the flash back convo between Naina and BC was very very good............Thanks for liking it Siri......
ab pataa nahi ye Naina aur Gunny HQ mein kya karne jaa rahe hai???jaldi bataa do yaar...........Hmmm...Pata chal jayega !! 😛 Shayad aaj hi ...😉


sorry doc,iss baar teri jitni badi updaate meri utni hi choti comment.... adjust karlenaa.........ye bhi main jaldi mein likh rahi hu........pataa hai bohuth pehle hi kardena chahiye tha.........par nahi hua.......agli baar dhyaan rakhungi.................don't mind............. Its okay SIri....Jab main chota UD karungi na, tum badaaaaaaaasa comment kardena, okay??? 😛
Thanks for commenting dear ! 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Mana..... Hi Yogi !!!! 😃
Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 wonderful 👏 👏 👏 👏 superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 part Thank chuuuuu !!!
Ye lala se hum expect hi kya kar sakte hain ...badha aaya KMA ko band karwane..dekho kaun kehraha hain naveen ko traitor ..aur wo apne aap ko samajtha kya hain .. .....ek desh bakht...aur wo stupid sa condition ...i hate him so much...ab main uske bare main baat karke meri time waste nahin karungi... Aanedo Meri raj ko wo usa wo haal karega ki mujhe wo dekhke badha maza ayega...Raj ke liye kitna kaam padha hain... kitne logon ko band bhajana haina. Haaan !!! Ab dekho tumne khud hi sawaal pooche, khud unke jawaab diye aur khud sahi conclusion bhi nikaal diya !!! 😛 😛 😛
Toh mere paas bolne keliye jyaada kuch bachta hai nahi !! SIwaye iske.....YOu are right Yogi !! 😆
our super six academy ko band hone se rokne ki koshish kar rahe hain ..n gunny also supported them ...aur hamara shalini aur suriji to hain hi cadets ko help karne ke liye.. Hope their efforts pay offf and you get to see something amazing...😊
ye abhimayu ne kya sochkar naina se baat karne ki koshish ki.... that naina will ask him to help in this situation ....bahut accha kiya naina usse baatein bhi nhain ki aur na koi help maagne ke liye uske pass gayi..uske sath aise hi karni chahiye. BEchara Abhimanyu !!! 😆 😆 No !! 😡 Not at all BECHARA !!! 😡
Any members for " I hate you Abhimanyu" club ??? !!! 😆 😆 😆
I liked the the cafe scene where Ali alekh n yudi ne sab ko inspire kiya.....very beautifully written dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks again dear !
Loved the way how Naina saved that girl ...awesome scene yaar👏 👏 👏 See my face after reading your compliment 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Naina pe attack ..wo to accha hua gunny time pe aagaya ... gunny n nainas scene is fabulous..n gunny calling Naina partner.... is so nice. I wondered if anyone would like it or not that gunny and Naina pairing for a mission...😕 But ab kya kare? Raj nahi hai na ??!!!
Ye delhi main kya hua tha...Naina itni silent kyun hogayi thi...batade Mana...Raj ke bare main kuch pata chala kya naina ko...sweety pie raj delhi main hain kya ???? ummm...u'll get to know soon....😉
Naina ko BC ne jhat se pehchanliya .....n he is sounding so low.. when naina asked him about rajveer n when he took long time to reply...main sochrahi thi ye BC itna soch kya raha hain ..thank God finally muh khola aur kaha nahin in firm voice. He he he !!! Dont worry...here BC is ' APNA BHIDU ' 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Now naina got BC support also ...too gud
Mana ....i loved the whole update so much yaar...tune itna beautifully likha hain tumhari writtng skills ko main jitna praise karun wo kam hi hoga... Thank you so much Yogi...I am glad you liked it.😊
Ab jaldi se continue kar .....aur raj ko bring back sooooon. Yup !!!
maine bahut late comment ki ..iske liye main sorry bolungi to tu kahegi .. ... ab to ye teri aadat hogayi na late comment karna aur fir sorry kehna 😆 😆 😆 😆 fir bhi chollyyyyyyyyyyyy Arey yaaarr koi baaat nahi !!! 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

