short ff-my life(mn) last part-page 17 - Page 8

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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
Hey good start.
continue soon dear.
heena.damor thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
gr8 part yaar........ wow mayur kiss wo bhi do bar........wow........
plzz ab suspense khol do yaar......who is dis person?????
continue soon dear....
thanks 4 d pm ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ananya_s

OMG aditi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love u sooooooooooooooooo much fr writin dis one!!!!!!! muuuaaaaahhhhhhhhh..........it was sooo awesome mindblowin really......aww mayu nd nups r soooo passionate bt nxt time dey kiss make it private.....lol ..........nyway do continue soon

luv ya
ananya

thx for likeing this
ok later i will make it private
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

hey i'm really very very sorry for the late comment......was very busy.....😭

coming to your ff i read both the parts......i'm glad Mayur finally confessed......😳
waiting to know who this mystery man is......
thanksssss for such lovely parts but sad to know it'll get over.....
Thanksssss a lot for your PM.....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiii dear lovely part!!
fantastic..........
loved the way when mayur where in the room
and the door was open
and all were watching the kiss
and then gunji kiss sammy's chik!!
and others were wishing a boy/girl!!
awesome work!!!
continue soon pls!!
see yaa
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Oh my God. How romantic .... kiss....
Waiting for the next part very soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part -7
now they both were happy
they don't know all people arround them also happy.
all are planning for a surprise party for nup and maynk ,all of them sam is much happier becoz he knew

that nupur face alot of trouble these days and maynk is the one who shall keep her happy,and he was

happy for both of them
after the incident she forgot to live but now she was happy and seeind this he was also happy.
here in nups room -
she thought what happen i kissed maynk ,this is new feeling to me,i want to feel his lips more ,i want to

feel him ,i dont want to leave him by god, what was happened to me????
i wnt to live in his embrace till the end of my life .i wnt to seel his lips with mine for forever,
im feeling like cinderlla and he is my prince
yes,i know i love him,
she is jumping with joy,feeling of love and happines crapt in her mind
but what ever we think sometime this is not happen we don't know what fate store for us.
she heaar someone callinh her she turned and see her refeliction in mirror
nup reflection-what happen ,why are you happy
nup-you know im in love,he loves me and i love him.
nup ref-is he said that he loves you ?
nup- it is not necessary to confess i read her eyes ,his eyes tell me that he loves me,his one look palpitate

my heart
he is so naive ,with good heart
nup ref-acha so you think that you know him so tell me ,can you tell him the truth or everything which

happen in past
you tell him na about your past
????????
nup-nahi,i dont tell him
nup ref-so tell him ,or u feel uncanny to tell him????
your cheating him
nup- no,i cant do this
nupref- so this is your love
tell him the truth
and the refeliction disapper
nup was crying
she locked the door and sit on the floor her hands was on her head
she was crying badly,and remember the day when her life changed
IN PAST-
nup to gun- today im very happy,
top of the world
all r coming
we will enjoy alot
gun-yes di ,im also excited .but now we shall go for party.
nup-yes lets go
IN COLLEGE-
SUMI[ nupur best friend]
su-hey nupur ,wow you r looking stunning
aaj to morena ke sabi ladke bus tuje hi dekte rah jayge
pehle se hi sabhi tuj per latoo hai
ab or kisse diwana bana hai
NUP- by god, jise diwana bana tha vo to shadi shuda hai

su-surprise oh !srk
tu bhi na chal chale
[they all r enjoying and dancing]
after 2 hours
g to n-di chale kya mein bahut borr ho rahi hoon
agar tum rukna chati ho to ruk jao
n- nahi mein bhi chalti hoo
g-arrrrre nahi di aap enjoy karo
[gunjan went home]
su,n and all their friends were enjoying party
after one hours they all exhausted from dancing
so they all sit down and chatting about their dreams,childhood everything,nup said that she want to see

the school again so she was going to her class to feel these memory in her heart
[she was going outside]
suddenly someone pulled her in room ,by the force she fall on the floorbefore she stand up the person grip

was tighter on her mouth and she was struggling to free herself from the person grip, she was trying but

all in vain,room was totally dark so she cant see the face of person,she bite person hand but no one hear

