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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Hey Saz

ure just so awesome..!

It definately cheered me up..!..n How..!..i just love the way you write..n now we hafta review ur one-shot for the NL..i wonder if they'll accept a review without criticism! 🤔

So yeah i love those dlgs u've used..keep up the good work..😉

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Make-It-Pop

@Make-It-Pop

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: princess52
lollzz i knwo i m tooo late to comment biut stillllllll

sazzzz....i kust love u alot girly for thuissss.....

dunno wht elese to say u left me soeechlesss after reading all ur ffz n now this as welll

Awww.. thnxx habzzz

I luv ya also babez!🤗

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Make-It-Pop

@Make-It-Pop

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: aish_punk
Hey Saz

ure just so awesome..!

It definately cheered me up..!..n How..!..i just love the way you write..n now we hafta review ur one-shot for the NL..i wonder if they'll accept a review without criticism! 🤔

So yeah i love those dlgs u've used..keep up the good work..😉

awww thnxx aish babez!

nd thnxx for da compliments...

ur telling me itz tough.. den imagine making a critique about ur own ff.. lolzzz imagine ow though dat will be.. hehehehe

nd thnxx once again!

luv ya babez!😃

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425033

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Hey Saz!🤗
U knw wat??I must have read over 50FFs but I never read a dialogue like this one..

I don't think your pretty, I think you're beautiful.

I don't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever,

I wont cry if you leave, I would die.

This is the best dialogue ever ever yet!Luvd it<333
ARs confession was very different in this rather than what they have at other FFs..!
But the dialogue is just Fantastic!
I wanna read loadz of FFs more frm u hun!
Luvd this One Shot of urs..<333

loadz of ❤️
~~riya~~

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Loved it !! I enjoyed my self to the fullest... and the last bit left a smile on my face!! That was really Sweet yaar!! Just loved it tons...

"I don't think your pretty, I think you're beautiful.
I don't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever,
I wont cry if you leave, I would die. "

Superb Dialogue... You've had to be the best!! and really I'm addicted to this one.. Please inform me if anywhere in the near future you are going contribute something else to the forum!!

Awesome one ...
Arman

Edited by -Armaan- - 16 years ago

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268143

@268143

Master

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

dat was soo beutifully written ............... i loved it

smile11.gif image by myspaceye

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KaSh_4_eva

@KaSh_4_eva

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

hey Saz

awesome one shot

great job...you wrote it very well

I loved it especially the last bit

Rabia

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

awww a lovely shot.... good job !!!

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

hey saz.......
great one shot..armaan n rids trying to know abt eachothers love!!!!
so beautiful especially the last few lines..
"I don't think your PRETTY, but I think you're BEAUTIFUL' I don't WANT to be with you forever, but I NEED to be with you forever' and I wouldn't CRY if you walked away, but I would DIE!" he said.

great one shot!!!
good wishes
sri:-)