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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
i have been waiting for so long for the update, thanks for updating , Yes i want jb to have a baby and bani should give jai a hard time and not forgive him easily..... She must make him desparate by not letting jai hold his baby.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Add a child, might be fun and torturous to have JW pursue

Bani, the woman he wants and at the same time have him

running away from Roshini, the woman he dosen't want.

Great update.

Continue soon, can't wait to read more. Take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Great idea. Jai pinning to be with Bani & his kids & bani making him suffer.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

AT LAST!!!!!! U've updated. Adding a kid would be a nice idea............ and Bani not letting Jai to meet their kid would make him miserable................. whatever you write please don't let Jai and Roshini get married..................want him to fall hard for Bani and try to woo her ............................but in the end want Jai and Bani together.

Great Update
Continue soon, waiting eagerly for the next part.
Take care
Keep smiling😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
it could be a good idea to add kids. But what about the kid feelings.
How will he reacts knowing his father was a stupid a**.
But it's your story so do what you want, be sure we'll keep read it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
hey nice ff plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
wonderful parts
I like the idea of adding kids in the story and jai pinning for bani and kids
pls cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
hi dear, i am fine with both with kid or without kid. i will read it anyway as i liked the way u write this story and more over it about JB 😊 pls update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
is that girl bani?
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Hello All!!!!!!!!!! here is the next part.from now on I'll try to update on regular basis ...... =============================================================================
meanwhile roshini and his other frds came to him and started complaining what a bore he had become.he manged to give them a weak smile as his attention was captured by someone else.his frds were saying that they should make a move and jai happily agreed to that as all he wanted to get out of this and roshini who was making advances towards him.when they all reached to door ,the site which greeted jai ,left him stunned out of his bits.
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PART 9

All were shoked beyond limit as there stood bani looking drop dead gorgeous wearing a denim skirt and and a halter neck red top with lipgloss and kofl as only making on her beatiful face, her knee length hair was cut till waste and curled at the end .calling her a stunner will be an understatement.her style convey richness.and she stood holding a girl around age of 2 years who was dressed exactly as bani.same dress and hair style ,looking like smaller version of bani.Jai could not believe his luck and eyes that he was actually seeing bani that too, this bani who was beyond imagination

Bani too saw jai:looking handsome as ever and noticed that over the years he has gained maturity and looking more like a man who could kill ppl just by his good looks.

Both were staring at each other but there was a diff in the way of looking.Jai's eyes had look of guilt ,happiness, confussion all the same time ,while bani was expressionless because in her mind she was thinking Jai Walia we met earlier than I actually planned to meet u.Roshini was the first one to recover:-

Roshini:-Oh My ..My, look who we have here…..Bani Dixit

Turning to her frds:- do u guys remember her…..let me remind u …she is the same bani who actually seduced my jai to sleep with her ,she was so desperate for a man and u know jai used to go spa after spending time with her just to get rid of her smell.

Turning to bani looking her from head to toe:- As far as I remember u were a middle class girl ,very poor girl who didn't has money to buy proper cloths and always stick to those plain salwaar kameej ,then how did u get the money to come to this place as this is quite expensive……let me guess(pretends to think) ..looks like u have taken our advice to take it as a proffession very seriously and were able to catch some big fish .looks like ur bussiness is doing good ….are u here to meet ur clint for night…?

Everybody start laughing.some guys started to look at bani in really cheap manner.

One of them asked :- so when r u free tell me and don't worry about money I'll pay u more than u can think .

Bani was just listing with with smiles as if pitying on them .suddenly she heard the little girl say:- ma chao.

Roshini :- don't tell me u had a kid with one of ur client bani .

One of the boys :- she must be so good that the poor guy forget to use protection in hurry.

All laugh.All the while Jai was stood there with his mouth open as he was in his own world and was digesting the fact that he actually was seeing bani.

Finally bani spoke looking at roshini in eyes :- yes I am excelent at whatever I do and that include punching u on ur face so don't u dare to utter even a single word against my little girl.

Roshini was fuming by now and raised a slap :- How dare u talk back to me like that.

Bani stops her hand and twisted it ,roshini winced in pain:- watch whatever u talk or do about me or my loved ones otherwise u will not even know what has hit u because I am not the same bani dixit which I used to be 3 yrs back.with this she leave roshini's hand and pushed her to the floor .

Jai was watching with gr8 interest as he never knew that bani he used to know has this side too.At that moment a man and girl whome Jai has seen at there near by table came and stood beside bani.The man hugged bani:-Any problem sweetheart?.At that moment Jai felt that something inside him broke ,he was hurt seeing that man hugging bani with possesiveness and calling her sweetheart.

Bani repiled with a bright smile:- No Ranveer ,nothing that I cannot hanlde.the little girl tugged at his trousers when they looked down:little girl was standing with her hands up and said .papa up Ranveer picked his little girl up, called other girl ( remember Jai saw they were 2 girls and a guy on the table)

Rano ,we should leave now .but before leaving ,ranveer and rano scanned the group and spotted the person for whom they have come to India.offcourse He knew about Jai as rano has told him all about him and he himself saw how bani had suffered because of that jerk.bani ,rano and ranveer left from there leaving a fuming roshini and a shocked and heart broken jai as he was thinking that bani and ranveer are married and the thought of bani having a child with Ranveer was more than enough to add spice over his wounds.what he didn't know that in reality ranveer was married to Rano not bani and the little girl was their daughter Riya.As bani and riya were inseperable and very fond of each other so riya address bani as Ma instead of masi and loves to copy her ma in everything and that includes everything ,ranveer and rano are her mamma and papa.rano and bani were always like sisters than frds but ranveer is a jiju cum an elder bro which bani never had and she used to tie him rakhi every year since childhood .because rano and ranveer were childhood sweetheart (thus bani knew ranveer since bachpan ka jamana) so they decided to get married at an early age but both were matured for their age.ranveer and rono along with bani's family stood by her at her tough time .ranveer has a unique name for his 3 fav girls in the world

Bani is his sweetheart,rano is his darling,and riya is their princess.

Bani daily thanks the GOD for giving such a wonderfulll family ,rano,ranveer and above all to send an angle in form of riya into her life. when ever she think of that person because of whom she had decided to return to her family as it was not possible to achieve her goal without joining her family.she need her family .inspite of everything she never failed to remember Jai so that she can focus on her only aim of her life .That night too she went to bed after offering her prayers to god and last thing which she said before she closed her eyes was Jai Walia countdown has begun.start counting your days.time has come for u and ur good for nothing frds to see who I am in reality and I am sure my real identity will snatch the ground beneath ur feet.

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