Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02)

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: arpita25
Hey i finished reading the first part of ur fic and it was really beautiful. Vaise bhi RN par jitna bhi likha jaaye kam hai. Accha hi hai ki aaj kal aur jyada logon ne start kar diya hai RN pe likhna.
Hope u continue soon.

Thanx....

yeah.... u r right....

RN par jitna likha jaaye kam hai....

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Part Three:

Next day she left for Ambala.A determination shone through her eyes.Naina very well knew that the path ahead is not easy,but then what was easy in her life?

And as of now,she wasn't afraid of anything.Because what was there to lose? Cruel destiny had ripped her of the most important person.Matters can't be worse for her now.

She reached Ambala in afternoon. Alekh had come to receive her.He also was posted at KMA as assisstant drill commanding officer.Alekh being there was the only best thing.

"Kaisi hai tu?"

"Ekdam achchi."

"Tu apun se jhoot bolegi?"

And naina couldnt control anymore.She hugged him tightly and started crying. He also got teary eyed.He stroked her hairs gently,soothing her.Then spoke softly,

"Dekh Naina, apun janta hai. Yeh bahot mushkil hai tere liye.Firse ussi KMA jaana...apun ke liye bhi asaan nahi tha.Parr tereko ye karna padega.Tere bhaai ke waaste.."

"Parr..parr Aa..Alekh....Alekh main..."

"Sshhhh...chup hoja.Tu himmat nahi haregi Naina. Tujhe unn sabhi kameeno ko saza dilwaani hai.Tujhe tera mission poora karna hai Naina.Apne har ek dard,har ek aansu ka badla lena hai.Tujhe ye karna hoga naina, Rajveer sir ke liye.....'

she looked up.He simply patted her head affectionately.

"Tu mera saath dega na Alekh? Tu bhi mujhe chodke nahi jaayega na?"

"Bole toh.. bolne ki jaroorat hai? Apun tere saath hai...hamesha.Apun tera peecha itni aasani se nahi chodnewaala.Tereko kabhie akela nahi chodega......"

"Oye qaidi, agar tera milna milana,family drama hogaya ho toh baaju hatt. Yeh jaatt kabse katar me prateeksha karte karte thak gaya hai..."

"Saala nautanki...!!!", Alekh snapped as Naina looked in surprise at the person.

"Oye ke? Iss Huda ko bhi toh apni Phoolan se mil lene de yaar..",he rushed forward and hugged Naina.

"Huda tu?? tu yahaa?"

"Haan main...yahaan...Ab phoolan...tujhe main akela kaise chod sakta hoon? Aur tu na ye sad si shakal banana bandh kar aur saari tension pe mitti daal. Oye do not fear when Huda is here...Ab tu dekh,kaise unn kameeno ki band bajaate hai hum sab."

Naina smiled.

"Parr tujhe yaha posting mili kaise?"

"Kya phoolan tu bhi? Kitni mushkil se setting ki hai Head Quarters se pata hai tujhe?"

Alekh and Naina rolled their eyes....

" Aur phir on second thoughts KMA ko bhi ek handsome,cool teacher ki zaroorat hai,warna janaaniyon ka kya hoga?",huda said pulling his collar.

"Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega naa?"

"Koi shaq?"

And all of them laughed.

"Ab chal. Udhar Tau aur muchchad hamare intezaar mein aankhe beechaye baithe hai.."

"woh saale muchchad ki toh....saale ne pehle hi din apun ko solitary confinement mein daala tha....iss baar ussne shanpatti ki naa toh....chodega nahi apun usse"

"Oye haan haan Qaidi...Aur phir iss baar toh hum usske cadets bhi nahi hai,officers hai....saale ki aisi band bajayenge..."

"Guyz...aisi band bajaayenge ki ....humse bachne ke liye woh khud solitary confinement mein jaayega."

All three laughed and Hi-fived at this and left for the Academy.

All the memories of their academy days came flashing to them while they were walking through the academy grounds.And all the memories were connected in some way or the other to their Rajveer sir.Their eyes became moist. They saluted in front of Amar jawan jyoti and entered BC's cabin.

BC welcomed them,though dryly and briefed them.As soon they came out,they encountered the devil himself, major Nair.

"Ah ....Cadets. oh sorry lieutenants!"

"Hello sir."

"I hope atleast now u abide by the rules and behave as responsible person rather than hopeless bunch of people. or in that matter behave as patriots...and not as trai....especially u Lft.Singh",nair said with a wicked grin.

Naina shot him a look.

"Considering your brother being a traitor and your beloved Mentor being a bloody murderer...."

"My brother was not a traitor sir and neither my BELOVED Mentor a bloody murderer....SIR." She nearly spat the last word. Nair smirked.

"Woh sir apun chale? kya hai naa Brigadier (it took him hell of self control to not utter BC) ka letter Suriji ko dekar Rooms ki chabiya leni hai...Bole toh ACADEMY KE RULES ke hisab se...."

" DISMISS!! "

" Saala kameena muchchad ! Mujhe toh kabhi kabhi Tau pe shaq hota hai...! ki bande ke paas dimag naam ki koi cheez hai bhi yaa nahi?"

Alekh and Naina looked at Huda surprisingly.

