ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 75

aww im soo happy tht u updated loved it <3 and the end soo cute love dodo

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

omgsh man, i just loved it!

truly awesome update! full of masti!

mayur rocking as always!

thanks!!!*i had fun writing his part up
hope y had fun reading it!

Originally posted by: myownarea

wow Paris...I had sooo much fun reading this update..IT was wonderful..truly mean it..in a way it brought out the spirit f mjht..! gr8😊 keeo writing!!!

thank u so much!!
im gald u had fun reading it;;;;;;thats what i wanted !!

nice shot excellent loved it plz cont soon

wowwwwwwww..................it ws such a rockin.....awesomeeeeee......perfect...fabulous update dear.........luvd each n evry bit of it.........this update has bcome one among my mosssssst mosssssst fav updates of ur ff........
thnxxxx a ton dear....u r really a heavenly talented writer....d way u portrayed love,dosti n brother-sister bondin......romance...masti....sab sab perfect the.....awesome...truly truly outstandin.........

plzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon

wow!!!it was so much fun reading it paris!!!

lovely update and lovely uday
so great
do continue
bye sumi

Hey Paris..!!

I'm sorry i'm soo late in commenting..!! i feel guilty because i'd read the part the day you'd updated it..!😳😳

Y'know before you updated I was wondering that what exactly would we get to see on the last day of college...! Def something fun and cheerful...but this was far more fun to read that i thought..!! hehe😆😉

Loved the starting scene..! Of course Nupur forgot to return the books...! AND fought for the fine..! LOL😆😆

poor mayu...he should have been expecting this..! the most hilarious part was that she got thrown out of the library..!! Mayank Sharma's GF was sent out of the library..!!😉

and what a weird coincidence that the fine was of 420 rupees..!! LOL...i dunno if you did it deliberatly or what...😉

Like i always say..i love the way you characterise them...Mayu calculating it all in his head...nupur still trying to put it off for another day, throwing a tantrum in the library..!! LOL😆

awww...sajan were really cute as how you showed them as a couple..!! I loved the gang scenes....and for once it was boys vs girls and even mayu joined in the prank..!! hehe

And that part when everyone tried to put uday on the spot by asking about Mayur..!! LOL...too good..!! poor him....he always has to bear mayu's wrath..!! hehe

Mr. Private Sharma..!!!! omg...that was the best..!! i can so imagine nupur defending her and mayu;s PDA problems..!! LOL

Oooh.."single baby boys..!"?.i really laughed at that..!! mayank's retorts are so witty..!!!

There are soo many funny dialogues that you incorporate..!! Camere wale bhaiyya..! and mayank as court wale uncle..!!!!

The prank was hilarious?.i wonder how the girls reacted when they saw the pic.!! Hehe?

But my most fav was the beach scene?.i loved the mayor scene there?Mayank itna filmy ho gaya hai..!! by god?yeah after all these months with her?.kuch asar toh padega na..! All those filmy dialogues?and actions..!! and the cute romance which turned a lot hot later..! hehe?.Mayu def knows how his touch affects her..! But he actually kissed her in public..!😳 Looks like they really forgot where they were..!the best part was that Uday and Benji saw them..! I remembered that conversation of theirs in the last update..! when they said mayank toh romance bhi nahi karta hoga?he doesn't even kiss her..! LOL?ab dekh liya na dono ne..! Practical proof..!!hehe

So the engagement news is out..! I'm glad..!! Everyone was so happy?loved the gang scenes?and Uday approving the relationship like an elder bro..awwwwwww?

Mayur date pe jaa rahe hain.!! Yay?are we gonna see it in the next update?? Or are you gonna skip to straight one month ahead..? I'm really looking forward to the next one..!! After college scenes would be nice to read?

This was a brilliant update like always..!! Keep it up yaar..!

And do continue soon..!!

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

nawwww.. such a sweet update.. and it was mega long too

loved it to the core

right soon

:D

xSonia