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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4:-
Oho Mayu has started liking Noops in only a meeting,😳 😳 😳 that's y he is feeling sad whenever she cries n wants her to smile always.😊 😊 😊 Who is that man who hated when Mayu hugged Noops? 😡 😡 😡What relation he has with Noops? 😡 😡 😡 She hugged him n i love that scene.😳 😳 😳
Gunjan made a sand castle for him n Sammy but she didn't tell him directly n ignored his question.😉 😉 😉 Firstly Sammy than Gunjan n finally my sweety Noops won the golgappa competition 😆 😆 😆. Mayu was shocked first but he was happy vow!
😉 😉 😉
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thx for all ur support

i will soon update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh GOD...SUCH A NIce 1. Hats off 2 u.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reply for part 5:-
Who the hell is that person who is chasing Noops n he now had her phone no n address too. Noops likes Mayu's company n so as Mayu likes her so much. What a funny n cute scene when Mayu called her n she missunderstood him as being that ridiculous man. Now Mayu knows that she can talk.
Noops n Mayu r working with each other n Mayu gave lift to her. The scene when Mayu applied breaks suddnely n Noops hugged him was so cute. Mayu is thinking about Noops n so as Noops. I think both has started liking each other.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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part 8
hello friends im updaing this hope u enjoy this
precap-nupur was raped by some one
and her father death

nupur was make her mind to stop falling for maynk
and here maynk on the way is very happyfor all this,he reached home, maynk mom see his face and said
mm-kya baat hai mayu aaj bahut chamak raha hai kahin usne tuje purpose to nahin kar diya
m-ha,usne muje kis,when he relaize what was he going to spilt
kya ma tum bhi na pata nahin kya kya sochte hoon,ye bhi nahin ke beta tiered ghar aaya hai use kana doo
bus aate he question pocne lag gayi hoo,and saying this he want to his room,today sleeping and hunger is far away from him. he was smiling and thinking all the good moment he spend with her.hoe the all familes enjoy picnic
flashback
[they all went for a picnic with all their familes together along gunjan, nupur,benji,dia,dodo and their parents]
so all youngster in same car
and the oldies in other car so they all r enjoying on the way of farm house
well as we know where there is girls they will not stop chatting "no girl can tolrate silence"
so now we all r arguing ,as the same samrat and dia are arguning on some silly topic and all this funny toppis changed in to big fight between them,so i tried to sort this but all vain and now we all invoved in this fight.and now girls want us to appolize but we are not in the mood
well so the way is spend with arguing and we reach farm house,boys means we all r stubbron and dont want to say sorry to girls,
now when we all r going inside the farm house dia and nupur gave us "we will see u look"
well why we afriad we say we will also see we dont afraid from you
now we want to see what thay want to do
our whole families now arrived there and now we are dancing ,chatting
but we r watching dia from corner of eyes like something cooking in her mind but well we see this later
so now all are doing big party there enjoying with fun


It was old habit of the old friends to sit and have tea after dinner, at least once a week. After a union of the friends, like always they sat in the living room scattered into smaller groups of interest, recalling there old days, whilst there children simply prepared for there everlasting friendships.

diawith nupurwent to the oldest group out of respect first. Her father sat with his best friends, sharing a conversation, remembering there early days of marriage. but they stopped as they saw her approaching. "hmm, why have you lot stopped talking?" she asked

"nothing, there talks of the elders nupur"

"ok, I agree, now tell me, do you want a warm drink?"

"of course, why don't you make us your special ginger tea" he turned to benjifather and samart father "you'll love it"

"really, that's good, it's been long since I've had ginger tea" bf said

"Ok, in a few minutes, you'll have your tea" she said went towards all ladies small group.

ladies was talking about the kitchen and life as a housewife. Typical lady's topic, nupur and dia thought.

"aunti, have you had your medicines?" she asked

"umm, well, I kind of"

"forgot" she completed "how many times have I told you to take your medicines on time? anyways, now tell me, do you want a hot drink?" she asked them all

"A hot cup of coffee for me" benji mother said

" umm, I'll have tea" sam mom added

"Right" she smiled nupur and dia affectionately "what would I do without both of you?"

"Hmm, nothing but be in a mess" nupur replied, then chuckled "if I weren't there then you would have someone else, isn't there gunjan" she said hugging her neck.

maynk and sam watched from a distance, the way nupur swiftly moved onto each group turn by turn, oh, how adorable she looked when she hugged sam mother, it was so sweet watching her. Oh how he wished shewill hugg him ,he thought what he said[maynk]

"nupur, you apparently forgot us" maynk called from behind

"what do you want now?" dia asked irritated

"two black coffee's"

"no way" and she turned to leave

"fine you asked for it" he looked at her as she turned to look back with a dirty look "Uncle--"

she was cut off "ok, ok, I'll make it, but don't get your hopes high" and she left whilst maynk and samrat laughed heartily

"god, that was funny" samrat exclaimed as tears of mirth spilled from his eyes.

