ff/(MN)ONE DAY SHOTS/'Just Another Day' pg145-NEW! - Page 59

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hi!!!!

this was your best one-shot so far.

I am not in a condition to say anything. It was simply superb. awesome!!!!

thanks a ton!
u r the second to think this one was the best!
trust me i took 4 days to write the last part(proposal) it wuldnt come but then evrythg came in a flow!

Originally posted by: minalpink100

my god paris wt an update yar so sweet specially mayank & nupur dance & their kitchen scene so sweet of it 😊but y yar u did not pm me ? 😭 wt happen

im sor sry honey,i was about to pm u but u read before it...😊

kitchen and mayur are always hit scenes ! lol!

thanks

Originally posted by: hiba.aijaz

it waz a cute update.............luved da ''comfort level'' of mayur.............waitin 4 da next part😉

thanks!
yes they are getting very comfortable with each other....

Originally posted by: preksha07

omg....it was so romantic...mayu nupz'sfiance.......keep it up......just loved the upd8.....

yup mayu is nups fiance from now on...
but will become her husband only after 8 yrs!!! poor nupur !

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

what an awesome superb stunning rocking os!
i loved it to the core
i loved everything abt it, how nupur woke up, the benji mayu part, the benji mayu n uday part, benji uday part, mayur in the kitchen n the best mayur in the auditorium
it was wow
fab job!

mishu thank a millions time!
im delighted u had a rocking time reading it...after last emotional part,i thought of writing a refreshing part this time!

and mayur alone in auditorium ..just imagine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

wow awesome too gud part!!!!!!!!!!1

Originally posted by: preethis

By god kya update tah... ufffffffffff wonderful.. loved it... Nupur's innocence... wah wah.. great work keep going....

lol the only thing nupur cant act up in innocence as she is actually really innocent!
thanks for ur cmt!

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

wow..d update is so full of passion,romance n beauty dear....loved it 2 d core!!! 🤗 😍 d rhyming parts were simply marvellous...specially "sweet si morning n den bitter si anger warning!!" i spilled my snacks as i was having dem while reading... 😃
plz do kp writing more of such stuffs dear...love ya!! god bless ya..!! 👍🏼
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

thanks u so much for the colorful comment!
made me smile automatically!
lol nupur is getting expert at rhyming,and its effortless!

wowowow tht was cool i love it

Paris, it was such a stunning update dear!!! 🤗
It was sooo completely romantic n exciting and outta this world!!
wow..everything from what M feels abt B, U to their sympathy for N n how M is actually with her to...some real cool uncomfy talks bet them to the most romantic end..
Lovely... ur best till date!! 🤗