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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Nice update.😊 U scared me there with the little girl dressing up like Bani and then calling her ma. Roshni and the others still 🤬 🤬 🤬 🤬 And Jai just standing there gaping like a fool and not saying anything to stop them (I do not expect him to defend Bani). Im sure he's grown up and more mature but unless he starts standing up for stuff that matters I'll keep wishing Bani ruins him. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Bani should have gone for the count and knock Roshini to the ground.

JW is such a wimp, stood there listing to Roshini insulting Bani and

not say a word, no wonder she went away from him.

Hey great update, continue soon and take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hey dear, 1 point of time in ur update even i was confused, even i thought that bani and ranveer got married
but then u cleared our confusion.
that was a good update
and good to see a change in banis attitude
hope she teaches jai a good lesson
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
yayy u finally updated
i have been waiting for i dont remember how long :)
oww so bani is not the mom, and is going to seek revenge
please dont disappear this time
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Hi
I hate the character Jai in this story doesn't the guy have a back bone. At least now can't he open his mouth and show how sorry he is for the mistakes he did. And wondering who is Bani now really. And I would like to see what his good for nothing friends have to say. I hope she can make all of their lives miserable especially Roshinis.
bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Jai Bani meet again. JAi thinks Bani is married to Ranveer & is jealous.


Nice part. Waiting to see what happens next.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
so disgusting...........
Hate Jai and frds....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU??? PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY SOON!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
thanks everybody for such wonderful comments:- here is the part 10
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PART 10
While on the other hand Jai was not able to sleep at all.He was excited,sad ,happy heartbroken ,all at one time .he himself didn't know what he is feeling or what he want to feel right now.He was super excited to see bani after such a long time .she was looking WOW!!.he was sad that he couldn'talk to her .he was angry on himself and his frds that they insulted bani and he didn't do anything about it ,he was boiling with rage by just thinking of that incident and decided to teach a lesson to his frd and roshni ,well forget her ,she was not even worth of time which he was wasting on thinking about her.Jai was shoked at the direction of his train of thoughts.

Jai:- what I am thinking .I am engaged to roshni to be married.and she was the girl I want to spend my life with .I have proposed her with my own will .Then how can I have these kind of thoughts .

He shakes his head as if to clear his head and took a sip from the glass he was holding since last an hour .But it seems as if his thoughts knew only one destination or bani's thoughts have made a permanent residing place in his mind .So his thoughts again wanders to bani .Jai was so heartbroken that bani is married and more over have a kid and today she didn't even bother to look at him even once as if he was not athere.Jai look bani's picture and said :- did u really forget me bani? I know I am such a jerk and u have every right to hate me .U didn't even cast a hateful look in my direction,Am I not even worth of your hatred.?I know that even today I behaved like a stupid and let those ppl say those things about u.Please bani I want to talk to u ,to tell u how sorry I am for what I did with u .Please give me chance.with that he promoised himself since bani is here in mumbai itself He will find her at any cost.But one thing he too was curious how come bani was looking so rich but then again he thought may be her husband is a rich guy.At the mention of her husband he again felt that he didn't like the sound of bani having a husband .but why ? this he himself doesnot know.He decided thet he has to get all the details of bani and that hsband of her ..what was the name of the guy'ummmm..ranveer ya 'right' ranveer.But one thing he didn't know that he didn't have to do anything to find bani.She was coming to him and coming with full force and for good.

Next morning when jai reached office he got a call saying a representative from oberoi groups wants to meet him.jai couldn't believe his ears and luck.Oberoi groups was the bigeset business group in the world. They are into everything and they are no I in every field ,u just name it and u will find there lable on that be it cosmatics,electronics,steel,clothing,computers,lingeries,their's was a top most fashion house inn world,hotels..In short everything you can think of irrespective of its size or important. It was every businessman's dream to do business with Oberois.Jai was very thrilled ,He himself went to greet that person and escorts him into his office.

Person:- Hi,I am Tarun.Senior executive in Oberoi group of hotels.

Jai:- Jai walia

Tarun:-who doesn't know u

Jai:- U are embarrassing me .we are nothing in compare to Oberois.so tell me what did I do to get a luck on my side for this call from Oberois,

Tarun:- I am here with a proposal for u as u might have heard that Oberois are planning to open their hotel chain here in India.

Jai being a shrewd businessman asked:-mr tarun tell me 1 thing ..there are pple who will do anything to work with then instead of opening a tender as per process, why are u contacting me directly?

Tarun has ans to his every doubt and question told him that they are doing so because they think that walias are best and instead of wasting time in tender thing they want to strat working together as soon as possible and after a moment he added "that is if u are interested.." otherwise no worries Oberoii can find another partner as u said that anyone will be willing to work with us

Jai who was so thrilled inside just told that its OK with him and they can go ahead with this project .Tarun left saying that he will convey this to his boss so that they can formaly start meetings to discuss this project.He left home with very happy mood .when he reached home it was dinner time and roshni's family along with her is waiting for him.on seeing her jai's mood changed but he was too happy to shout at anybody so he quitly made his way to livng room where everybody was seated.he happli announced about Oberoi's propasal .everybody was very happy as this association with oberoi will take them abroad and will defenatly help them in local mkt.

Roshini was very happy she said next time if jai goes for meeting she will come along to as she want to see the company in person whose products she is using although they are completely out of her budget but afterall status is something which she can't live without.

Roshini in her mind :if I can impress even an executive then I'll happily leave u jai darling because even their executives so are well off that they can buy 10 walias like u, even if u are most rich person in India and if I can be even on talking terms with any lady in their family that will surely be icing on the cake as I know that there is no male in that family to impress .She was wondering how filthy rich these Oberoi are if there employees are like this.

Then she loudly to everybody:- I have found that their family is very small only 2 couples and it is there neice who will inherit all this unaccountable wealth.and empire

Everybody was shocked as they didn't know this piece of news and was wondering how come media was kept away from heiress of such business family because reporters from world wide news channels remains assembled in front of their gates to even get a glimps of them.

Little did they know they are soon going to be face to face with this heiress and it will knock life out of them specially Jai and roshini.

Even if u find this part boring like hell (which I am sure u will 😉) even then plase don't forget to leave a comment.so looking forward to ur lovely comments

Edited by smiles_2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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JAi haunted by Bani's image & memories, Roshni ready to dump Jai at earliest opportunity meaning she won't insist on rushing the wedding plans & Bani comng back in Jai's life for good..........all is well.

Can't wait to see Bani's plan.

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