REVENGE! Part 15 page 16 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
please cont soon wana reas what happens when Jai and Bani meet?
I'm wondering if Bani will have a child I wonder from Jai?
byebye
Love Perveen.x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Hello Everybodyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy..............

Thanks a ton for your comments.....
Perveen.x is asking if bani has a child??
Do you want bani to have a child from Jai😉
....tell me so that I can plot the story accordingly.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

After a long time you update, it was worth the read,though short.

Continue soon, and happy writing.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cupid21


After a long time you update, it was worth the read,though short.

Continue soon, and happy writing.




Forgot to mention I'm now Cupid21 instead of Cupid. Had to create

a new email for authentication, the old one wouldn't work.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
hey dear
doo cont soon
so now on we will see the the search of jai to find bani and ask fro forgiveness
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
pls update dear, can't wait to see wht is bani going to do nw
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Hi!
I read all parts in one go. Those r fantabulous.
I think Jai is in love with Bani & very soon he will realise d same.
Pl update sooooon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Hi all.Thanks for such encourgement.I am really honoured.so here is the next part I wrote it today in office (shhhhhhhhh,don't tell my boss)
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PART 8

Next day when jai reached for breakfast ,he was greeted by a very happy looking roshni and her parents.roshini went up to him and and put her handsbehind hid neck and kissed him goodmorning.Jai got irritated as his parents were also there watching this.

Rosh:- good morning jai.

Jai (removing her hands from his neck roughly) what so good about this morning?.Its a usual morning.

Rosh:-today is our first morning as engage couple.(in jai's ear) and last as in separate rooms..

Jai glares at her.I am busy tonight.and please we are engage ,it doesn't mean that we have to stuck by each other's side every time.I want to spent time for myself alone.

Rosh:-not with me even.

Jai:- not with you actually.now will u please excuse me.

Roshini was shocked .

Jai came to dining table

Jai's mom:-son .take roshini with u for outing now u both are engaged.u should spent some more time with each other.and please come home soon in the evening as pundit ji is coming to choose your wedding date.

Jai was not liking the conversation so he said:- mom ,what is the rush to get married.I don't want to get married so soon.

Jai'dad:- soon ?? u called this soon .since last 5 years u both are living like a married couple when ever u are together.we are just trying to make it acceptale in society .

Jai came to his senses.he was shocked.

J's dad:-yes we knew everything,don't be shocked..

I am sorry dad .I didn't mean to hurt any body .what I am trying to say is I need some time to get used to of this idea of marriage and If u are fearing of society then be assured that I'll not do any such thing with roshini.and turning to roshini he said I am sorry roshini for being rude to u earlier.

Rosh:- Its OK jai.(thinking ) I'll see how u r going to do that.

Rosh's mom:- we know jai u need time as we pulled a fast one on u in the form of engagement.

Then turning to jai's parents:- we think we should give jai some time ,we have wapited 5 long years for this day then few more months will not be any harm.

Jai was feeling releived.

Jai excused himself from breakfast telling he has some urget work..after leaving home he reached to his fav place and that was his office to think how he is going to found bani as till now all his attempts were fruitless.The name of bani brought a smile to his face like always.he took out his cell and looked at bani's photo .and after sometime put it back in his pocket.he was in good mood just after looking at bani's photo..with his sprit high he left in the search of bani whose existence was not known to anybody.He tried and tried many days but there was no trace of bani.He hired best detective for this but the result was negative.some times he wonders how can a person vanish in thin air as if she didn't exist on this mother earth and he used to return home very disappointed asing,his urge to meet bani was increasing day be day.

Mean while when he was dedicating his all waking hours in search of bani ,he completely ignored Roshini.he was not taking her calls even let alone spending time with her.Roshini was getting more frustated by this .even jai's parents were noticing change in Jai's behaviour.

He was a bit lost in his thoughts..when they tried to talk to jai ,he just shrugged it off by saying that its after 3 long years he has come back to idea so is missing LONDON.

On one such night when was lying on his bed after returning to his home dejected.he starting talking to bani's photo stored in his cell .

Jai:-where I can find u bani.please tell me .r u this angry with me that u don't even want to show ur face let alone giving me chance.I know I have been jerk but please give me a chance to apolosise.Please bani .Please .I beg you please let me find you..Please bani .

With this he went to sleep hoping for a bettler day tomorrow.

Next day he was little late to get up.when he came down to living room he was surprised to find his whole college gang with roshini ,waiting for him.

Jai:-Hi all ,what a pleasant surprise.

His frds told that they are organising a get together today and hence come to pick him .and no excuse will be entertained.

After lots persuation he finally give in and they headed for a very nice and expensive restorant for lunch .after reaching the venue all were having a blast.roshini was away from jai ,busy in drinking and enjoying but jai was sitting alone in te corner and jai's mind was busy thinking that 1 more day has gone without finding bani.he was praying hard to god to meet bani.he was deep in thoughts suddenly a laughter from near by table disturbed him.that voice seemed familiar to him .he looked over to find who the voice belong to but he could not see anything.after sometime he again listene d that tinkiling laughter so out of curisity he stood at his place and this time he could see 3 pple sitting at a table 2 girls and a guy. 1 girl and guy facing him but other has a back towards him.she was looking very familiar to him but he cann't pinpoint where he has seen her .he was about to go there but the object of his thoughts walked out leaving the other two .so he decided to wait till she comes back.Its been 15 mins but she was not coming .meanwhile roshini and his other frds came to him and started complaining what a bore he had become.he manged to give them a weak smile as his attention was captured by someone else.his frds were saying that they should make a move and jai happily agreed to that as all he wanted to get out of this and roshini who was making advances towards him.when they all reached to door ,the site which greeted jai ,left him stunned out of his bits.

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as I haven't got to re-read it so there will be many mistakes ,as always please ignore them.I know it is a boring part but still please comment .I am eagerly waiting for all comments.
one more thing how many of u want me to introduce jai and bani's child as a result of that night.do tell me please.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
I bet he finally saw Bani. Nice, cant wait... Though it would be cute to have a toddler in the story, I dont think Bani will be able to get revenge since she does have something connecting them to eachother.
I want Jai to pursue Bani and cont ignoring Roshni. maybe u should make him get married to roshni after he realizes that he is in love with bani. and Roshni can make his life hell. But no I want JB together in the end. oh well u write it the way u want, we will still read it and love it. But hopefully no kid.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
hey dear
that was agood part
i hope taht girl was indeed bani
and jai is giving a good treatment to roshni
no dear we dont want a child of JB as of now
plzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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