"yeah, it felt good and authoritive"

"man, why she get angry on this small things maynk said to samrat
sa-hey dont worry we will teach a lesson to these girls
and they both hig fie each other.
ma-im getting attracted to her ,nupur is so childish ,i love it,he sont know sam listen all this
sam said-
"if your meant to be together you will get her" he sighed "love is beautiful you know, attraction can form love and if its love, you'll have her beside you"

"I wish" he sighed "my, my sam, you know a lot about love, what's going on"

"nothing, I--I just said what came to mind"


Meanwhile, nupur entered the kitchen, while, dia and gunjan stared at her "so?" dia asked

"two black coffee's"

"Eeek" they shrieked in unison, whilst gunjan looked at them as if they were aliens.

"ok" nupur started "there's six cups of tea, two coffee and two black coffee's" nupur memorized "there's something missing, ah , milk, oh

"wow, how do you remember that, forget remembering, how the hell do you manage to do all this cooking and making things?" dia questioned

"It's easy dia,like how u rememgber your fashion tips i will remember all this it's part of everyday life and I believe if you cook for the family then it just increases love in the family" nupur replied pouring the milk into the pan, then putting the stove on

"wow, such good beliefs"
di-i know ur alwys best in all work you do nups

"well, thank you" she mixed the tea mixture in one pan, whilst she mixed the coffee mixture in the other "another thing is that I'm use to it" she boiled the water "I mean I loved to do all this, it's a way to keep yourself busy"

di-"I want to learn as well"
nu-dont worry at all im alwys there
she replied as she poured the tea and coffee in the cups and set them in the tray.

di-"Thank you so much, you're the best" she gave her a side hug "hey what are you going to do with maynk and sam's coffee?"
nu-sh,chup gunjan is here ,we will do dont raise your voice otherwise gunjan will know our plan.
gunjan ja tu bahar ja yaha mein or dia hai na,tu dekh kahin dodo kuch kaam to nahin kar raha jisee se sabhi persheen ho rahay ho
gu-he di mein abhi jati hoo,she leaves
nupur and dia laugh and high fig for the plan
After that she separated the boiled water into two cups, added five spoons of coffee to each, then she added salt to there coffee and thereafter with a few spoons of red chilli powder, also adding Jamaal gota. "how is it?" she asked, looking at dia.

" it would be real fun" they both laughed

"yeah, I'll see you upstairs, you go and sit upstairs I'll be back with our Hot chocolate's"

"ok, see you in a bit, have fun"

"I sure will" and nupur left to serve
di-nupur i will also go i want to see the face of both and also benji

nupur and dia went and presented everyone's hot drinks for them. They took it one by one, praising the taste .maynk mom really like nupur
dia and nupur now went to boys and gunjan serve dodo and benji with cofee.

nupur bent down to offer the coffee to maynkand sam, turn by turn they picked there cups up "no thanks" maynk and sam said

"I don't need your thanks" she replied coldly as she watched him and sam sip on to there coffee's.
dia couldnt control longer so she want outside gunjan is watching the face expression of nups and dia and become suspisious
but here the both poor guys
There smirks converted. They put there cups aside and choked. "What happened?" nupur asked innocently

"what the hell is this?" maynk asked

"your coffee" she looked at them with a mischievous glint in her eyes "aunti" she called

mm stood up, whilst bm and sm simply watched "what happened nupur?"

"auntie, maynk and sam are complaining that the coffee is to bland, but they don't let me put the sugar in it"

"what's wrong" maynk mom asked looking at maynk and samartconcerned

"nothing mom, it's just that we don't feel like having it anymore" maynksaid, but in response got a glare from his mom"but it's alright"
mm-well bachu i notice that this girl will sett u both ,ab aayga mazaa


"Oh, nupur add some more sugar, they might feel better"

"no mom it's fine"
mayn-said
"come on maynk, there's no need for formality"

nupur grinned and added more sugar, which was replaced by salt. She mixed it for them, winked at them "have a nice time" and she left to the kitchen to make three hot chocolates, whilstsamrat dad sat by maynk and samrat talking to them about there life in Mumbai, which was joined by banji dad and sam dad later

maynk and samrat sat there sipping on there coffee's time after time, wanting the bitter taste to go away. They eagerly waited for the elders to leave, but to there misfortune, they sat there observing until they didn't finish the bitter liquid.


