ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 74

yaar awesome.....awesome.....too good......i didn't find any big mistakes.......thanx a ton 4 the pm.......yaar the pic was really nice.....the beach scene was awesome.....too good too resist......mayur finally told them about the engagement........wow......but mayu's not going to morena.....sad....anyways.....nupur's reasons for bunking were awesome......the sudden announcement of date by mayu.......was a fab......in all the whole part was just too good.......do cont. soon......

hey lovely update

hey paris man i have been just tooooooooooo busy man, i am so sowie, i wrote a big comment but my internet connection here sucks man. wow what an update, you defifnitely have the power and the charisma to make your readers laugh. I have laughed so much while reading it, you have no idea, everything was just perfect paris.

HI Paris
At first i would like 2 thnax frm core of my heart 4 ur such a long nice update.
its really awesome and too funny.
i cud not but lough after reading this part.
Its so cool and lovely dear.
i enjoy a lot.
Mayur r rocks.But yes i miss mayur roamnce a little bit.
So waiting 4 extra romance> OKKKK.
Plz update soon. i know u r busy. But u should try when u get free time.
Thanx again 4 ur fantastic update.

Superb yaar loved Dodo getting Emotional and ben and dodo's teasing

pari its awesome...simply Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzz continue soon...ufffff totally fida over mayu's mannerism....his determination,passion,sincerity....simply to die 4..and my cutie mubbly nupur and her subtlty.....is a rare combination!!plzzzzz continue soon..👍🏼

really wunderful paris!!!!! mayank-benji-uday scenes were awesome!!!!!😛
it was superb yaar n i enjoyed it completely!!!!!!!! even though u had writen this part in a hurry,it did'nt have a single confusion or a mistake in it as u had earlier mentioned!!!!😃
great one n thanx for d pm!!!!!!

Originally posted by: mahak03

wow.......i finally got an opportunity to comment first time.........i am the one who wud comment it first.....wiow...............................this part was estotic........grt....mind blowing...........heart swaying.......i loved each bit of it........wow.......u r a superb writer...........and its not confusing at all...........mayank openly kissed nupur. 😳 awweeeeee.......dodo the sweet bro...... 😉 and nupur and mayank going for a date.... 😳 i love mayank and nupur together........thanks for updating.......finally u updated it.........

see i told you tht next time you will be the first one to cmt!!
thank u so much!!
yes finally uday benji saw with their own eyes tht mayu can kiss and be romantic !!
glad you enjoyed reading it...!

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Awesome one Paris!.....i love the fun in this episode....i had to laugh at the photo session....good one!.....your whole ff puts a huge smile on my face! i can't wait to see MaYur out of collage......loved this gang part!

im delighted to knw u found the photo prank funny..
it was from a personal experience..hehe..many things were from personal experience in this part...
keep reading ..and i promise this smile on ur face will remain for ever...!