her scream due to party music.
the person put a sock in her mouth and throw her duptta and tied her hand with rope
,she was feeling numb, and some one snatching her life from her
she was struggling
and the person ripeed her dresss and
now
here su-itne derrr ho gayi ye nupur kyo nahi aaye kahin so to nahi gayi ,jakar dekti hoon
she go outside and shout her name
she hear some one is sobbing ,she go there and see her and put on the light and
what she saw see never want to see
she saw she was sobbing and her dress was ripped like someone struugle not struggle some one raped her
she shaked her but she was not in her sense
nupur kya hua,tell ,who have done this ,who is the rapacious person
she grap nups duptta and cover her ,sumi again shaked her
after 15 minute she speak
n-su m i vo,he touce me,he tied me i struggle ,i was and before she tell she was crying
sumi hale her and hugg her to comfort her
after comforting nupur she take her to her home and call gunjan that nupur will stay with her in night
[here they sam and all were prepraing for surprise party for nupur]
g-ok koi baat nahin,u will talk
[they dont know what happen in the party]
here sumi and nupur were alone in home becoz sumi 's parents died in car accident ,she and her brother

two person live in the house ,but he is out for some work
sumi and nupur was siting in room and nupur changed her clothe
what was my fortune,she was crying and sumi was consoling her ,whatever i do this is happen to me,why

,why???????/
sumi he touched my lips,he touched me all over i feel dead like someone killing the dead person
i feel like a shit--------
sumi put her hand on her mouth and said -shut up nupur ,you are not done anything ,plz control yourself
and hugged her
nupur was crying ,plz dont think this
n-sumi ,if papa and gunjan will know then what will happen ,how i face them
papa will die if they know
i dont want to live,
i want to die ,god plz god ,why u dont kill me plz so i never humnilate infront everyone ,plz kill me,she was

crying and said all this stuff
sumi can also feel her pain tear also beaming from her eyes
su-shut up nupur ,why u will die ,the person who do this will die ,he is not a human
he is mad ,and he is not for live in this good world,plz control
nu-i dont want that papa and gunjan know anbout this,
she made decision that she will not tell them anything
su-nupur you hav to strong ,i know this is difficult but ,uncle and gunjan dont bear this truth ,they love u

alot after aunty death u were like mother to gunjan,
nu-ha ,i cant tell them.she was sobbing[sumi know this is difficult for her this is like some one telling a

dead person to live life again,she can see deadness on her face,but she dont want her friend to loose

,whatever happen she shall alwys with her friend]
phone ring
sumi pick phone-there is gunj
g-hey di where is nupur its eight o clok or kya aap abhi tak so raahay thay,ya aapki baatein abhi finish nahi

hue hai
su-no,bus hum aa rahe hai
sumi tell nupur to ready she couldnt sleep whole night and her eyes was swooleen sahe tell nupur to take

shower and then they go to their house
nupur was trembelling with unknown fear she never hide anything from gunjan and papa and now she was

hiding this truth frm them,but it hurt them
or i dont want to hurt them[so i will not let them know anything]
here in the house all are ready to give surprise to nupur
when nupur and sumi enter the house
all shout-------- surprise
nupur now see dia ,sam and chacha and all r there
she feel tear beeming her eyes
she run and hug her chcha and cry loudly all r thinking that she was happy so she was crying to see them

after a long time,
they all r chatting ,they meet after a long time,but this is surprise that nupur is not talking she was

pondering
sam -gunjan ye nupur ko kya kissi se pyaar ho gaya hai jo devdasi lag rahi hai,aisa lag raha hai ke jaasese

sarri raat nahi soe ho or to jasse ko morgue se aayi ho
hey nupur
he call her but no response
then he shack her she come in sense and see where she was and when she see sam and all she asked them

what happen
s-ye to muje pocna chayia tumse kya hua,
n-kuch nahi ab yaha se janna hei to ,she lied cleverly
sam-dont worry hum yaha kabi na kabhi aa jaya karnge ne
[all are enjoying but all happines is fly frm nups life she forget to smile ,to prank,to crack jokes everthing
and all time she was serious no bubblu and no chatter
]
after 10 days
sam was wondering what happen to nupur he want to know this,why when she smile it not reach to her eyes

like she was only smile becoz this is like homework but why he want to know all the answer of his questions
and he will find this
here nupur know how she spend her life every night she wake up from the fear like someone toucchind her
checking her
every night she has nightmare about those days after that she was frighteen to sleep,she never want to

sleep ,she alwys stare blankly to the roof
and this was the limit of everthing
may be her pain cross the limit ,uncontrolable for her to bear this so she decided that she dont want to