In the meantime, nupur went upstairs to enjoy a hot chocolate with gunjan and dia with there topic to laugh,maynk and sam.

"Seriously nupur, I wanted to be there, but I know sam, if he even caught a glimpse of me, I would be so dead"

"I wish I had a camera, it was so funny and then I called auntir as well and then I thought I saw her mother glare at maynk for his stupid comments" she giggled as she revealed the experience.

"god if there like this now then what will they be like later"

"what do you mean" nupur asked, confused

"of course in the toilet" gunjan interrupted, as they laughed heartily, imagining the state of maynk and samart.
gun-di i know something is cooking in your mind ,now she is also laughing
but this is not good but i feel a lot this ye thay deseriv it
and they both are laughing like fools

sam walked out of the bathroom, falling on maynks bed, then looked at maynk, who held his stomach, whilst taking tablets.

"Seriously maynk, these girl will need a tough lesson to learn.sam said

"chill" maynk's stomach made a noise and he rushed to the bathroom. Minutes later he came out holding his stomach.

"Really sam, she's even worse than dia
maynk-how you tolrate yaar both three
they trio are involved in this well we will pay back.
"gunjan was involved, she was in the kitchen, when nupur made it"

"I thought so" maynk replied
s-no gunjan will not
"both will get payback, I'll make sure they learn not to mess with us"

"what will we do" benji saked
m-

"just wait and watch" maynk said rubbing his hands together, as a plan cooked in his mind.

nupur ,gunjan and dia lay on the bed, there voices getting heavy from sleep. They still laughed at the previous incident.
nu-by god ,dia agar tu maynk or sam ke face dekti to , maynk and sam were a good laugh.
what the boy said that the girls are good for nothing ,"only for chatting and make up or we do this for only boys .now they learn new lesson that girl will do anything.
after laughing the trio tired so they asleep


Hours later, nupur woke up hearing the sound of something fall outside. She looked to her side to find dia and gunjan asleep. She pulled the covers off her body and moved towards her balcony, removing he curtains to see who was outside. She saw a cat and sighed. The cat must have dropped something.

She walked towards the bathroom. Shaking her head, she opened the tap, she splashed water on her face, then slowly realized, the waters colour changing. It was turning pink, no red. Red! She thought. Oh my god, blood.

"dia" she shrieked out of fright.

"What happened nupur" dia said as she walked into the bathroom, rubbing her eyes.
n-plz dont raise your voice oterwise gunj will wake up ,ok


"dia, look, the tap, it's got, it's got blood flowing from there" nupur stuttered

dia-"what rubbish nupur" she turned towards the taps to notice, nupur was right.
she want to shout but nupr cover her mouth with her hand

n-dont shout ,gunjan will wake up
dia-"Oh my god Kripa, are you sure" dia asked

"I don't know but it's red"

They heard something drop on the floor. They leFt the bathroom, going to the bedroom and looked around "there's' nothing here, what dropped" dia asked

nu-"It's probably a cat from the balcony"

"they heard something bounce this time "now it doesn't happen more than once, cats cant bounce ball's can they?"
now they both nupur and dia went to the balcony
this time opening the doors and led her out. "see, there's nothing, it was probably a cat"
they here a voice
"It was my cat" they heard a voice behind them. They turned to look in horror to find two zombie like people coming towards them.

dia-"Oh my god, nupur, I told you there was something"

nupur-"but, it's never happened, I'm going to call someone" she said looking back.

dia-"nupur, it's almost impossible, let's make a runner"
nu-but gunjan is sleeping how
dia-dont worry nothing will happen ,
nupur-shut the door and said to dia
"your right, ready, 1, 2, 3, run" theY began to run, but the zombie like creatures caught hold of them.

The zombie like creatures had scruffy green hands, with green faces, for some odd reason reminding dia and nupur of the hulk. The one that held onto nupur pressed his hand to her moth
by god, she realized, it was myank,she can feel her heart throb. She struggled in his grip as his hands pulled her body closer, sending a current down her spine.

dia struggled in the other zombie's arms. God, would this thing get a slap she thought as he pulled her closer, pressing his hand to her mouth, eek a disgusting hand and it smelled of paint.

"Hmm, you enjoy laughing a lot don't you" nupur's zombie spoke, as he grazed his hand down her waist.

