Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 48

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

damnn cool
superb
great part
update soon.........

Thanks Rituka ! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

loved it completely
plz continue soon

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
dear ! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

mana fantastic up sab ne mil kar n ka birthday celebrate kia its very nice and naveen part was so nostalgic raj ko n ko birthday wishes bejaa aacha haai

plz cont soon

Thanks a lot Ria....πŸ˜ƒ Glad that you liked the update ! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ammuakhi

hey mana . Hey Ammu !
wonderful update . Thanks yaar!
naina's b'day suprise was very good
and the letter was really amazing
amazing update dear. Thanks a ton again dear !
loved reading it . Am glad that you liked it.😊
cont soon. I will try to update soon...
tc
ammu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow
superb update. Thanks madhu !
Naina ka birthday celebration bohut hi accha laga. Thanks again...😊
to Rajveer ko laane ki taiyaari tumne shuru kardi. hmmm....kya kare, bahot taiyyari karne padegi na Captain saab ki entry ki....πŸ˜‰ toh abhi se shuru kardi hai maine...😊
subh kaam main deri kaisi, jaldi RN ko mila do. haan....sure!😊
mindblowing update. Thanks again..
loved it
u rocked dear
great going. Thanks a zillion for all the wonderful compliments...😊
plz continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Mana..............

Ab mai soch rahi hun ki apni feelings tujh tak kaise pahunchaun... tu agar saamne hoti na to tujhe ek badi si jhappi de deti... par ab yahan isse hi kaam chalana padega...
πŸ€— Aur ye isliye kyunki tu Naina ka character badi hi khubsurati se shape kar rahi hai... Her metamorphosis is so beautiful and so extremely realistic that I don't have words to thank or praise you enough for that...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Okay okay... I will start from the beginning... Naina's friends had planned a surprise birthday party... indeed what a surprise it was... matlab koi need se uthe aur apne dost ko gayab dekhe aur saath me khun ki boonde to aache aachon ki dil ki dhaadkan ruk jaaye... Aur wo clues bahut mast the.,.. par mujhe wo bhuk lagi hai wala clue padhke itni haasi aa rahi thi na... yaar ye kidnapper bhi bada bhukkad hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Aur handwriting forge karne ka kaam Ali ke alawa aur kar hi kaun sakta hai...

Naina aur uske doston ki 'tom and jerry' race badi hi pyaari thi... saare ke saare shaitan hai... and Naina was remembering her brother as well as her LOVe - her Rajveer... The song you chose was so very nice for the situation... Yaar Naina ki birthday wish hum sabki wish hai... to I know ki wo jaldi hi puri hogi...

Aur tune bilkul sahi kiya hai... Raj ke wishes ke bagair Naina ka birthday kabhi pura nahi ho sakta... Naina ## Singh... haaiiiiiiiiiiii... Yaaden tazaa ho gayi...😍

Naina ab kaafi kuch sochne aur samajhne lagi hai... handwriting expert se jaanch karwani hai... but even I was thinking ki kya sabut hoga iss baat ka ki handwriting expert Lala se nahi mila hoga... aur thik time pe allah ki rehmat... nahi nahi... mana ki rehmat se Buntyji ki entry ho gayi...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Bunty khud handwriting expert hai aur usse bhi writing dekh kar jhatka laga... And even he noticed how lovingly and carefully she took the chit back... ab to sabko khabar ho rahi hai yaar...

Bas ab yahi dua hai ki Raj jaldi se wapas aa jaye... Aur RN kik meeting jaldi hi ho jaaye... And I hope when u said that stars were not in there favour, you were not thinking of creating some new problems for them... But I would love to see Naina rise up to the challenge... So continue soon or else mai bhi dhamki department join kar lungi...