livee
yes she decided to commit sucide
today all r planning to go out for a picnic
gun-papa kitna enjoy hoga na hum sab bahut mazaa karge
papa-ha beta tum sab jao mein nahi jaooga
gu-nahi papa aapko bhi chalna hai,dia papa ko kaho ke chalna hai
dia-tyaa ji aapko to chalna he padega ,hum sab devi maa ke mandir chalenge
chaliye
papa-acha chaloga
sam has some plan in his mind so he said-arre tum sab uncle ko laker chalo mein nupur ko laker aata hoon vo

sumi ke ghar gayi hai
[here nupur know their plan she decide to leave the house,so she write a latter
]
"papa and gunjan plz forgive me .
im doing this ,i hav no other choice im gooing from u forever
papa,plz take care of gunjan"
and plz forgive me papa i cant tolrate all this i dont bear the pain
plz papa i dont want to do this"
and she marched out from the house from the back door so nobody can see her
dia and uncle all gone for the temple
so in house there is only nupur and sam
sam go to nups room and call her
but there is no one he saw some paper laying on the bed he picked it and read
he put the latter on the bed and run to find her
s- i know something wrong with her,but why she dont tell me,nupur where are u,
if anything happen to u ,to mein gunjan or uncle ko kya kahoga
nahi mein tumhe kuch nahi hone doone
he go to sumi house but the house is locked ,kaha ja sakte hai nupur

he was on his motorbyke so he thought may be she go to river
he go and see her duptta got struk in bushes and he jumped in the river after twenty minute of swim
he find her unconcious and lifeless
he take her in arms and lay down on the floor and press her stomach so all water puked from her mouth

and after 15 minute she become concious she opened her eyes and see sam staring her with terry eyes
when sam see he hug her and said nupur what you want to do, sucide
but why ,tell me,he slaped her, tune ek baar bhii hamare baare mein nahi socha ,agar tuje kuch ho jaata to

gunjan or uncle kasse jee pate
he scream at her
she was sobbing but didnt utter a word
he said- nupur bata aise kya baat hai jo tune yeh kiya ,bata
nu-she didnt say anythind
sa-to kya ab apne is dost ko bhi kuch nahi batagi,tuje meri kasam hai bata muje
nupur was crying and hugged sam and said i dont want to do this but i
s-tell me ,
[she tell him the whole incedent of party and waht happen]
hearing all this sam punced the rock and his eyes was red with anger he want to kill that baste* who

touche her best friend
nupur was sobbing
he put his hand on her head and said tu muje apna bhai kahte hai
or itne badi baat nahi bate tune muje ,kya mein nahi hoon tera saath dene ke liye,gun or uncle nahin to

kam se kam muje to bate ,
n-mein samaj nahi pa rahi thi ke mein kya karo
sa-so u done this ,no nupur forget all this ,i know this is difficult but you hav to do this for gunj and for

us
promise me ke you never do this again .im always with u,i will not left u alone
n-after a long time she smile,smile of trust
[after relaxing nupur both return to house to get clothe for nupur]
but when they return there was alot of mob
they wonder why were alot of people
thay go and see uncle was lying coverd with blood
n-papa ,she was stammring
and sobbing
s-ye kasse hua ,he ask people ,someone tell that he slips from the terrace
n-papa u cant do this ,plz papa wake up
gun,dia all are there
they all were crying
gunjan huged dia
n-watch her father and touch her feet papa i know ur playing with me,plz papa i cant tolrate this papa

,know joke is over plz papa wake up
g-hug heer and said ,di papa will never wake up.they leave us alone
after all the canon
after this incident they live morna only few days
nupur now feel that she was the reason for her father death becoz she didnt find the letter she wrote
and she think after reading this her father
but now she dont want that gunjan will know everything she have to live for gunjan
she tell sam that she want to move frm there asap
so they all go from there and satteled there
IN PRESENT-
she remember the whole incident
yes i dont tell this to mayu
i dont want that gunjan will know anything about htis
i will not go infront of mayu
i know my heart throbs when he come near me
but i want to make distance frm him
yes i do thi
this is the seventh part .hope you like it.plz comment if u like it or not


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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
hey owsom part dear
luv it
n fanx foh pm
keep it up...^^
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
oh my god.why did you have to make it so tragic?i just dunno what to comment.that was very touching & a heavy-hearted update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
Adi, this update was sooo sad 😭 😭 😭
poor Nupur...everything seems to have one wrong with her..poor girl..
thank god there was sammy..n i hope she does tell mayank/!!
....Divya

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