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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: myownarea
Paris, it was such a stunning update dear!!! 🤗
It was sooo completely romantic n exciting and outta this world!!
wow..everything from what M feels abt B, U to their sympathy for N n how M is actually with her to...some real cool uncomfy talks bet them to the most romantic end..
Lovely... ur best till date!! 🤗

gosh im so happy u found it was the best! honestly i never expected such a good appreciation from u all this time...i was hesitating to post this one...

u r right benji uday have no idea of how mayank actually is with nupur
he does kiss her,and also gift her things..he just doesnt make a big deal out of it to the world!

lol..they had to have an uncomfy talk once right?!.....

keep reading !

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: Senny
hey paris wowwwwwwww man, nupz being sooo innocent well thats how nupz has been lately. The way you narrated the whole story was just fantastic man and mayanak's comfort level was definitely being tested bigtime, hehe. Nupz looked sooo sweet while reading the magazine, then fighting for it and asking all the questions in the world, poor mayank. I loved how mayank wants to protect nupz even from obscene images hehe. This was reflected via him not letting nupz search for it on the laptop.

I loveeeeeee the dance in the end, the way mayank and nupz was doing masti and mayank lipsinging hehe. I loveddddd how they got lost in eachother and their dance. Aesthetically portrayed man.

The intial parts were amazing as well, like mayank coming over for studying and the way he woke up nupz and got lost in her and the way uday, benji and nupz talked about mayank was sooo hilarious man.

The kitchen scene was the best and totally to die for. I so want to watch such a scene in mjht but nupz cooking and preparing stuff for others is a surprise for me hehe.

Everything was amazingly put and simply outstanding. Keep it up!

senny thank u so muchhhhhh for this good review!
yes u r right his comfort level was at test..and he managed pretty well...
he is indeed very protective,in every possible way,and his reaction to the internet search was very quick,thank god !(actually when i googled "impotent" on net i found pretty obscene pictures too!)

yes their dance started off with full masti but gradually became very passionate!
tum se hi is one of my fav song,whenever i listen it i can only picture mayur dancing on it!

in the beggining mayank was determined to shout at her for waking up late..but he just couldnt !
thank u for liking the kitchen scene..it my fav too
actually u see gungan was not hme so nupur had to cook...i mean cook its a big word..it was only spreading jam on toast on making milkshake!

keep reading and giving your support!

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#603

hey

actually i'd read this the day you'd updated but i was kinda having a really bad day since then...so even though i loved this FF...i couldn't get myself up to type....sorry..! LOL

this was every bit as embarrasing as teh promo had promised....hehe....i really was enjoying mayank's discomfort..!! And on top of that nupur's unending innocent questions with such heavey meanings..! LOL

it was hilarious..!!

Important to impotent to JWM to Nupur...! What a connection!! This was the best part...how you made it all so real..!

I mean its really so very expected of nupur to relate such things with movies and bring them up at unusual times..! hehe.

and poor mayank....how to explain it all...! bechara kitna try kar raha tha topic change ho jaye but every time Nupur unintentionaly brought it up..! Even was about to put it in the search....by god...phir toh it would have been the haight of embarrasment..!

And the chunnu-munnu that mayank bought up and well about himself....i could just imagine Nupur's face at that time..!

lodge and barn reminscising....how i wish this was in the show as well....so cute a scene it would be..!

That beginning scene was just too good..!! even i love Benji-Uday-Mayank scenes hehe...! and they way they were discussing mayank's boyfriened capabilities...! I just wanted to laugh out loud.... they didn't know what was going on in the kitchen..! warna bolti bandh ho jaati..!!

Mango shakeeee!! yayyyy...AB ki yaad aa gayi...GF to mango shake pilayega...yehi kaha tha na usne..! hehe

hmmm....he drank it off his girlfriend here..LOL

such a cute scene still so passionate..!! Even that bedroom scene....one minute all sweet one minute all sadu..! That's mayank for you..!!

wow...proposal was so unexpected..! I was as surprised at nupur...and at the same place where they confessed their love..!!

The proposal, the dance, the song, the kiss....all of it was just so romantic...spontaneous and full of love..! hayeeee....so mayank that was..!

That's the best part...both of them were so in character..!

Loved this one..! But they're engaged now...? aww...i though we'd get to see some sweet scenes before this....but anyway 'm looking forward to what you have in store now..!

keep up the great job..!

DO CONTINUE SOON..!! hehe

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#604

AND i'd like to say that FF ka title bilkul perfect tha..."comfort level"....!! hehe

comfort level definitly kaafi badh gaya mayur ka after having such conversations..! LOL

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: hgrhr
hey

actually i'd read this the day you'd updated but i was kinda having a really bad day since then...so even though i loved this FF...i couldn't get myself up to type....sorry..! LOL

this was every bit as embarrasing as teh promo had promised....hehe....i really was enjoying mayank's discomfort..!! And on top of that nupur's unending innocent questions with such heavey meanings..! LOL

it was hilarious..!!