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesooooooooooome..
superb..
gr8.......
rocking......
fantabulous...
excellent.........
wonderful...
lovely.......
fabulous......
just too good...
and thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

yeppi..... PM se pahle reservation. Yeah yeah...yippie !!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
aaj kal mere specs thik se kaam nahi karr rahe hain...lagta hai...phir se no badal gaya hai...!!! Agar iss rate se tera number badalne laga , toh woh din dur nahi jab tu " Jassi " jaise specs pehen ne lag jayegi ! 😑
dr Mishra(meri eye specialist)... TABHI !!!! πŸ˜ƒ Ab ITNIIII gr8888 doc se apne aankhein check karwaogi, toh i am surprised ki tere no. itni late kaise badalte hai?? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› ki ankhen bhi kharab ho gayi hain...unhe lagta hai ki mera no thik hai...!!! Hey ram !!! Ab yahi sun na baaki tha !!! Uski apni aankhein kharab hai aur tu uski " Kharab " eyes se apne eyes check karwa rahi hai ! 😲
agar mera no thik hai toh Dr mana k uds mujhe eej kal lengthy kyoun lag rahe hain...aur font size bhi 4 se aage nahi badh raha hai...ab toh lagta hai AIIMS me admit hona padega...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ugggghhhhhhh !!! 😑 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
chal thik hai...aur khinchai nahi karti....!!! Dhanyawaad !!!!πŸ˜†
kya karun...aadat se majbur hun...!!! I know....πŸ˜†
subah se upset thi...ohhh !!! Kya hua?
thik se kisi se baat bhi nahi ki thi...isiliye socha tujh par hi dil khali karti hun...!!! vaise bhi tu toh hamesha taiyaar rahti hai meri baat sunn ne k liye...πŸ˜›!!! bichari Mana aur karr bhi kya sakti hai...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Haan !!! Main bichari aur kar bhi kya sakti hoon?πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ab UD par aate hain...πŸ˜ƒ hmmm...
RNsRNuRNpRNeRNrRNbRN nRN mRNiRNnRNdRNbRNlRNoRNwRNiRNnRNgπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
kuch samajh me aaya...πŸ˜›??? nahi na...πŸ˜›??? oyeeeeee !!! madam !!! Meri samajh mein aagaya !!! πŸ˜› And TRNHRNARNRNNRNKRNSRN ARN TRNORNNRN !!! πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
toh RN ko hata kar jo small letters me likha hai padh le...agar phir bhi samajh me na aaye toh...paas jo tere diwar hai us par apna saar patak de...jab taare dikhai denge tab pata toh chal hi jayega...πŸ˜† He he he !! mujhe uski zaroorat nahi !πŸ˜›
naina k sath jo surprise party hui ...voh kisi ek kaam toh ho hi nahi sakta tha...!!! sab ka barabar ka hissa raha hoga...!!! ab us k dost jo hain...naina me aqal kaam hai par us k frnds k paas baht hai...achha fashaya us ko...!!! ek k baad ek paper use dete gaye...aur Rajveer sir ki fav cadet use padhte hue bhagti gayi...finally ek beautiful surprise k sath voh ullu bani...aisa surprise ki us k saar k upar se hi gujar gaya...πŸ˜ƒ huh?? Surprise uske sar ke uparse gujar gaya? πŸ˜• nahi toh ! anyways....meri itni samajh mein aaya ki tumhe yeh pasand aaya ! πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
dekha...maine kaha tha na...ki cake bilkul bhi achha nahi bana hoga...naina bhi dekh...cake kaat ne se pahle senti ho gayi...!!! Arey nahi !! cake toh bahooooot achcha bana tha....Sllllupppp !!! πŸ˜› Naina toh yeh sochke dukhi ho rahi thi ki itnaaaaaaa tasty cake Raj aur Naveen ne miss kar diya !! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
use bhi voh sab dikhai dene laga ...jo us k paas hai hi nahi...!!! ab naraz mat ho...kaha na mann kharab hai...aur jab main jyada dukhi hoti hun toh jyada bakwaas karti hun...!!!πŸ˜ƒ Aaahhhhh....that i know ! πŸ˜‰
yeh scene mujhe sab se jyada achha laga tha...wid d song...!!! maine nahi suna tha ise kabhi bhi...!!! par is k lyrics kafi khubsurat the...her ek emotion ko describe kar rahe the...!!! in fact mujhe yeh scene kuch itna achha laga ki maine khud imagine kiya tha...ki kaisa hua hoga is scene me...n maine finally Raj ko dekha...!!! chalo koi baat nahi...tere fic me na sahi...mere imagination me toh raj tha na...πŸ˜ƒ Bolo bhaai bolo !!! Sab aake mujhe kuch na kuch bolo !!! Jaante ho na, ki main " Raj jald hi waapis aayega" , iske siwaa aur kuch nahi keh sakti....issliye bol lo jitna bhi bolna hai ! udaalo mera mazaak jitna bhi udaana hai ! Kheencho meri taang jitni bhi kheenchni hai ! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
