Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01)

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Hey good that u updated the fic.😊
Nice first part n i know it will take a sweet turn after that.😛
I really liked the concept that u shown Naveen's dead body fully burnt so may be he is still alive.😉
continue asap.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Hey nice start...!!!
I like the fact that Naveen 's dead face was severely damaged...!!!! I see hope...!!!!
Oh I felt bad for Abhi, having to say those words...!!!!
Cant wait for the next update...!!!
Pls PM me...!!!!

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Nice character sketch!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏thanx....

Navin's body was completely damaged and they had recognised it only because it had Navin's taveez and kada!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina had cried a lot seeing these things!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She now treasured these things as they were most precious to her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Poor Naina!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Navin's dead body with damaged face used to haunt her!!!!!!

I am sure Navin is alive and that wasn't his body at all!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊well how can u be so sure dear????😛

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: rituka7
damn cool
]awesome
superb
update soon

Thanks a ton rituka...😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Prologue was nice. Cud feel the pain of Raj's death again (it may hurt but u did a gr8 job). And u portrayed Naina's agony really well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.

Thanx sumaiya😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: hinal60
that was a wonderful prolouge
i hope we get to see both rajveer and naveen soon

Rajveer ok...i hav bring him any how or u ppl will stop readin fic😛 but naveen????😕

Edited by manatated - 16 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: veersherafan1
Very nice character sketch and prologue👏.Very very wonderful start.
Keep it up dear.

thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was too good
loved it completely especially vo Navin ki dead body vali baat in this fic he will be alive na so sweet

plz continue soon

arrey...why r u ppl considern Naveen alive??? Thanks 4 likin da update😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: srojaleen
veri nyc charachter sketch...👏 👏 👏 👏

chalo kuch doubts toh tumne clear kar hi diya hai ki...Naveen zinda hai...😃!!! mera matlab hai ki face agar damaged hai toh 150% chances hain naveen k zinda hone ki...😃!!! yeh achha hua...👏!!! kisi fic me toh naveen zinda hai...😃!!! varna hum toh sabhi use maarne k chakkar me hi rahte hain.
😭

Arrey yaar...sabko kyun lag raha hai ki naveen zinda hai??? zinda rakhke kaunse jhande gaadne hai usse?😆 Ab ritu toh hai nahi usske saath pair karne....Main yamraj se Raj ke praan wapas laau wohi kaafi nahi hai kya tum logo ke liye???😆 Maine woh face damage and haunt waali baat issliye likhi thi kyunki mujhe Naina ko koi psychiatric problm batana tha...😛😆😆