Hiiiiiiiiii Preeto !!!! 😃
Part 12:-
The start was awesome with naina's belief that raj will return to her. Yes, she was right. Raj will fulfil his promise in any situation. Yup...coz Raj never breaks the promise made tohis Cadet naina Ah' singh...😊
That Nair is so rude, kabhi nahin sudhrega, bechari naina ko phir se punishment de di, ek baar raj ko vaapis aane do, dekhna iski halat kharab akr dega wo. Nahin to mein hun na, ES me kar dungi aur mere pass to ek solid reason bhi hai na. Haan !!! Tu waha uska band bajana aur main yaha !!! Mazaaa aayega !!! 😃

Ali aur pooja ka roka ho gaya....its too gud. Aur ali ne to ab sharmana bhi kum kar diya, chalo acha hai......Haan...Ab Roka hogaya hai, toh Usool bhaai kam sharmate hai !

but the best part is naina ne in dono ko milwa hi diya, ab wo raj se itna pyaar karti hai to aisa karti hi na, ek pyaar karne wala hi unke pyaar aur uski problem ko samajh sakta hai. Naina ne ali aur pooja ke ghar walon ko phone kar ke sab kuch bata diya aur ache se samjhaya bhi, issiliye wo man gaye aur hamari punjaban aur usool bahi ek ho hi gaye. Naina khud apne pyaar se door hai na...issiliye Pooja ko uska pyaar dilaana chahti hai .

Pooja aur ali sahi the par jo naina ne kaha, usse padh kar mujhe phir se rona aa gaya, usne sach kaha ki aaj wo apne pyaar se door hai isliye wo chahti hai ki pooja aur ali mil jaye, aur finally unki engagement ho hi gayi. Thanks for liking it dear ....😊

Tumne aalekh aur Neelu ko bhi nahin chodha, I am feeling bad for her and she was blaming Aalekh for all. Aur naina ne yahan bhi do pyaar karne walon ki madad ki. Naina ne bahut hi ache se Neelu ko sambhala aur yeh bataya ki agar Neelu ne kisi ko khoya hai to aalekh ne bhi apne farishte ko khoya hai, jiske liye wo bahut kuch karna chahta tha. Aakhir un dono ke beech ki sari problems door ho hi gaye aur wo dono bhi mil gaye. Arey maine kaha kuch kiya? Woh seediyo se gir gayi toh main kya karu???😭😛

Naina ne yudi ko bhi uske pyaar ko samajhne mein koshish ki, dekho doc, ab naina ne itne pyaar karne walon ko milaya hai an tum raj naina ko bhi mila do na please. Haan na! Issiliye toh main usse PUNYA ka KAAM karwa rahi thi ! Ab itne achche kaam karegi toh usse bhi toh uska fal milega na??

Ab sab friends naina ko cheer karna chahte hain. Ab naina ka birthday aa raha hai to uske friends kuch na kuch to karenge hi, m sure for it.
Naina roz raat ko rajveer ke room ke bahar ja kar uski wait karti hai, thats so touching. Raj ke room pe lock dekh kar hi usse rona aa gaya, its so emotional. Wo roz raat ko wahan aati hai, roz wo lock dekh akr uski umeeden tut jati hain,...........mana tunhe mujhe rulane ki than rakhi hai kya? Nahi yaar !! I know tum kyun roti ho ! Soch rahi hogi ki kya bekaar likhti hai aur hai re meri phooti kismat !! Mujhe iska likha padhna padta hai...aur to aur comment bhi karna padta hai ! 😛

She used to draw a line for counting the days she came there and left with a disappointment. I just loved the way u have expressed everything, tears are coming out of my eyes also............The lines really match Naina's condition and I loved that one. Even, shalini used to come there. She wipe her tears and left from there. Am soo sooo sooo glad that u liked it !

The whole part was emotional yaar, please kabhi to mujhe hasa de

Hamesha rulati hi rehti hai. WHAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT ??? 😲 😲

Aur me YM ki baat nahin kar rahi, mein updates ki baat kar rahi hun.......... haaan ! Phir theek hai ! 😛

Take care, ab mein baki 2 parts pe bhi comment kar du na Haan !! Kar !!!

