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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Mana....
Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 Awesome part 👏 👏 👏 👏
Nainas friends gave her really a beautiful surprise
Naina to pehle pooja ko apne bed pe naa dekhke surprised thi n after that when she saw the blood n chit she is shocked... i loved the way how she cracked all the codes n finally entered in to the mess.... Mana u have written so nicely that part..aur huda ki nauntanki ..aur alekh ka daant for huda about forgetting the lines...n after that sab ek dusre ko blame karna ...i loved every bit
Yay hamare pyare rajveer sir ka darshan hogaya i mean naina ki dreams main hi sahi ..the lyrics of the song u choosen for that situation perfectly suited n naina enjoying the climate changes in a single moment with her rajveer sir....fabulous
Naina ka wish hi hamara wish bhi hain....Naina ka birthday aur rajveer sir wish na kare aise kabhi hosaktha hain....naina saying u care for me sir....naina to bahut khush hogayi hain ....aur saath saath hum sab bhi khush us chit ko dekhke
Naina n alekh scene is so nice..naina is thinking right..what if the hand writting expert is also lalas man...sahi time pe Bunty jee ka entry hogaya
ye last main tune kya likha...stars were not on their side....iska kya matlab hain..ab aur kya honewala hain
the whole update is so beautiful dear
Ek baath aur maine apni ankhen padh padh ke dekhi thi is update ko .....to mujhe iski size chota laga yaar when i compared the size with your previous written note 😆 😆 😆
Kya hua aise ghur kyun rahe ho screen ko ..mujhe dandhe se maarne ka mann kar raha haina.....just kidding ....u have posted really a long update... so thank u so much dear for the long update🤗 🤗 🤗
hum aasha karte hain ki aap agla update jaldi post karenge aur wo bhi aise hi long wala
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Mana..............Hey Debs ! 😃


Ab mai soch rahi hun ki apni feelings tujh tak kaise pahunchaun... DTDC ya Blue dart se ! 😆 😆 😆 Guaranteed courrier service !! 😆 ohk okay ! Sorry ! 😛
tu agar saamne hoti na to tujhe ek badi si jhappi de deti... par ab yahan isse hi kaam chalana padega...
🤗 Thank uuuuu !! 😃 Same for you too ! 🤗
Aur ye isliye kyunki tu Naina ka character badi hi khubsurati se shape kar rahi hai... Her metamorphosis is so beautiful and so extremely realistic that I don't have words to thank or praise you enough for that...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 awwww...thank you soooooo much dear ! I badly wanted to change her character, you know that ! 😛 But since this one is a continuation fic, change in her character would have been very difficult to digest..... I was pretty anxious about how to do it ! But when you said this, I am feeling like my efforts paid up a bit ! 😊😊 😊 😊

Okay okay... I will start from the beginning... Naina's friends had planned a surprise birthday party... indeed what a surprise it was... matlab koi need se uthe aur apne dost ko gayab dekhe aur saath me khun ki boonde to aache aachon ki dil ki dhaadkan ruk jaaye... Aur wo clues bahut mast the.,.. par mujhe wo bhuk lagi hai wala clue padhke itni haasi aa rahi thi na... yaar ye kidnapper bhi bada bhukkad hai...😆😆😆 Aur handwriting forge karne ka kaam Ali ke alawa aur kar hi kaun sakta hai... Thanks for liking it dear ! Yeah...that was the idea...Neend se uthte hi jhatka miley ! Warna otherwise toh naina apni life mein itneeeey jhatke khaa chuki hai ki usse koi farak nahi padta ! 😆 And yaa....kyunki mastermind Huda aur Aalekh the....bhukkad toh hone hi the na !! 😆 😆 Aur rahi baat Ali ki...toh usse toh Captain aur Naina bhi maaf kar chuke hai ! Ab tu bhi karde yaar ! 😆 😆 😆 Woh ALI hai, Abhi thodi na hai !😆 😆


