ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW!

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A
omg dude...wow...it so nicccceeeeeeee....luvd it...omg....mayur 'public!' kiss, and the date....amazing dude...really luvd it...do write soon...thanx for the pm...

thank u for reading and commenting!

yes finally the "public" saw mayank kissing nupur...at least now benji and uday wont be so tensed for their sister ...hehhehe

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: minalpink100
paris
my god wt a rocking update yar u really rocksssssss specially gang scene their comedy so sweettttttttt that photo session & their beach scene so cuteeeeeeeeeee now cant wait for date please update soon thanks for pm me

thanks for so much minal!

usually my parts are 90% mayur but this time i thought of adding all gang so we can have masti on last day of college...

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg
awww paris!!!! you gave such an amazing and long updateee!!!! wow!!! everything was sooo good...from the masti going on to... the mayur romantic scenes.... the frenship the family bonding! everything was deree!!! i loved it!!! uday and benji are jus jokes!!! nach baliyee!!! lol!!!! and mayank can jus be sooo romantic!!! god it sucks dere gona be apart for 1 month!!! god!!! but dis was jus perfecttt!!!! thanxu for the lovely update!!!!
hope your not tooo tireddd!!! bless youu!!!
love loadsss
zoe
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thanks a ton for the lovely comment
im glad u loved the masti;;;;i had to show the college masti at some point;;;and college ends for mayur so lets see if they will get time for masti later...
yes mayank can b extrmly romantic when he wants to!
yea one month is long ;;;keep reading to see wat happens!

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

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Posted: 16 years ago

#754

aww....mayur r going 2 be engaged soon..so sweet!!! 😍 luv ur updates paris..evrything dat u write r so realistic,innovative n quirky...for eg-d funny names,mr pvt. sharma/mr public sharma..hilarious yaar..u can realy make us laugh equaly wid elan as u can make us blush..d bhushan hug,d open kissing of mayur..evrything is so unique,so perfect...
kp on writing dear!!! thanx 4 d pm...god bless ya!!!! 👏 👍🏼
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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Priya

@little_dragon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#755

hey dear.. this was such a fun to read...

first the canteen scene gosh uday's talk....

then te foto session... men in back tatz wat was running in ma mind... really a pic to remember .. !! all of them showing their a** .. hilarious...

then was at the beach.. cutely romantic n passionate mayur hugging n kissing in front of all... awwww tatz a treat for all...

lastly mayur on DATE and mayu making it official abt te engagement and alll.... its totally lovable...

but sad thing mayu will not accompany te gang to morena... hopefully he calls nupzi every now n then during te vacations.. !!!!

thanks a ton for te pm... carry on soon.. waiting for next part !!!

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Tarandeep Kaur {Taran}

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Posted: 16 years ago

#756

awesome update.....yaar really liking it👏

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APPY

@IshqDewaani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#757

thanks 4 telling yaar..really it was awesum....bahut aacha tha.....

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: bloomstellamusa
sorry for late reply bcoz of exams i didnt got the time to read any ff so i now coming to ur ff i must say ur every part is just the best mixture of everything comedy,romance,excitement etc i just totally enjoyed reading every single line of this part very nice i hope u update the next prt as soon as posible i just want to read abt their date plz plz update soon

thank u so much for liking it!
lol this time i thought of exploring my comedy skills hehe
i wasnt thinkin of writing abt the date...but there will b a special part date part done by another ff writer..as i dnt hav time for it..!

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel
Hi. 😊

OMG! OMG! OMG! That's all for now! I'm not gonna disturb Him much! 😆 Coming back to the point . . . Mayank indeed is used to giving surprises. 😲 ☺️ Awesome-blossom!! Continue soon! Take care!

thank u!!
kanky disturb HIM??😕
lol yeah mayank always gives the best and shocking surprises...!

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: preksha07
yaar awesome.....awesome.....too good......i didn't find any big mistakes.......thanx a ton 4 the pm.......yaar the pic was really nice.....the beach scene was awesome.....too good too resist......mayur finally told them about the engagement........wow......but mayu's not going to morena.....sad....anyways.....nupur's reasons for bunking were awesome......the sudden announcement of date by mayu.......was a fab......in all the whole part was just too good.......do cont. soon......

thank u so much for the lovely comment!
lol the pic has to be my fav too..its from personal experience!!!
yup nupur bunking even on the last day of college!
im glad u enjoyed urself reading it!