ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 62

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Wow! Gr8 update.. lol at mayu's explanation.. haha

veryy nicely written

:P xxSonia

thank u so much!
keep reading and commenting!

wow yaar i only i have just one word......it was just PERFECT....PERFECT PERFECT......just love it.....nupz is so innocent....hahah tht part was hiliarious......just love it....keep it up...,👍🏼👏😳love MayUr

Originally posted by: frndship_trust

wow yaar i only i have just one word......it was just PERFECT....PERFECT PERFECT......just love it.....nupz is so innocent....hahah tht part was hiliarious......just love it....keep it up...,👍🏼👏😳love MayUr

thank u so much
well i wanted to create a lively atmosphere this time,after the very emotional part last time

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lovely update very romantic indeed plz cont soon

outstanding paris.....amazing..... loved the wy mayu woke up nups... soo romantic..but immediatly he became angry...after all mayu is mayu...loved the line..."Pehle sweet good morning aur baad mein bitter anger warning"...sooo cute..

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

readdd d second one finallyy...

aesssuummm kyaa ego clash thaa maann!!

rockinngg!!

udayyy...!!

=(

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

GOSHHH READD THEE FIRSTT KISSS!!!

immmmm goinnngggg maaaaddddddd!!!!

muuuaaahhhhzzzzz...

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya

awwwwwww readddd i cant live without youu...

soooooooo sweeertttt....

merii true mayurian sis!!

thank u so much sindy to take time out to read all the parts!!
u r such a sweetheart!!
so u have 3 more to go......
keep reading and commenting !

Originally posted by: parisbynight

well i thought it was important to show the growing comfort level....
i mean in this ff mayur will never become cross the line ...i mean to say i will never show them sleeping together at any point in the story.... i know i must be breaking so many hearts and hopes by saying this but i believe in showing them their bond strong beyond limit!

so that why i wanted to make them comfortable to at least talk about such intimate topics...

u rock...bahut hi aacha update tha..Thanks 4 letting me know......

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

outstanding paris.....amazing..... loved the wy mayu woke up nups... soo romantic..but immediatly he became angry...after all mayu is mayu...loved the line..."Pehle sweet good morning aur baad mein bitter anger warning"...sooo cute..

n benji-uday-nups mayank convo was rocking......benji-uday wer complimenting her n mayu was glaring at them....😆

loved the way how he ordered them to solve q paper n the way they obeyed like kids....after all manna toh padega hi...nahin mana toh they knew unki khuch khair nahin...😆

i loved the way how u wrote uday-benji convo abt mayur....that he must have never gifted her n never kissed her....n after that in the kithcen he did exactly the oppsite....i loved the way u wrote....

n how mayu was waiting nups to request him politely....sooo sweet....he was soo seet when he asked abt the flavour of milkshake...sooo cute....n uske baad romantic...

the naugtiest convo on the stage.....😉....OMG nups bhi na kya kya padhti hai aur fir uska alag hi matlab nikalti hain....i loved how he explained her the meaning getting embarrased n the way he teased her when she came to know...

n finally the promotion scene.....soooooooooo cute.....

loved the update...every dialogue was perfect according to their characters...that was the main thing i noticed....👏

hugs to u for this update.....🤗

i really loved it n enjoyed it a lot...

thanks a ton for this wonderful review!
im so glad u understood everythg i wanted to portray in this part

lol mayu ordered them to do the q paper for the next half an hour,this way he can go and romance nupur without being disturbed as he know uday benji are way to scared of him to move without completing the work ! hehe
and these "cartoons" as per mayank saying,have no idea of how mayank can actualy be romantic!! hehe
mayu hides well his game i have to say!

lol in first mayu was embaraased to explain the meaning of "impotent" but then he took advantage of situation to tease her and flirt! hehe

its nice to know you enjoyed!! thats what i want...i want to make my reader enjoy their time !!
keep reading ....