Naina aur uske doston ki 'tom and jerry' race badi hi pyaari thi... saare ke saare shaitan hai... and Naina was remembering her brother as well as her LOVe - her Rajveer... The song you chose was so very nice for the situation... Yaar Naina ki birthday wish hum sabki wish hai... to I know ki wo jaldi hi puri hogi... yup !! I too hope so !! sorry...I Know so !! 😃


Aur tune bilkul sahi kiya hai... Raj ke wishes ke bagair Naina ka birthday kabhi pura nahi ho sakta... Naina ## Singh... haaiiiiiiiiiiii... Yaaden tazaa ho gayi...😍 you liked it na? Thanks ! 😊


Naina ab kaafi kuch sochne aur samajhne lagi hai... handwriting expert se jaanch karwani hai... but even I was thinking ki kya sabut hoga iss baat ka ki handwriting expert Lala se nahi mila hoga... aur thik time pe allah ki rehmat... nahi nahi... mana ki rehmat se Buntyji ki entry ho gayi...👏👏👏 Bunty khud handwriting expert hai aur usse bhi writing dekh kar jhatka laga... And even he noticed how lovingly and carefully she took the chit back... ab to sabko khabar ho rahi hai yaar... hmmm.....kistaraf hai aasmaan,kistaraf zameen...errm iski toh khabar hai....par kis taraf RAJ hai, abhi iss baat ki khabar nahi ! 😆 😆 😆


Bas ab yahi dua hai ki Raj jaldi se wapas aa jaye... Aur RN kik meeting jaldi hi ho jaaye.....Hope teri dua jaldihi rang laaye !! 😛
And I hope when u said that stars were not in there favour, you were not thinking of creating some new problems for them... But I would love to see Naina rise up to the challenge... So continue soon or else mai bhi dhamki department join kar lungi... Actually by that i meant 'That' only....New problems will be coming her way....jaise ki maine kaha, usse bahot mushkilo se gujarna hoga, tabhi toh Raj milega ! And I am glad you would like to see her rise up to the challenge, which she definitely will !!😃
And no need for you to join DHAMKII dept....I myself want to continue soon, coz....
you may call it as my gratitude for the loving and kind support and belief of you people in me and my idea of the story, I want to bring Raj back early !
And as you know very well, with the time I am getting busier with my work and wont be able to update that regularly...or leave alone update, come here on IF regularly....so before that happens, i want to pace up the fic.
You must have noticed that i started replying to the comments also....
so, once the reservations end, i'll be updating the fic ! 😊 Coz Update is " almost " ready...just "before" update EDITING remaining...jo ki jabtak main Update post na karu chalti rahegi ! 😆 😆 😆


Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooooooooome..
superb..
gr8.......
rocking......
fantabulous...
excellent.........
wonderful...
lovely.......
fabulous......
just too good...
and thanx for the pm........