"You can laugh as much as you want, after your death" dia's zombie replied.
(here from the sound gunjan also wake up she saw the bed is empty then she hear some noise outside and she try to open the door but it is lock from outside ,she shout di ,dia hey where are you ,diiiiiiii)

dia raised her leg and kicked the zombie where it hurt. He fell to the floor holding the place, to suppress his pain, whilst his mask slipped off.

"sam" dia exclaimed

"well, thank you, that really hurt you know" he said getting up

"you dog, fool, donkey, gorilla, what were you thinking you cow"

"hey chill, quit the name calling"

"And let me guess,maynk , of course that's you"

"well, obviously, your guess was right because that stupid sam ruined the plan"

"O maynk leave nupur, she'll suffocate"

maynk thought-(but i fell god to have her in my arms to see her forever like this ,i can hold her forever)

dia-she open the room door ,and when gunjan saw them she was giglling ,to see samrt in this funny costume

m-put his mask down
n-nupur was watcing mayu like she will kill him at this time

"maynk, get right back here" nupur yelled as he rushed towards nupur's room

"Goodnight girls"they both run

n-maynk and sam you dont know whom you mess you will really need a next adventrous trip to learn

ok, fine, we will wait for this,they both said
n-first you start this ,
now both the girls were fighting with them but gunjan coulnd't control her laugh
ma nd sa-
"yeah, and what you did to us was very nice wasn't it?"
n and dia-
"you deserved it"
if u will say sorry for the moning inciden t then we will forgive you
guyes
maynk and sam-
"we, no way, you should apologize for what you did"
we r only say this in general way
"well we don't care then, we are not apologizing" maynk and sam walked to the other side of the balcony "but we have to admit, you and dia looked really scared with all that freaky stuff"

"whatever"

dia-" but there is red water or should I say blood coming out of the tap, what's that?"

"Simple" benji came forward "I injected red ink into the water which spread into the coming water.
dia-benji i dont think you also with them,
ben-hey here is the matter with boys so i will alwys with them
"Oh god, and the masks, where did they come from?" gunjan inquired

"Oh, I found them in dodo's room"
dia-oh alwys i said dodo not to purchase horror or these things
"god, you two are so stupid" gunjan said "go away and let us sleep" and they walked to the room, locking the balcony door.
gun-dia ,and di i alwys said you not do this
dia -dont worry babes they need this treatment but next time they will learn a hard chapter.
and they asleep

well the next day dance enjoy
we all go to temple with our families
m-im really feel ver very concern with nupur ,her captivative eyes make me more attract toward her
i saw her entering temple she cover her head with duptta and bow her head infront of goddess
and take the prasad
im very happy to see her
she was talking with my mom and with other ladies
my mom alwys like her company
(well this time is to return home)
well here i saw the different nupur bubbl and naughty also ,she has very different features i thought
some things is very strange about her
i want to know more her
she treat mayu mom like her own mom.
he feel attracted toward her
(after thinking all this remebering the past beautiful days he fall asleep with cute smile on his face)
PRESENT TIME
now this time i know that i love her
and she also have the feeling i have to confess it
next day in the college-
nupur want to avoid maynk
nupur nupur,she turned to watch who calling her he is chintu

nu-kya baat hai chintu ,why r u calling me.

c-vo nupur ye latter koi tumher liye de kar gaya hai
n-wonder and she open the card
when she open "the latter was written with blood"
her hand was trembelling
"keep away from the boy
otherwise he will no live longer
darling
how u forget ur college party night
hav u forget my touch.................."
and she was feeling dizzy and could't read rest of the part.she run to the girls room and wash her face,she was crying ,and this time she need to hugg gunjan and tell her everything,anyone she need a support to make her out from all this.she want to tell this to samrat yes the person was after her,and he shall do something bad to maynk.she didnt want that anything happen to maynk.
shall i tell samrt or not.
(she went outside the room and run to college gate ,she saw there were a lot of crowd she go there but what she hear she couldn.t believe the one say maynk
and she only lission city hospital
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she was crying bad thought coming in her mind
ahe reach city hospital


friends this is the eight part hope you like it
i want to finish it as soon as possible becoz my exam coming,so i hav to prepare for it.


Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg omg what happened to Mayank????

the flash back was wonderful.... i loved it... 😉
Edited by preethis - 16 years ago
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Amazing part dear
luv it...^^
kip it up...<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Picnic was jus Superb
Really good part
Hop Mayu is fine
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Great yaar...pls do continue it..desperately waiting 4 it. Thanx 4 d pm.
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ufffff yaar awesome part ...........the trip part was so hilarious....lol........i hope mayu is fine........please update soon........pm me😳

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