Originally posted by: hgrhr
Hey Paris..!!
I'm sorry i'm soo late in commenting..!! i feel guilty because i'd read the part the day you'd updated it..!😳😳
Y'know before you updated I was wondering that what exactly would we get to see on the last day of college...! Def something fun and cheerful...but this was far more fun to read that i thought..!! hehe😆😉
Loved the starting scene..! Of course Nupur forgot to return the books...! AND fought for the fine..! LOL😆😆
poor mayu...he should have been expecting this..! the most hilarious part was that she got thrown out of the library..!! Mayank Sharma's GF was sent out of the library..!!😲😆😆😉
and what a weird coincidence that the fine was of 420 rupees..!! LOL...i dunno if you did it deliberatly or what...😉
Like i always say..i love the way you characterise them...Mayu calculating it all in his head...nupur still trying to put it off for another day, throwing a tantrum in the library..!! LOL😆
awww...sajan were really cute as how you showed them as a couple..!! I loved the gang scenes....and for once it was boys vs girls and even mayu joined in the prank..!! hehe
And that part when everyone tried to put uday on the spot by asking about Mayur..!! LOL...too good..!! poor him....he always has to bear mayu's wrath..!! hehe
Mr. Private Sharma..!!!! omg...that was the best..!! i can so imagine nupur defending her and mayu;s PDA problems..!! LOL
Oooh.."single baby boys..!"?.i really laughed at that..!! mayank's retorts are so witty..!!!
There are soo many funny dialogues that you incorporate..!! Camere wale bhaiyya..! and mayank as court wale uncle..!!!!
The prank was hilarious?.i wonder how the girls reacted when they saw the pic.!! Hehe?
But my most fav was the beach scene?.i loved the mayor scene there?Mayank itna filmy ho gaya hai..!! by god?yeah after all these months with her?.kuch asar toh padega na..! All those filmy dialogues?and actions..!! and the cute romance which turned a lot hot later..! hehe?.Mayu def knows how his touch affects her..! But he actually kissed her in public..!😳 Looks like they really forgot where they were..!the best part was that Uday and Benji saw them..! I remembered that conversation of theirs in the last update..! when they said mayank toh romance bhi nahi karta hoga?he doesn't even kiss her..! LOL?ab dekh liya na dono ne..! Practical proof..!!hehe
So the engagement news is out..! I'm glad..!! Everyone was so happy?loved the gang scenes?and Uday approving the relationship like an elder bro..awwwwwww?
Mayur date pe jaa rahe hain.!! Yay?are we gonna see it in the next update?? Or are you gonna skip to straight one month ahead..? I'm really looking forward to the next one..!! After college scenes would be nice to read?
This was a brilliant update like always..!! Keep it up yaar..!
And do continue soon..!!
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