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a ton , Preeti !!! 😃 😃 😃
And you are most welcome dear !! Its my pleasure sending you a pm ! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Mana....Hiiiiiiii Yogi !!! 😃
Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 Awesome part 👏 👏 👏 👏 Oh ! Thank uuuuuuuuuu soooooo much dear !! 😃
Nainas friends gave her really a beautiful surprise. You liked it?? Thanks !! 😊
Naina to pehle pooja ko apne bed pe naa dekhke surprised thi n after that when she saw the blood n chit she is shocked... i loved the way how she cracked all the codes n finally entered in to the mess.... Mana u have written so nicely that part..aur huda ki nauntanki ..aur alekh ka daant for huda about forgetting the lines...n after that sab ek dusre ko blame karna ...i loved every bit. Awwww... Thank you sooooo sooooo much dear !! I am glad you liked it ! 😃
Yay hamare pyare rajveer sir ka darshan hogaya i mean naina ki dreams main hi sahi ..the lyrics of the song u choosen for that situation perfectly suited n naina enjoying the climate changes in a single moment with her rajveer sir....fabulous . Thanks a ton again Yogi ! That song is one of my favourites ! And believe me nobody would have as happy as I was, as the song could fit the situation ! 😊 And I am glad that you too liked the song ! Thanks again ! 😊
Naina ka wish hi hamara wish bhi hain....Naina ka birthday aur rajveer sir wish na kare aise kabhi hosaktha hain....naina saying u care for me sir....naina to bahut khush hogayi hain ....aur saath saath hum sab bhi khush us chit ko dekhke. Galat !! I guess Naina se JYAADA hum log khush hai uss chit ko dekhke , right??! 😃 And you are right....Naina ka birthday aur Rajveer wish na kare? I was curious about how to make that happen, as Captain saab khud chalkar toh aa nahi sakte na? Phir socha, apna " Postal Dept." kis dinn kaam ayega? 😛
Naina n alekh scene is so nice..naina is thinking right..what if the hand writting expert is also lalas man...sahi time pe Bunty jee ka entry hogaya.
ye last main tune kya likha...stars were not on their side....iska kya matlab hain..ab aur kya honewala hain. Jaise ki maine kaha, Naina ko bahot mushkilo se gujarna hai...Woh kya hai na, maine apne fic mein filhaal Raj ko rest di hai...aur saara workload Naina pe daala hai...kya karu? Yeh ladki agar khaali bithao, toh phir koi museebat khadi kar degi ! Issliye better hai usse busy rakhu ! 😆 😆 😆
the whole update is so beautiful dear Awwwww !!! Thanks !!! And I loved that emoticon...specially coz it was for me ! 😉 😉 😉
Ek baath aur maine apni ankhen padh padh ke dekhi thi is update ko .....to mujhe iski size chota laga yaar when i compared the size with your previous written note 😆 😆 😆 Jaise ki maine pehle kaha...main bechari abla naari yaha chupchap baithi hoon...aao jisse aana hai aur meri taang kheencho ! 😆 😆😆 😆 Achcha ek baat bata .... Kahi tu bhi Priya ki tarah Dr.Mishra ke paas hi toh nahi jaati na , eye check up karwaane ??? 😲 😲
Kya hua aise ghur kyun rahe ho screen ko ..mujhe dandhe se maarne ka mann kar raha haina..... Tujhe dande se maarungi toh comment kaun karega ? 😛 😛Aur toh aur, do you think i can afford, losing one friend cum supporter cum reader cum( aur bhi bahooot "cums" hai...😆) of mine??? naaahhhh !!! 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆
just kidding ....u have posted really a long update... so thank u so much dear for the long update🤗 🤗 🤗 You are Welcome dear...(for 2/3 more updates ONLY !!! 😆 😆 😆 PHir tum apna as usual dialogue...'Kitna chota Update hai...' bolna shuru kar sakte ho ! 😆 😆 😆)
hum aasha karte hain ki aap agla update jaldi post karenge aur wo bhi aise hi long wala. I will be updating soon...bass yeh reservations khatam ho jaye ! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Superb part...rocking.
All her friends have planned to give naina a suprise birthday party🥳.Thye are sure that she would have completely forgotten her birthday. How could they not....after everything that she has done for all of them. 😊
Naina is worried about pooja all the while she follows the chits that she finds at different places in the acedemy solving the puzzles written in them...and finding clues that each leads to. 😲
But the surprise that she gets in the end completely shocks her...she is greatful to have such friends. She knows that they want her to be happy. But then she pretends to be angry at them for scaring her...and it was very funny to see ech on them blaming the other...😉
At first naina is shocked to see the anonymus note but once she recongnises the hand wrtting she is thrilled...for she knows that only he calls her Naina Ah Singh. Shalini is still not sure and wanrs naina to be careful.😊 Naina shares this with Alekh and even he is surprised. He wants to have the hand writing tested just to be sure. But naina is afraid that Lala would somehow find out. 😲
Naina is happy to meet Bunty and feels her hope of finding Raj alive strengthen even more. Bunty is upset to see naina's weak condition and promises to help her in every possible way. 😊
