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Senny

@Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#591

hey paris wowwwwwwww man, nupz being sooo innocent well thats how nupz has been lately. The way you narrated the whole story was just fantastic man and mayanak's comfort level was definitely being tested bigtime, hehe. Nupz looked sooo sweet while reading the magazine, then fighting for it and asking all the questions in the world, poor mayank. I loved how mayank wants to protect nupz even from obscene images hehe. This was reflected via him not letting nupz search for it on the laptop.

I loveeeeeee the dance in the end, the way mayank and nupz was doing masti and mayank lipsinging hehe. I loveddddd how they got lost in eachother and their dance. Aesthetically portrayed man.

The intial parts were amazing as well, like mayank coming over for studying and the way he woke up nupz and got lost in her and the way uday, benji and nupz talked about mayank was sooo hilarious man.

The kitchen scene was the best and totally to die for. I so want to watch such a scene in mjht but nupz cooking and preparing stuff for others is a surprise for me hehe.

Everything was amazingly put and simply outstanding. Keep it up!

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Paris
its a mind-blowing,super-duper,fantabulas, lovely update.
every scene of this ff made me crazy.
u know what, if the MJHT creative team write the script in that way then TRP must be growing as fast as a jet plane.
the way how mayank try 2 expalin her was fantastic.
nupuz really a innocent girl, and mayank a perfect gentleman.
And benji ka dialogue-im sure nupur ne daar ke mare mayank se pyaar kiya hoga! was so funny.
it has all the thing that made a person very happy.
First 2 last i enjoy a lot.
thanx , thanx 1 lottttttttttttttttttt for ur nice update.

A big hug 4 u.
Faria

thank u so much faria!
iknow mayank is the best person to explain such thing so sweetly:::as u said he is truely a perfect gentleman
it the best compliment to knw tht u make someone happy!
lol benji and uday are hilarious!poor guys have no idea of how romantic mayu actually is!
they just have to see it to beleive it!
keep reading ...

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti
BY GOSH, paris, what an update! absolute sensational, romantic, understanding and of course comfort level!

tooooooooooooo good!

yes their comfort level is growing day by day....as is their love!
thanks for the comt!

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Priya

@little_dragon

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: parisbynight

im so happy u felt the passion portrayed..!
thanks pryia

of course i did.. and also got te inner most stuff u wanted to reveal... 😆

and nupzi being sooo innocent was adding flavor to te scene... 😉

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jasmeet

@jasmeet khaneja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#595

I am speechless!!!!!!!!!!!

Your FFs are getting better everyday!!

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raveenamc

@raveenamc

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Posted: 16 years ago

#596

it was such a cute part!!!!!!

mayur kiss!!!!!! :)

i couldnt stop blushing and i dies like a million times.... thank you so much for such an amzing part and i was for another update soon :)

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#597

Wow! Gr8 update.. lol at mayu's explanation.. haha

veryy nicely written

:P xxSonia

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: parisbynight

thanks a ton!
lol its almost a must to add ref of film !!!
ahahah they hav no idea of how mayur romance everyday!

ur welcome sweetyy..........ur sooo talented and creative wen it comes 2 writing.....ur sooooo good!!!! 😊
xxxxxxxxx

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
u/mujhe to apni phool jaisi sister par tarass araha hai,jitna romance ka shok tha ,utna hi unromantic ladka se pyaar kar beti!
wow so good yaar uday is so sweet i just love him he is darling ,poor he dont know how romantic he is

m/agar aap logon ki tareef session khatam hua ho to please hum kuch yeh study session churu karle! he said looking at the trio standing in front him

nupur ke tarfiff karne ka right sirf or sirf mera hai

b/nupur please tell me the truth ,what the hell did u see in him? he whispered to her ears

pyar mein insan andha ho jata \hai so she cant see

b/dude!im sure nupur ne daar ke mare mayank se pyaar kiya hoga

benji is alwys right

seriously i cant even understand how their couple is lasting, poor nupur..im sure he doesn't even kiss her!

ha ha ha poor uday he is so cute

paris mindblowing and the best how sweetly he tell her every meaning wow yaar

i just love it

and the kiss is just well i dont have word to express

wow i love it or maynk s knowledge ooh my god overall knowledge

thanks for such a good review!

seriously uday and benji had no idea of wat was happening in the kitchen,imagine if that had gone there>>>>

i guess "sweet" ison of the best word to describe mayu!

keep reading

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#600

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates
OMG Paris....i totally loved it dear....i loved the intensity of their romance...brilliantly written....every emotion and expression so well explained....fantabulous!

thank u so much!

their love is getting deeper day by day !