If it was meant to be-(Update 2/10/10pg107)

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#411

hey neha hi just read ur FF wow it's quite nice hon 😊

pls do add me 2 ur PM list & Pm me as u update 😃

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#412

everything gunjan is doing for her family

lovley update

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Neha_S

@Neha_S

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Posted: 15 years ago

#413

CHAPTER 17

"Oh my god!You wouldnt believe this!!!I mean you would ...but Pamelaji was so happy hearing your answer...she would be the best mother-in-law and oh my god you will be so rich and happy...and oh...I cant even speak..."Devika exclaimed almost jumping around.

Gunjan smiled inspite of her gloomy mood.It was so good to see her mother back to her normal self.Chirpy and excited-my mother.The dark cynical shade that she had broadcasted had so gone now....

Its paying off!Her decision was right!!

"...I was like listening and wondering how we got so lucky...oh my god!I completely forgot Pamelaji has invited us all for dinner.She is calling her panditji to match the kundalis and all...oh...what will we all wear?"

Her sentence left an unexplained panic in Gunjan.This was when she would face Samrat after he made that insane proposal...And now he wouldnt even be her employer.He would her ....fiance

Gunjan cringed at the thought.This was unbearable but she had to bear it for her mother...for her Di...for her family!

"Wear the peacock blue saree Ma.That suits you..."Nupur said from the kitchen counter.

"That is a great idea Nupur and you must wear the pretty pink salwar suit Diya gave you for your birthday!"

Nupur smiled.
"And Gunjan?"

"Oh my god!Yes...We have to decide...we can make her wear the red saree ...no not red!That should be reserved for the wedding..."Devika said.

"Why wear a saree?Its a dinner only..."

"Maybe that green salwar suit?"

"No...its too simple..."

"But...oh my...ab kya hoga..?"

"There is no need to worry!Anything would do."Gunjan said quietly.

Nupur's smile disappeared in a flash and Devika looked outraged.

"There is no need to be so lax!This is the first time your in-laws would see you.You must wear something special!Lets go shopping now..."

Carefully avoiding Nupur's eyes Gunjan nodded...

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Mayank's POV

The traffic light turned amber and then green and I pressed on the accelerator.Travelling on a hot sunny day in Mumbai was almost like fight a war.
The traffic was gruesome and while most people only complained about the lack of proper number of roads,I knew the problem went much deeper.It is in people's attitude.They couldnt fix their priorities.

Diya,for example!

Why did my sister need to get her dresses picked up today?It was a Tuesday afternoon afterall!She would easily get them picked up later.
I glanced at the watch grumbling about Diya's immaturity.

The classic example happened Sunday afternoon.
After screaming herself hoarse she had demanded Sujoy's immediate dismissal.
I had calmly explained that I cant fire someone who didnt work for me in the first place.Yes...I could stop being his client but it wouldnt make any difference to him financially or to his attitude which so seemed to ail her.

She was now in a meeting with him.I wish Sujoy all the luck!

The car moved even more slowly and my thoughts shifted.I glanced at the front seat.looking sideways and something tightened within me.

I could see her...almost!

An angel in white...her strands flying in the air and her soft skin turning pink as she looked down and blushed.

My heart started thumping as another memory floated in.

I AM A FREAK!!I...I am autistic!

Why?Why hadnot I ever seen this?Why had I not realised that there must be some reason why Nupur was so different?Why hadnot anyone told me?

I had asked Diya that question.She had shrugged.

"It was her business.I had no right to tell you..."

"But...you should have told me when we started being friends!"I had protested.

"Why Mayank?Would it have changed anything?Did it really matter?"

Did it matter?

Maybe if I was thinking of Nupur in pure friendly terms I wouldnt give a damn but in the heart of things..I knew that my feelings werenot purely friendly...

I was attracted to her...in ways I had never been attracted to anyone.And now that I knew the actual position..it complicated my thinking process.

Nupur was autistic!What implications would that have on our relationship if we ever have one?

I was almost surprised when the shopping mall loomed infront of me.I parked the car and walked in.

Relationship....I was thinking of relationship with her..

"May I help you sir?"an attendant said as soon as I entered the ladies section.

"Yes...I am here to pick up some dresses."I handed her the reciept and she nodded smiling and told me to wait.

I was thinking of a relationship with her now....I need to stop damnit...I needed to think first!

Understand where this would lead to...Was Nupur fit for a relation?

Sighing I turned around.And almost jumped back.

Nupur was standing by the mirror holding a green dupatta and checking herself out.

I smiled as she grimaced.I really wonder what she could find displeasing about the mirror image.

It was beautiful.

She tossed the green one away and picked a blue one.She had only managed to drape it across her shoulders when her eyes met mine in the mirror.

A pink blush slowly rose to her cheeks.I could only stare...Then she turned and smiled at me.

"Mayank Sharma in a ladies shopping mall..."

I just wanted to say I am trying to make all my characters very human...and so if you are wondering about the doubts in Mayank's mind ...try once to wear his shoes!

A/N:I am leaving for London again this sunday!So updates will be a lil late...doesnt mean they will non-existent!The plan wasnt like this!I thought I would post atleast two more parts before leaving but ...I was too lazy...sorry to leave you hanging!!
:A/N2:Someone told me that they think I dont read the comments here!I actually read everything you write and I love them...please keep reading n commenting!

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#414

well happy journey neha....so have safe journey...remember i will be waiting with spcl quad if ur not back with updates....mayu is thinking...oh no..offcourse he is a human..yet i hope he ends up in a positive manner...loved ur upd asusual buddy😛

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#415

awesome part yaar!!!!....please update soon.pm me😳

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#416

Again a fabulous part!!
I m so in love with this FF I have been recommending it around :)

I m glad Mayank had those doubts,its only human!!
fabulous :)

have a gr8 trip

cheers
Divya

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#417

hey lovely update my dear
i totally understand mayank's doubts also
n plz try n continue with ur updates

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#418

i loved this one too......& abt....mayank's pov........lets c ..i m not gonna comment now..u r the writer & i m sure u hv something on ur mind...& what will happen to the dinner?...u r leaving it on a crucial point make it hard for us to wait.............😆
Thanks for the pm..........🤗

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Shivangi Singh

@shivangi278

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#419

gr8 update neha,
👏 ,
do continue soon............

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#420

amazing updt!!
n mayank having doubts is completely human, ppl have doubts on everything so its totally normal
anyways loved the updt
try n continue soon
have a safe trip

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