If it was meant to be-(Update 2/10/10pg107)

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#431

It was really sweet update

But felt senti for Gun as she is jus doing this for her mother and her sister

But knw sam wuldnt let her down he will love her so much that she will also love him back

Mayu was really confused

But dnt want him to jus leave Nups becoz she is autistic

He can jus try at least mana its difficult but he shuld giv her one chance

They meet in Mall lets c now wat happens hop he talks to her rather than jus ignoring her

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Archana

@a-little-hope

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#432

Hi Neha... you are an amazing writer... I read all your updates in just one night... and I fell in love with your FF... you have portrayed Atuistic Nupur's character so well man... and Mayank... wow... he is just perfect... loved the characterization in the story... and the dialogues are very well written too...

Please add me to your PM list and please update soon... can't wait for your next update...

Great Work...👏

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Neha_S

@Neha_S

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#433

Thank you for the lovely comments.

@bhavana:yeah!Sujoy n Diya would be there..Dont worry I love writing Diya's pov!

Here is a part for my mayurians!Sajanians would get a treat soon!Its not much just a lil character deevelopment part!

Chapter 17

It had yet again!The moment I saw him: the shyness that I inevitably feel when he is around and the excitement that seems to make me want to jump out of my skin.

I couldnt help the blush.Not when his eyes were on mine and there was a soft smile on his face.

But somehow the background didnt suit him.I never could imagine Mayank in a shopping mall...let alone a ladies shopping mall.

"Mayank Sharma in a ladies shopping mall.""I said turning with a teasing smile.

He returned the favor,grinning at me brilliantly.
""Well...I didnt know it was illegal now.""

I bit my lip.
""No but I thought the Mayank I know would die of humiliation before he stepped in a lowly place like this.""I announced somberly.
Some part of me was wondering how could I speak so well..where was the disconcertation?

His face looked tragic.
""Well...I have been tortured and still being so.""he said looking around in distaste

I burst out laughing more at the look on his face than anything else.He laughed along with me but I could see his surprise at my teasing.

I didnt tease him ever...Where did all that confidence come from?

I straightened up taking a good look at him while he was laughing.His dimples were just about visible.They made him look adorable.

Then I almost gasped.I hadnt really looked at him until now.He was dressed in a grey blazer with a crisp black shirt underneath it.His hair was slightly spiked.He stood casually leaning onto the counter.

By god!He looked better than all my heroes put togetherThe thought suffused my cheeks with color and by the time he looked up at me amused,his eyes twinkling,I had lost all sense of my being...actually I had lost my senses all together.

""Nupur...you okay?""he asked.

I blushed harder at that.I couldnt explain it though...reason I mean.

I nodded unable to keep my eyes off him.His smile faded at my ogling.
He looked down at himself and then at me.

""What did I do wrong?""
Wrong!!
"Nothing by god...you look amazing...""I said quickly to reassure him.

The moment the words popped out I wished I wouldnt have spoken and then when I saw his lips twitch I wished I knew how to turn back time.

"Really?That good huh?""he said smirking.

I blushed and flushed.
""The colors are nice...they umm...they..look...like...um...from a good designer...Vicky...would...""I wished the ground would open in a pit and I would fall through.

He laughed, throughly enjoying my embarrassment.
""You didnt say anything about the colors before...""

Why didnt this turn out to be a nightmare?.

My nerves were rising and my hands automatically sought relief.I clutched my dupatta translating Tujhe dekha toh to English.
He moved closer.

I stopped breathing,my thoughts scrambling.

"Nupur..."he began smiling.

""Di...where are you?""called a very familiar voice at the same time.

I thanked my stars that they had blessed me with a sweet sister who had come shopping with me.
She hurried to my side when she saw me.
""Di..Ma was asking if you liked anything.She is going to the billing counter.""

Did I like something?

Oh yea!

Too bad it wasnt purchaseable.

"No Gunjan I am fine.""I assured her when my voice came back.She glanced at me understanding I was beyond nervous.My hands were trembling and I was flushed maroon.

""Gunjan ..?!""Mayank said with an eager interest in his voice.

I suddenly felt weird..angry...Shaking off the emotion I spoke.

""Gunjan..this is Mayank and Mayank this is my little sister Gunjan.""

Mayank smiled.
""I have heard so much about you.""

Gunjan smiled back and then turned to me.
""Mayank.."she said in a surprised voice.

I nodded primly.
""Diya's brother.""

She raised her eyebrows before turning back to him.
""Its nice to meet you.""

""You too.Heard you did your bachelors in economics?""he said

"Yes I always enjoyed it.""

He nodded.
""The knowledge of economics is essential for every one...""he said and they began to talk on subjects which were beyond me.

Thankfully the subject never returned to me.When he left I turned to Gunjan with a smile.

""He seemed to like you alot.""Somehow the knowledge gave me extreme pleasure.

Gunjan nodded a smile playing at her lips.
""I suppose but he seems to like my sister more...""

With that I left hurriedly in search of my mother,Gunjan trailing me with a soft giggle.

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#434

oh lord Neha...I love u for writing this part 😃
It was so beautiful...sigh,...absolutely beautiful 😃
Can I just say again that I really love Mayank and Nupur here:)
U write really well!!