Important to impotent to JWM to Nupur...! What a connection!! This was the best part...how you made it all so real..!

I mean its really so very expected of nupur to relate such things with movies and bring them up at unusual times..! hehe.

and poor mayank....how to explain it all...! bechara kitna try kar raha tha topic change ho jaye but every time Nupur unintentionaly brought it up..! Even was about to put it in the search....by god...phir toh it would have been the haight of embarrasment..!

And the chunnu-munnu that mayank bought up and well about himself....i could just imagine Nupur's face at that time..!

lodge and barn reminscising....how i wish this was in the show as well....so cute a scene it would be..!

That beginning scene was just too good..!! even i love Benji-Uday-Mayank scenes hehe...! and they way they were discussing mayank's boyfriened capabilities...! I just wanted to laugh out loud.... they didn't know what was going on in the kitchen..! warna bolti bandh ho jaati..!!

Mango shakeeee!! yayyyy...AB ki yaad aa gayi...GF to mango shake pilayega...yehi kaha tha na usne..! hehe

hmmm....he drank it off his girlfriend here..LOL

such a cute scene still so passionate..!! Even that bedroom scene....one minute all sweet one minute all sadu..! That's mayank for you..!!

wow...proposal was so unexpected..! I was as surprised at nupur...and at the same place where they confessed their love..!!

The proposal, the dance, the song, the kiss....all of it was just so romantic...spontaneous and full of love..! hayeeee....so mayank that was..!

That's the best part...both of them were so in character..!

Loved this one..! But they're engaged now...? aww...i though we'd get to see some sweet scenes before this....but anyway 'm looking forward to what you have in store now..!

keep up the great job..!

DO CONTINUE SOON..!! hehe

thanks a million times for such a good review of yours!
my heart actually skip hard when i know u commented ...its like knowing the verdict..hit ya flop?!!
"important to impotent to JWM to nupur" ...yes only nupur can find such connection
well in the beginning mayank found it hard to explain such thing to her..but oh well he had to give her full explanation!...he could have let her beleive it just meant steril and end the convo right there but mayank sharma never leave an explantion uncomplete!

when he said "chunu munnu" he was actually making fun of her...he loves teasing her!
i always wanted them to recall the barn and lodge scene..i had this idea since long ,but was trying to find the right time to bring it up!

u said it right,if uday and benji knew what was happenng in the kitchen they would never dare to utter a world on mayank boyfrnd capabilites! but we all know mayank is a very priavte person,he doesnt like showing off!

lol i fulfiled arjun biljani wish then..at least in this ff i made him share a mango shake with his gf!

well the proposal was nothing else than unexpected!in fact even mayank had no idea his talks would lead him to propose...!
i know a lot of the reader must be mad that the proposal was so weird with no big setting but i wanted it to look this way...

abt the engagement ..lets say they are "to-be engaged" ,practically they havnt exchanged rings yet..
i might write a small update on the aftermath of this update..will they tell everyone that they want to get engaged?yes or no?....ill think of something !

once again a huge thank u and hug !
keep reading and reviewing !

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Hgrhrnwl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#606

@paris : it really means a lot to me that you value my comments so much...!! I'm actually very flattered...😳

😳😳 😆

no but seriously...you write one of the best portrayal of Mayur's characters....so i can't help the detailed review..! hehe...

looking forward to the next one...whenever that's posted....but do put in lots of romance na..! hehe...!

Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: hgrhr
AND i'd like to say that FF ka title bilkul perfect tha..."comfort level"....!! hehe
comfort level definitly kaafi badh gaya mayur ka after having such conversations..! LOL

well i thought it was important to show the growing comfort level....
i mean in this ff mayur will never become cross the line ...i mean to say i will never show them sleeping together at any point in the story.... i know i must be breaking so many hearts and hopes by saying this but i believe in showing them their bond strong beyond limit!

so that why i wanted to make them comfortable to at least talk about such intimate topics...

Edited by parisbynight - 16 years ago

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: Bushra Javeria
it's a gud wrk..!!

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: raveenamc
it was such a cute part!!!!!!

mayur kiss!!!!!! :)

i couldnt stop blushing and i dies like a million times.... thank you so much for such an amzing part and i was for another update soon :)

im glad i can make u blush
tht a big compliment!
keep reading!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: parisbynight

girl u still have a lot more to learn ! hehe
im glad u enjoyed reading it!
im also inactive member thats why i ask ppl to add me...

I know and am not in hurry to learn em! 😆

Okay, I'll see if I can add u! 😃