"Arre yaar.....Tau se jyaada intelligent toh mera Rajesh hai. Agar mai usske saath Nair ko tabele mein baandh doon na...toh aadhe ghante mein aawaz karne lag jaayega ki issko yaha se hatao ! Parr yeh TAU ! aaj tak nahi samajh aaya isko !"

Naina stared at him for few seconds and then said, " Waise teri baat mein point toh hai, parr yeh bata ,tujhe teri bhaison ke alawa koi aur example nahi mila kya."

"Kaha se aayega? saala dimaag mein Gobar jo bhara hai.", Alekh commented.

"Kya yaar qaidi..."

And they laughed.

When she walk passed Wall of fame, she stopped.

"Alekh,Huda...tum log chalo,main thodi der mein aati hoon."

Both of them understood and headed towards mess to meet suriji.

She stood there....in front of hall of fame....Staring....Crying silently....when suddenly.....

"FRESHER??????"

Edited by manatated - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

that was really good plz continue soon

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina is indeed Raj's protegee!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊She has accepted to fulfil her duties and went back to KMA!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina does not have anything to lose as destiny had ripped her of the most important person!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She is thankful that Aalekh is posted with her!!!!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ko pata hai Naina ki haalat and Naina hugged him and started crying!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Aalekh ne kaha usse yeh karna hi hoga and assured her ke woh hamesha Naina ke saath hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda toh Huda hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆Woh kabhi nahi badal sakta!!!!!!Nautanki kahi ka!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

It felt like the old days to hear them plan how they could create trouble for Nair!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope they can bring some happiness back into Naina's life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

All the memories came flashing back to them while they were walking through the academy grounds which were connected in some way or the other to their Rajveer Sir!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😭 😭 😭 😭

I hope Raj jaldi wapas aa jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It seems like BC is not too happy with the three of them being posted there but does not say much!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Nair aake phir se bakwaas karne laga!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡I hate that bloody Mucchad but then again who doesn't!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Why can't someone just murder him??🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

Naina ne accha jawab diya usse!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Uska bharosa Navin aur Rajveer par hamesha tha, hai aur rahega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It took Aalekh hell of a self control not to utter BC!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Huda is right that even a bhais has enough brains to chuck Nair out of a tabela!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Then how come that bald head BC doesn't??😕 😕 😕 😕

I loved Aalekh's line ke kaha se aayega saale ke dimag mein gobar jo bhara hai!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Naina got emotional on seeing the Wall of Fame!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Both Aalekh and huda leave her alone on her request!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina stood there crying there!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Yeh kaun hai jisne Raj ka dialogue bola??😕 😕 😕 😕I am sure Naina is imagining it!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Nice part. It went down the memory lane (of Raj). Liked Aalekh n Naina's convo. N Huda was a gud funny element. Liked his 'bhais' example. And Naina shot the ans bak dat Neither Navin nor Her Beloved Rajveer Sir was a traitor or murderer. N then Aalekh managed well in the name of Rules.

Last dialogue just brought all the memories bak. W8ing to knw who said dat dialogue of Raj. Pls continue soon.

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hinal

@hinal60

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

really nice UD

aalekh, huda and naina all them posted in kma.

huda ki natuanki was very good

hope we get to see rajveer very soon

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

wow..interesying story....
m feeling bad for naina...poor girl..
so she is back to kma...m waiting to see what is stored in the future for her..!!

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

awesome yaar... 👏 👏 👏

kuch tym k liye main wapas July 2006 me chali gayi thi...!!! Raj...i really miss him a lotttttttttt...!!! 😭

naina, huda & alekh posted hain...kma me...😃!!! sayad Raj ki entry bhi jald ho jaye....!!!

shhhhh...kisi se kahna mat...😉!!! is fic ki jo writer hain na...voh torture baht karti hai...😆!!! ek toh baht chote ud post karti hai aur upar se abhi tak hum se hamare fav rajveer sir ko dur rakha hua hai. pata nahin kaisa hoga...kahan hoga...thik se khana khaya hoga bhi ya nahin...???😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

now back to d ud...😃

Huda ko koi bhi nahin badal sakta...😆!!! vaise us k naam ke sath us kaam bhi baht match karta hai...!!! nautanki kahin ka...

naina scene thoda emotional tha...😭!!! use pata hai ki us k is naye mission me alekh hi us ki help kar sakta hai...!!!😃

naina ka bharosha naveen aur rajveer par...hamesha rahega...😃!!! aur solid answer diya hai us ne.😃

by d way yeh Raj ka dialouge koun bol raha hai...???😕 😕 😕

aur cliff hanger par latkane ka kaam toh mera hai...tum kab se karne lagii...!!! dekha......meri sangat ka bura asar pad raha hai.😆

do ud fast dear......😊

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

tooo good......

loved d way u described der meting...emotional yet awesome...

also njoyed aalekhs dialogues..

amazing

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

Nice update..

Naina is indeed raj's protge. she has accepted to fulfill her duty and has come back to KMA..

She was thankful that Alekh is posted with her as she knew that he will be her strong support. But to her delight even Huda has been posted with them.

Huda brings in fun and humor back into naina's life and she is happy to have him there. It felt like the old days to hear them plan how they could creat trouble for Nair.

Seems like BC is not too happy with the three of them being posted there but does not say much.

Naina gets emotional by seeing the wall of fame and both alekh and huda leave her alone on her request. Who is this person who has asked this question...bringing back old memories.

please continue soon

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