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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi friends hope you like it
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hi part -6
maynk and nup become good friends
mayu alwys feel that their is something special between their relation but what is not known
some time she is excited or some time very sad he cant understandd her modeswings but he want to know her every small thing she like or which is belong to her
he want to make her happy
all time now he think about her "ke kasse usee dekte hee uske dil ke dhadkan bedd jati hei kyo uski her baat usee achi lagti hai kya yahi pyaar hai"
he listen her favourite song
" woh pehle baar jab hum mile
haato mein haat jab hum chale
ho gaya ye dil diwana hota hai pyar kya mein janna
teri aankho mein jannat bassa ke chala
teri julfo ke chva mein chlta chala
teri nano mein chain lab per khushi
tujko hei main mohabbt bana ke chala"
he remember every moment he spend with her.
he feel watch nup but this is sunday
he stand up kyo na sam se milne jao dia ka ghar bhi pass hai to waha bhi chala jaoga
wah to nup mein aa raha hoon
nupurs house-
sunday so as usual uday to eatinhg mein busy the or dia face pack try kar rahi thi
outside in garden gunjan is watering the plants with pipe
suddenly water is not comming from the pipe she bent down to look the pipe and all the water spread on her
she see nupur is standing behind with pipe piece and she shout
diiiii i will not leave you and she run after nups
now they both are playing with water and enjoying they dont know mayu is watching them
he feel very happy to see her smile he dont want this moment to end she always smile
she is looked sweet and cutepie when she smilethis site of her is so precious for him he want to catch her in his arm and to kiss her tell her that she is so special to him
uday called gunjan so she went inside now nup is alone in the garden
he went to her and pick ther pipe and spred the water on her
n-seemaynk and shout tum bhi wait i will not leave you
they both were playing with water
they fall on green grass nups over the maynk
her face water drop on mayu lips
when he see her eyes he didint know what happen they both stand up
and he see few water drop on her face he come close to her, and kissed on both her cheeks and then her forehead
they both know that gunjan ,dia and uday ,sam watching them
they lost in eachother eyes
nupur want to say somethingbefore she could say enything else his lips were on her lips.
he don't want to losse that moment
seeing this dia shout omg this is true or im daydreaming
sam put his hand on her mouth and they all go inside the house .
sam is happy he feel no nups will get happyness back in her life
dia and benji is shocked
outside the house-
the same person feel like he will kill mayu now
per-tum nahi bachoge
i will kill you how u touched her
she is mine only mine.
she belonge to me.
and he goes from there
both mayu and nupur come to their sense nupur is shocj\ked and she run inside the house,maynk also go
in house they all are chill and dont ant to show that thay see what had happen outside the garden
nupur run to her room and mayu went inside the house
thay all greet him
s-to aaj mayu study ko chod yaha kasse kahin ye koi dream to nahi
m-nahi sam yaar tum sab se milne ka mann kiya
g-humse ya di se
d-ha humse to tum
u-are tumhare cloth wet kasse ho gaye lagta hai garden mein khal rahey they kissi ke sath
noe thay all are troubling him with their question
m-oh ye nupur kaha hai,pata nahin vo kya soch rahi hogi pata nahin muje kya ho gaya tha,
abhi to mein sirf apne dil ke baat samaj paya hoon,
or kahin vo muje galat samj lege or hamari friendship nahi,
muje usse se baat karni hoge.
he stood up and said nup kaha hai
g-vo room mein hai ,first floor par second room go
he go from their or here they all r deciding for party to celebrate for both their lovely hub
n-inside room ye kya ho gaya hai nup, kyo tu maynk ke tarf kichi chali jaati hai,kyo uske choona muje acha lagta hai,kyo aaj jo hua muje acha laga,
nahin mein aise nahin soch sakte ,he is very good boy or mein uske liye sahin nahi hoon
im not right for him
per kyo mein usee apni her dard batna chati hoon kyo jab vo nhin hota to har baat adhori lagti hai kyo aisa lagta hai ke vo sirf mere liye bana hai
kyo uske naam mere naam ke saath judkar apna mean bata hai
uske bina muje mere naam ka koi matlab nahin lagta ,kyo bas uski ej nazar meri jingi ko
nayi pehcaan deti hai
ha shyad yahin pyar hai ,par ye pyaar mere liye nahin hai ,jab use mera sach pata laga to ,nahin mein uske life spoil nahin kar sakte
she is sitting in her wet clothes
she hear knock on the door ,gunjan hogi she said aa jao
m-went inside
n-when she see her she turn
m-he looked at her ,he thought he is looking like an angel, his angel.
he was couple of inches away from her he said -nupur plz ,vo mein,jo kuch bhi necchi hua
, vo ,his word is not supporting him he is almost crying
"she don't see him like this,now thay both are standing very close
she touched mayu face and kiss his cheeks ,she feel he is very sad .she dont see himsad
he is her life after papa death she feel like the love she lost she get it from him
she never see him sad or unhappy she can do everthing for him
she placed her lips on here.it took couple of moment for mayu to register what was going on,he was having his second kiss,by the girl which he loved most .there was so
much passion no body want to lose this moment ,she felt her brain loose all control on her body,the blissfull sensation was so strong that she was trembling .
she dont close her room door so our party is also watching the kiss
sam said to gunjan -dekho kuch seekho nupur say ,vo dekho kitne pyaar se
before he complete gunjan place her lips on his cheeks and run from there he is stood their like a stachu and his hand on his cheeks where she kiss.
dia is watching this feel kassh mere pass bhi koi hota ,uday also feel sad that he is single
if he is not then he will also get some kiss
d, u went to their room and sam is also go outside with his hand on his face
heree in room they both r not know what happen outside the room thay are lost in their eyes ,they broke the kiss now nups blusshing or mayu see what they done or
now he know that she also love him they both have the passion in thier kiss only they hav to confess this.
thsy both are in their own thouht
the day is very very great for everyone,best day
nupur is happy or mayu also

this is sixth part hope you like this
if there is any mistake plz forgive me
im not good to write love so plz bear this

Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome update................loved it thoroughly..............

post the next 1 soon.........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear lovely part dear.. wow so much passion but who is the tirdh person?? what is the suspense?? please update fast and PM me dear.... i am loveing it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
I thoroughly enjoyed it, keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG aditi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love u sooooooooooooooooo much fr writin dis one!!!!!!! muuuaaaaahhhhhhhhh..........it was sooo awesome mindblowin really......aww mayu nd nups r soooo passionate bt nxt time dey kiss make it private.....lol ..........nyway do continue soon

luv ya
ananya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!2 kisses within such a short time!so superfast!now that their track is set,it is leaving me to wonder that who is the secret guy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey owsm dear
keep it up....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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now mayur first kiss........that was so sweet part adi....but i want to know that third person...ok waiting for the unknown person......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow sooo romantic part..............plzzzzzzz pm me......i hope mayu will be safe😭

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