short ff-my life(mn) last part-page 17 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
hi friends this is the fifth part
hope you gues like it
part 5
after they go to beaches when nups fall in mayus arms
all r watching both of themmaynk and nupur get up and nupue say thx to mayu
maynk is lost somewhere see nupur and said its ok then they all go from there and go home
but they dont know that someone is chasing them ya the same person and when dia ,uday and nup,gun reach home the person note the address and laugh
per-mein tumhe dunde liya nupur akhir five months baad tum muje mill he gayi aab muje koi nahi rok sakta
and laugh
maynk go home and think about nupur or she said on the beach .he thought that he will make comfortable nupur and make her cheerful
first time he is not concentrate on study only think about nup and go to sleep
here nups also thought what happened she was not able to sleep,so she go to terrace she is walking on the terrace when she feel that there is somebody who is watching her,she saw down but dont find anybody and she go back to her room
she dont know but there is some person behind the plants
nupur go to her room and saw gun peace full sleeping she smile and thouht what ever happen gun will not lost her smile
she think about may when she hugged him she feel more secure like now no body can harm her ,he is good gift to her ,all her pain and sorrow vanished when she hugged him
she jarked herself and said what im thinking no this is not right
and go to sleep
next day:-
nup is ready for college but today she is not thinking about unhappy thinks after few months she feel really happy then the phone ring
she pick it
n-hello
per-
n-hello ,koi kuch to bolo
p-yeh tum ho
n-kaun
p-nupur
n-ha par aap kaun
per-muje nahin pehchan,meri awaj kasse bhool gayi
n-kaun hai
per-meri jaan
n-shut up and put the phone
again phone ring
n-hello
per-kyo kaat rahin ho
she again cut it this is done by her 5 time
again phone ring
she picked kaun ho or kyo muje tang kar rahey ho
per -tum muje bhool gayi ho to mein tumhe sab yaad klarvte hoon bhool gayi vo
cut
again
nu pick it and said-kutte ,kamenie teri maa behan nahi hai kya jo aise kissi ko bhi pershaan karta hai
tere pass bekaar balance hai phone karne ke liye lakin mere pass faltu kaan nahin hain usee sun ne ke liyeor agar himmat hai to samne aao phir bateti hoon tumhe
other side the person:-ab pata laga ke tumhe bolna bhi aata hai varna ab tak sirf suna he tha dekha nahi tha or ye itne sarri achhi achhi bata jo tumne mujse kahin ye sahi phone karne walo ko millti hai ya sirf muje par hi kripa ke hai aapne arre main maynk bol raha hu or tum mujse samne he baat kar lena
meine to ye lkehne ke liye phone kiya tha ke tumhe yaad hai na ke aaj college ke baad project ka work complete karna hai
n-ha bus aa rahi hoon
at college
m to n-
hi ,vo indian culture par project bane ke liye class ke baad chalte hai ok
n to m-vo sorry vo muje laga phone par koi or hai is liye
m-chalo kam se kam muje pata to laga ke tum baat bhi karte ho
n-to kya tum muje goonga samjte theyy kya
m-hamari aise kya mazal aaj he to pravachan sune thay aapse
and they both laugh
after the class they go to temple and many more place for the project
when they done theri work its quite late
m-nupur you dont go alone home i will drop you sit with me on my byke
she sit with maynk and they going to home suddenly a car come infront mayu bike so he push break so due to this nupu hugged mayu
mayu feel very very happy he drop her
at home:-
nup feel strange that she like the huge its feel like may complete the emptyness of her life like a lifeline
mayu also feel strange feeling for nup he wanted nup to be smile when she smile he feel like find a hidden treasure
he feel some feeling for nups and want to know her more
the days past after 10 days:-
now may ,nups become good friends yet nups feel him like a friends but mayu knoe that it is more than a friendship
precap:- the person want to kill maynk ,was he able to kill mayu
or in next two part u will know what happen to nupur
well this ff is left onlly three part
hope you all like this part
or if there is any mistake then tell me i will make it right
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
OMG who is the person what is the suspense.... wwaiting for that dear.. omg he is planning to kill mayank nahiiiiiiiiiiiii,.....................

Please update fast dear.... waiting for that...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
thanks for the pm firstly.the plot is thickening.good going.want more of mayur scenes.but you take your time
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
wow..that was awesome yaar !!
yeh mystery person kaun hai ?...by god !1
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
it was too good yaar!!......now plz tell fast who is this mysterious person who wants to kill mayank!!!!.....nice suspence!!...continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
wow yaar!...that was awesome
who is this mystery person??...BY GOD! ab toh main pareshaan ho rahi hoon....
continue soon

luv
ananya

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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
awesome adi
wohs d person???????????
update next part sooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
eagerly waiting
update sooooooooooooooo plezzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
hey amazing
keep it up...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
wow nice part yaar........ ye hidden person kon hai??????? he wants 2 kill mayank????? no......plzz suspence jaldi se end karo....... gr8 going dear.... plzz continue soon...... thanks 4 d pm dear.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
nice upd dear....but only 3 more parts huh.......
who is that culprit?how dare he plan to kill mayu...
waiting waiting for ur next part....

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