Luv Preet

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Originally posted by: preet09

Part 13: -
Naina to dar gayi pooja ko uske bed par na dekh ke, par usse thodhi na pata ahi ki yeh sab to uske surprise ke liye kiya ja raha hai. Tumne bahut ache se suspense create kiya hai yaar, bechari naina to bahut dar gayi. You liked it??? 😃
Pehle naina ko visitors room le ke gayi, then tum usse foyer ki taraf le ke gayi, bechari ko uske birthday se pehle kitna bhagaya tumne yaar. Chalo, aakhir tumhe us par taras aa hi gaya, aur finally usse surprise de hi diya.....aur surprise se zyada badha usse shok de diya. No waysssss !!! Woh Surprise hi tha !!! 😛 Dekha Naina bhi khush huyi uske friends ka pyaar dekhke !! 😃
Sab ne naina ke is surprise me part liya, Aur huda ki nautanki to yahan bhi band nahin hui par thank God, aalekh ne usse rok diya, varna sari celebration huda ki nautanki me hi khatam ho jati. Ab Hudagiri ke bina Huda achcha nahi lagta na? 😛

Pehle pooja ne is bare me socha nahin aur baad me naina ke samne aane se bhi dar rahi thi, ab aisa to hona hi tha kyunki hum sab naina ke gusse ko bahut ache se jante hain na. Aur pooja ne sara blame huda pe dhal diye, the from huda to aalekh which then passes on to yudi and then to ali. OMG tumne usse phir se bhagana shoro kar diya yaar. Itna to wo sari zindagi em nahin bhaagi hogi jitna usse tunhe ek part me bhaga diya. Aisa kaise keh sakti ho tum??? Yaad hai Jab Naina Raj ko dhundne jungle me gayi thi....aur tab jab REd box ke peeche bhaagne ke baad Raj gayab hogaya tha...aur Naina Pooja, Ali, aur Huda ke saath usse dhundne keliye bhaagi thi ??? Tab Kitnaaaaaaaaaaaa bhaagi thi Naina !!! Infact main toh kahungi ki Naina ko RAJ ne hi sabse jyaada bhagaya hai ! 😆 😆 😆

But thanks to shalini yeh bhagam bhaag band hui aur celebration bhi shoro ho gayi....
But Naveen aur raj ki yaad hamesha uske saath hai, issi liye to usse vahan par Naveen ke hone ka ehsaas hua.....the song u have choosen and the way u have explained everything was just awesome yaar, me pehle bhi bahut baar bol chuki hun....par phir se kheti hun ki I am ur fan, when it comes to ur writing styles aur vese bhi to tu meri sweetest friend hai hi........kyun? Haan main tumhari Sweetest friend toh hoon !! 😃 ummm About i being your fav...ummm....well main kya kahoon???

Cake cut karne ke time bhi usse Naveen aur raj ka ehsaas hua, iska matlab to yehi hai na hum jin logon se pyaar karte hain........wo chahe humse door ho yan humhare pass, par unka ehsaas hamesha hamare saath rehta hai, har gham me aur har khushi me, jeevan ke har modh mein. Bilkul !!! 😊

Now, that was nice, she got a chit from raj as we all know that he is the only one who call her as cadet naina ah singh.........m so happy, luv u for this mana. he he he !! 🤗

Par is khushi me bhi naina ki aankhon me aanso bhar diye, par uyeh aanso khushi ke bi the kyunki usse pata chal gaya ki uske rajveer sir bilkul theek hain.
Naina ne apni is prob ke bare me aalekh ko bataya, wo bhi khush tha par uska dar bhi sahi hai, yeh lala ki chal bhi ho sakti hain kyunki wo naina ko dukh pohanchane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Par usne bilkul sahi kaha ki dil hamesha sahi hota hai, its too correct. Jaise ki yeh chit raj ne hi bhejhi hai.

Naina aur aalekh ne yen baat kisi se karni zaruri nahin samjhi aur unke yeh decidon bilkul sahi tha, kyunki wo nair hai na, uske hote unhe bahut sambhal kar kaam akrne ki zarurat hai. Aur bunty chaubey ka yahan aana ek bahut acha sanket hai, aur mera ishara tot um samajh rahi ho na, ddekh rahi ho na. Dekh toh rahi hoon yaar....parrr...kuch samajh nahi aaraha ! 😛 😛 😆

Aur naina aur uske friends ke pass kuch clues bhi hain but they r not suffiecien, mujhe pata hai naina aur uske friends sab clues jaldi hi ikhate kar lenge. Aur ab mein chalti hun next part par. Chalo chalo ! 😃

Luv Preet

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