Naina and her friends are busy with their training...and collecting information against nair. They are Raj's cadets who will never give up and will prove Raj innocent.
waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome part. loved it. loved the birthday celebration of naina.Their friendship is really good.
iye jis tarah naina ko mess tak le aayi oh sab then huda iye lerka humesha kuch na kuch galati karta .
alekhe ka gussa hone.
phir puja se lekar ali tak sab ek doosre ko dikhana meine nehi usne iye kya iye bahut accha tha, loved their bonding.
suri jee ka cake make karna and then shalini madam ka bhi sath dena late night party mein.
Then next day oh chit aana, it's raj aur koi nehi hain and naina understand it but naina sahi bhi hain uske sath destiny ne jo exam liya hain aab kisi pe trust nehi kar sakti easily,
shalini samajh nehi paayi chit ka matlab but naina got the msg.
Naina ne alekh ko iss baarein bola but he also don't recognize it but after naina told him he understand it but still have some doubt.
Wow, bunty chaube is back and naina meet him.
Brilliant update.
continue soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Superb part...rocking. Thanks a ton Nisha. 😊
All her friends have planned to give naina a suprise birthday party🥳.Thye are sure that she would have completely forgotten her birthday. How could they not....after everything that she has done for all of them. 😊 Yes...she had done so much for them and they want to make her birthday special for her !
Naina is worried about pooja all the while she follows the chits that she finds at different places in the acedemy solving the puzzles written in them...and finding clues that each leads to. 😲
But the surprise that she gets in the end completely shocks her...she is greatful to have such friends. She knows that they want her to be happy. But then she pretends to be angry at them for scaring her...and it was very funny to see ech on them blaming the other...😉 i am glad you liked it dear ! Thanks a lot again !😃
At first naina is shocked to see the anonymus note but once she recongnises the hand wrtting she is thrilled...for she knows that only he calls her Naina Ah Singh. Shalini is still not sure and wanrs naina to be careful.😊 Naina shares this with Alekh and even he is surprised. He wants to have the hand writing tested just to be sure. But naina is afraid that Lala would somehow find out. 😲 naina has faced so much that she doesnt want to take any chances...though she is sure that He is Raj...
Naina is happy to meet Bunty and feels her hope of finding Raj alive strengthen even more. Bunty is upset to see naina's weak condition and promises to help her in every possible way. 😊 Afterall Bunty knows a lot about naina and also how close she was to Rajveer and he respects Rajveer a lot ! So he gotta help her !
Naina and her friends are busy with their training...and collecting information against nair. They are Raj's cadets who will never give up and will prove Raj innocent.
waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon. I will....😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
finally Naina atleast get sum hint about Rajveer...i really hope she will soon find out RAJ n now choubey bhi uske saath hai.
waiting for next part..egerly.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Manaa behchaari Naina ka neend haraam kar ke khud so rahi hai chain se........He he he !!! 😆 😆 😆kisiki neend haraam ho ya na ho, main chain se sona pasand karti hoon ! 😛
pehle se Raj laapataa hai ab jaakar thodi neend aayi toh usse bhi tu ne surprise party keh kar cheen liyaa......poor Naina.....usse usska writer thik se sone bhi nahi dethi........Arey sone ke liye toh poori zindagi padi hai....par usse uska WRITER itne pyaare aur achche achche surprises toh deti hai na?? AUr to aur, uske WRITER ne uske RAJVEER Sir ko bhi safe jagah sambhalkar rakha hai 😛 yeh kya kam hai kya? 😛 Ab tum hi bolo....itniiiii CARING writer usko kaha se milegi? 😉
aur oopar se ek surprise ke liye itne bade jhatke........pareshaan kar ke rakh diyaa hai bachchi ko........Uske bachpan mein shayad usne "Treasure hunt " khela na ho....issliye main uski yeh khwaish poori kar rahi thi....😛 Kya hai na, filhaal Raj toh hai nahi uski khwaishe poori karne keliye...toh mujhe hi karna padega na yeh kaaam...😛 😛 😛 😛
tu ne bhi aur usske doston ne bhi..... waise sab ke sab ek number ke nautanki hai.........koi kisise kam nahi.......masti mein bhi aur dosti mein bhi........the surprise party was good.......aur usse bhi jyaada achchaa woh part tha jab Naina Navin aur Rajveer ko apne saath mehsoos kar rahi thi.........it was beautiful..........the change of climates she experienced......it was a lovely feeling.........true she can live her full life in just one moment with Rajveer by her side.......Thanks for liking it dear !! 😊 Really happy to know that , you liked it !😊


