ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 77

Originally posted by: Senny

hey paris man i have been just tooooooooooo busy man, i am so sowie, i wrote a big comment but my internet connection here sucks man. wow what an update, you defifnitely have the power and the charisma to make your readers laugh. I have laughed so much while reading it, you have no idea, everything was just perfect paris.

its so much like nupur to not pay her fine and mayank is such a darling who went to fill it up and nupur fought there whoaaaaaa so much like her man.

I lovedddddddddd the canteen bit and uday and benji were so much in trouble,aww the picture and mayank the prankster hehe.

the beach bit was so adorable and romantic. whoa they get caught man and the announcement of their engagment, everything was just amazinggggggggg.

excellent.

so sowie for the late and short comment.

but i truly loved loved loved it paris.

senny thanks a ton for suc a lovely comment!
u laghed!!yeaa...lol i really wanted evryone to have a blast. with this one!
i knw mayu is suh a darling to go n pay her fine...and he knew before she told him tht she fought!he knw her so well!
i ad to show mayank pranster side too na?!!!
keep reading!

Originally posted by: fariaa70

HI Paris
At first i would like 2 thnax frm core of my heart 4 ur such a long nice update.
its really awesome and too funny.
i cud not but lough after reading this part.
Its so cool and lovely dear.
i enjoy a lot.
Mayur r rocks.But yes i miss mayur roamnce a little bit.
So waiting 4 extra romance> OKKKK.
Plz update soon. i know u r busy. But u should try when u get free time.
Thanx again 4 ur fantastic update.

thanks u so much for liking this part!!!
dnt worry i willmake sure i add more romance next time!!

Originally posted by: ghtk1

pari its awesome...simply Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzz continue soon...ufffff totally fida over mayu's mannerism....his determination,passion,sincerity....simply to die 4..and my cutie mubbly nupur and her subtlty.....is a rare combination!!plzzzzz continue soon..👍🏼

thank u ///
im so happy u stop out the way i tried to portay his mannerism determitnation passion sincerity>>>i hav to luv u for saying this/

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

really wunderful paris!!!!! mayank-benji-uday scenes were awesome!!!!!😛
it was superb yaar n i enjoyed it completely!!!!!!!! even though u had writen this part in a hurry,it did'nt have a single confusion or a mistake in it as u had earlier mentioned!!!!😃
great one n thanx for d pm!!!!!!

thanks>>//
lol uday benji are my fav these days///

sach much mastiiiiiii ke dinnnnnnnnnn the yeh............luvd da propasal 4 engagemeny.....eagerly waitin 4 da nxt upd8.........n dont worry abt da comic elemeny it waz hilarious.....so hilarious dat i read it over n over again.........

nice promo in page 97.. am catching up...

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

thats was mind blowing!!
too good, i loved it!
mayur's talk n they kissed!
n benji saw it lol
loved it!
continue soon

thanks mishu !!
lol yea finally benji saw what he wanted to see for so long !!! hehe

Originally posted by: nikki028

wowwwwwwww..................it ws such a rockin.....awesomeeeeee......perfect...fabulous update dear.........luvd each n evry bit of it.........this update has bcome one among my mosssssst mosssssst fav updates of ur ff........
thnxxxx a ton dear....u r really a heavenly talented writer....d way u portrayed love,dosti n brother-sister bondin......romance...masti....sab sab perfect the.....awesome...truly truly outstandin.........

plzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooon

thank u so much!
i didnt add the song..it was getting too long!
keep reading n supporting me !

Originally posted by: naina_mayur

wow!!!it was so much fun reading it paris!!!

had a smile thruought...my mum was lik whts so funny n y r u grinning at d lappy!!!lol....thnx a lot 4 d pm n sucha a wondrful update dear..

im so happy u had fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol i was grinned alone too wen i was imagining the plot ..!