us song k dauran Rn ka scene aur song end hone k baad...raj, naveen aur naina ka scene...mera fav tha...πŸ˜ƒ...kuch anshun...kuch mushkaan...perfect mixture tha....πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Thanks a ton yaar !πŸ˜ƒ
okkk...ab aate hain us 'chit-fund' mamle par...!!! pura GHAPLA kar diya...!!! raj ko le kar alekh ko doubt hai...bunty ko doubt hai...naina 50-50 biscuit k sath hai...!!! aur hum Mana k sath apna saar peet rahe hain...
Arey ab kaheka confusion? 😲 Aalekh ko doubt nahi hai....he trusts Naina's judgement, but he is just playing safe. Bunty KO BHI DOUBT NAHI HAI !!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† I guess mere likhne mein thodi gadbadi hogayi! Bunty is trying to hide what he realised from Naina....AND NAINA IS 100% sure, but she trusts Aalekh's advice of having staunch proof of her belief ! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
naina ka doubt karna sahi hai...kitne sare dhoke khaye hain us ne...ab aise kaise jaldi voh kisi par yakeen kar legi...par sach bhi hai ki 'dil hamesha sach kahta hai'...jaisa ki mera dil tere bare me kahta hai...aur tu aaj tak deny karti aa rahi hai...khiar koi baat nahi...kabhi na kabhi toh sachhai bahat aa hi jayegi...naina k samne bhi aur mere samne bhi...πŸ˜ƒ MAIN CHUP RAHUNGI !!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
sabhi raj ko dhudh rahe hain...reader...writer...par akhir Raj hai kahan...??? jawab yeh hai ki ek doc ki fic me hero hoga toh kahan hoga...obviously hospital me...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜† Haan kya????!!! 😍 You mean hamesha MERI aankhon ke saamne??? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
par chalo koi baat nahi...kam se kam naina ko ek umeed ki kiran toh dikhai di...!!! naina ko kahan pata hai ki raj ki entry 4-5 episode k baad honewala hai...yeh toh is fic k mahan writer ne humain pahle bata diya...varna hum bhi andheron me danda ghumate rahte...ki yahan ya toh Raj hoga ya phir Mana...jis par danda pade saar us ka...jeet apni...πŸ˜† He he he !!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† That one was supeeerrrrrbbbbb !!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
hey...main koi force nahi karr rahi hun Raj ko jaldi lane k liye...kyoun ki mujhe pata hai ki tu apne vaade k paaki hai...aur raj jarur aayega...!!! vaise bhi yeh RN fic hai toh Raj kaisa na aayega...??? mujhe bass teri khinchai karna achha lagta hai...aur agar tujhe bura lage toh 'SORRYYYYYY"πŸ˜ƒ Its okay bolu??? Bolu ya na bolu, tu toh khudko hamesha " Always Welcome" samajhke meri khinchai karna jaari rakhegi ! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
I had a wonderful time replying Pri !!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Mana Hi diiii !!! πŸ˜ƒ

How r u???? I am fine !! 😊
Update was simply superb...πŸ‘πŸ‘ Thankkkk uuuuu !!!
Naina's frends celebrated her birthday in a very special way..They really sacred her a lot.. hmmm... they did !! πŸ˜‰ Initially !!! par baadmei toh usse atleast thodi KHUSHI toh mili !!! πŸ˜ƒ
Naina was worried over Pooja's safety n thus she was able to solve all the codes n she fianlly reached canteen where as per the plan her friends gave her a beautiful surprise.. yeah...her friends loveeee her a lot !!!😊
Naina was missing her brother n her love very much..But she seems to feel their presence there along with her..hmmm...she does ! 😊
The song was really gud..never heard it b4 but lyrics were gud... thanks again di !! It's a veryyyy beautiful song !! Simply amaziiiinnnngggg !!! Do hear it when you get an opportunity ! 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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