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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
this was simply beautiful! i luved the last few lines the most!
srry for the late relpy dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Hey Saz,
This one shot was simple but too cute, I loved it.
I read this think of a gur and girl a long time ago and I really loved every word of it and reading it in ur FF refreshed my memory thanks.
Anyways you wrote it very well, I so loved it, the way you insert those dialogue in your FF, it was so amazing. It's simple but still so meaningful.
Keep it up the great work.
Thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
hey sazi grtttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt job i jus luv ur all ffs u r jus mindblowing

i jus luv dese lines

A girl asked a boy if she was pretty' his response was a no.

She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever' he said no again.

She asked him if he would cry if she walked away' he again replied no.

She heard enough and was walked away, when his voice stopped her.

I don't think your pretty, I think you're beautiful.

I don't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever,

I wont cry if you leave, I would die.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Tanyarox

wow!

gr8 job done saz....!!
its damn gud!!
a perfect one shot!!
amazing....its just fabulous.....mindblowing!!
lol...i am short of words!!
keep writing more one-shots!!
ur a fantastic writer!! no doubt!
-Sanjana

awww thnxx forda compliements dear..
i'm glad u liked it!
will try nd write more..!
thnxxx 4 commenting!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superbthanks for the pm😉

"When I see KASH for the very first time,
I knew they r BEST COUPLE.
Every scene I have seen of KASH,
Has touched my life, my soul forever.
I always knew that star become inspiration,
but never did I know that KASH would be inspiration.
My love for KASH is eternal and everlasting,
Seeing KASH I consider to be my greatest blessing.
I could search the whole world over,
See so many stars onscreen but never find someone like KASH
KASH are special, Unique, in their own way.
Words don't come so easily.
I want to share my creation with KASH,
my love for KASH will last forever.
To you I give the whole me,
I want u to stay
Always in my heart,
WILL U COME BACK FOR KASHIANS"


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Nidha

Aww thnxx dear..
glad u likde it!
nd no prob 4 da pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: mar-

wooow grt shot realyl good

tnx for the pm

thank you very much sweetie!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: kOmAl_luves_KSG

this was simply beautiful! i luved the last few lines the most!

srry for the late relpy dear

aww thnxx dear..
nd itz no problem.. lolz!
glad u liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Saz,
This one shot was simple but too cute, I loved it.
I read this think of a gur and girl a long time ago and I really loved every word of it and reading it in ur FF refreshed my memory thanks.
Anyways you wrote it very well, I so loved it, the way you insert those dialogue in your FF, it was so amazing. It's simple but still so meaningful.
Keep it up the great work.
Thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

thank u very much dear...
glad u found it cute...
yeah i love the little story also..
nd thnxx.. im glad u like dat i used it!
nd no prob for dapm dear!
tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: jazmeen

hey sazi grtttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt job i jus luv ur all ffs u r jus mindblowing

i jus luv dese lines

A girl asked a boy if she was pretty' his response was a no.

She asked him if he wanted to be with her forever' he said no again.

She asked him if he would cry if she walked away' he again replied no.

She heard enough and was walked away, when his voice stopped her.

I don't think your pretty, I think you're beautiful.

I don't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever,

I wont cry if you leave, I would die.

aww thank u so much dear...
i'm glad u likei...
nd glad u like all am ffz.. lolzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
lollzz i knwo i m tooo late to comment biut stillllllll
sazzzz....i kust love u alot girly for thuissss.....
dunno wht elese to say u left me soeechlesss after reading all ur ffz n now this as welll

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