toh Rajveer ne letter bheja hai........ab jab ki Manaa ne usse abhi aane se manaa kar diyaa toh kya kartha........apne pyaar ko Happy Birthday jo wish karnaa tha naa........issliye ye raastha nikaalaa hai.😆😆😆
Maine hi usse yeh IDEA diya...kya hain na, isse Saap bhi maraa , aur Laathi bhi nahi tooti ! 😛

waise Naina aur Aalekh dono hi kaafi smart hai.........aur hoshiyaar bhi.itne dhoke khaane ke baad itni asaani se firse kisibhi cheez par vishwaas karnaa mushkil hi hotha hai aur ye dono bhi issi liye uljhan mein hai Rajveer ke letter ko lekar.....par fir bhi unhe hope hai ki ye letter Rajveer ka hi hoga......hmmmmm...


hey Manaa,tum ne Choubey ko waapas laayaa........very good.I really liked his character though it was a small one.it has its importance as Rajveer always turned to him whenever he needed something.Yaaah...Me too liked his character...Raj ke SERIOUS character ke contrast mein he used to add little bit comedy...plus he was all accomplished to do all the impossible and important things for him....
par ye Choubey sach mein apne aap wahaa aayaa hai ya fir Rajveer ne hi usse wahaa bhejaa hai wahaa ke haalaath jaanne ke liye?sochne waali baat hai........par agar usse pataa hotha toh usse letters check karne ki toh jaroorath nahi hothi naa.hmmm.......aur ab jab usse pataa chal gayaa hai ki ye letter Rajveer ki hi hai toh voh ye baat Naina ko bataata kyun nahi?ruk kyun gayaa?par apni Naina toh hai hi smart, samajh gayi vo ki Choubey kuch chupaa rahaa hai.......Ab CHaubey khud waha aaya hai, ya Raj ne bheja hai, yeh toh baad mein pata chalega ...Aur haan...Naina itni SMART toh ho hi gayi hai, ki she understood Chaubey was hiding from her...


ab ye kya Manaa.....abhi tak toh sab thik tha na fir ye kya hai..... kya matlab hai ki stars are not on their side?ab aisa kya karne waali hai tu innke saath?pataa nahi kya karegi ye ladki.......dekhthe hai kya hotha hai............jaldi kar Manaa......... Hmmm...Have you heard something like " SOne ko jitnaa aag mein tapao, woh nikhar uthta hai...."..something similar happening with Naina.....May be , it will serve as the way for Raj's return.... AND ya...as i told bfore, I'll be Updating soon...😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Awesome part. loved it. loved the birthday celebration of naina.Their friendship is really good. Thanks a ton Rakhi... 😊 😊 😊

iye jis tarah naina ko mess tak le aayi oh sab then huda iye lerka humesha kuch na kuch galati karta .
alekhe ka gussa hone.
phir puja se lekar ali tak sab ek doosre ko dikhana meine nehi usne iye kya iye bahut accha tha, loved their bonding.
suri jee ka cake make karna and then shalini madam ka bhi sath dena late night party mein. Am glad you liked it ! 😊 After Naina did so much for them, it was their turn to cheer her up on her birthday ! And so they did all the planning...but Huda, as usual messing it up ! And so Aalekh got to scold him ! 😊


Then next day oh chit aana, it's raj aur koi nehi hain and naina understand it but naina sahi bhi hain uske sath destiny ne jo exam liya hain aab kisi pe trust nehi kar sakti easily,
shalini samajh nehi paayi chit ka matlab but naina got the msg. Afterall it was meant for Naina ! Toh uske alawa koi aur samajh bhi kaise sakta hai, hai na? 😊

Naina ne alekh ko iss baarein bola but he also don't recognize it but after naina told him he understand it but still have some doubt.
Wow, bunty chaube is back and naina meet him.
Brilliant update. Thanks again Rakhi !😊

continue soon. I will....😊


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