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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

a Nice and Funny update ...

Loving Huda and Alekh !!! ... They haven't changed at all .. and I know they can manage to Bring Some Happiness in Naina's Life, if not all 😕

Hate that Bloody Mucchad ... But then again who doesn't !! 😡 Why can't someone just Murder him .. Stupid Idiot .. Huda was Right that Even a Bhais has Enough Brains to Chuck him out of a Tabela .. then How Come that Bald head BC doesn't 😡

Anyways Great update !!!

Take care

Yasmin

Thanks a lot dear😊....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hi, I just read ur ff..😊.its fantastic...!!!! 😃
U hv portrayed Naina's greif so well that I cud feel it all over again...!!!👏😭
Aalekh and Huda were quite funny...!!!😆
Loved Aalekh's line " Saale ke dimaag me gobar jo bhara hai..." 🤣
And who's that calling Naina ' Fresher '...??😲
Pls put up the next part soon...!!! and if possible pls pm me....!!!😊

Thanks dhara...😊
abt da person calling naina "fresher"...hmmmmm..ummmm....see in nxt part😉
yeah will pm u....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi

Nice update

Naina has finally come to KMa to complete her duties and is glad to have alekh and huda there to support her.
Waiting to see what mischief they will play now that they are teachers at KMA.
please continue soon

Thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: vvdn

Very nice...keep updating.

thanks...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Hey friends presenting part four.....As per Priya's accusation i post very small updates....Aapka 'ilzaam' sar aankhopar😆 (sorry...has to modulate 'hukum' for 'ilzaam'😆😆) Neways....this is loooooooong update....so priya,happy now?? But i'm dead sure after reading this not only you but all of the readers will give me loads of gaaliyaan😆😆....
Jabtak main apne aapko joote-chappal khaane ke liye prepare karti hoon, aap log update padhiye
Part Four:

She stood there....in front of hall of fame....staring at it.

Shedding silent tears ......when suddenly......

"FRESHER?????"

Naina stood dead in her tracks.

She knew this voice.Yes,she knew it.

How she longed to hear it.Is it a dream or reality?

No,its real! She knew it....

"I knew it.You can never leave me alone sir!"

Naina was smiling through tears as she was reminded of similar incident on her first day of academy.

"FRESHER???"

"Yes sir.."

"Name?"

"Cadet Naina Ah..m.. Singh"

"Toh cadet Naina Ah' Singh !......."

Her smile broadened at the memory of "Cadet Naina Ah' Singh".

She slowly turned.

There he was....

With his cutest smile ever....glint in his eyes....

Tears started flowing through Naina's eyes.....

"Tum aaye toh hawaaon mein ek nasha hai...

Tum aaye toh fizaoon mein rang sa hai...

Yeh rang saaare hai bas tumhare...

aur kya?"

She felt someone's hand at her shoulder.She turned to find Aalekh.
"Kya dekh reli hai?"
"Alekh....Sssir..."
She turned to show him......
But....there was no one.....There was NO ONE.....
"Sambhal apne aap ko Naina...",Alekh said with a heavy voice.
"Hmmm..."
Days passed by.She pretended to adjust to the routine.Pretended to be happy.
She was acknowledged by cadets.She was Cadet's favourite...they all were....Yet she was unhappy....everyone knew that;her pretence not that strong ,yet very few knew the reason.
All three of them were adored by cadets.
Cadets called them most wonderful and friendly teachers ever......at which they used to laugh sadly....cause only they knew,most wonderful and friendly teacher was lost.
On the other hand they were progressing in their mission.Life seemed to be back on track for Naina when a boulder hit her again!
She was called by her parents and was asked to reach Nainitaal as soon as possible.
All throughout journey She dreaded the situation there. She dint know why,but she was restless today.She dreaded something worst to happen.....
And when she reached there....what her parents asked her to do was indeed worst nightmare of her life....
They asked her to marry!! She denied outright. They forced her, pleaded, coaxed, threatened her....but she won't budge.
They asked her to atleast meet Captain Rahul Kapoor,whom they chose for her.
She reasoned,there is no point of meeting him when she was not going to marry anyone else....the last word she thought in mind.
"Naina.... tu kabtak aisi hi rahegi? Hamari umar ho chali hai.....Hamara kya bharosa ? Hamare baad tumhara dhyan kaun rakhega ?", Her father raised voice.
"Baba main khud apna dhyan rakh sakhti hoon...."
"Naina...." , Baba shouted.
" Main yeh shaadi nahi karungi. hargiz nahi !" , she also raised her voice.
"NAINA !!!", her baba shouted while he placed his one hand on his chest above heart.....
Her father suffered from Heart attack.Life left her no choice.
Again she was a pawn of FATE'S CRUEL GAME!
Her father threatened her to not to tell Rahul anything about Capt.Rajveer or else he won't take medicines....

She met him in a cafetaria.

{RAHUL KAPOOR - Captain in Indian Army. Good looking,dashing,Fun loving guy.Good at heart, full of life. His friends acknowledge him as the Best friend can ever be.Likes to spread happiness wherever he goes.

played by Hussain}

After inital hellos, She asked Rahul ,
"Why you want to marry me? You don't know anything about my past..."
He simply smiled.
"I'm more interested to be your present and future."
He had liked her the moment he saw her.
In the eveninig Rahul came to meet her father. After checking on his health, when he was leaving, Naina's mom asked her to see him off.
She went.
While leaving he said,

"Naina jee..."

"Please...you can call me Naina."
He smiled.
"Naina, this is for you."
He took out a neatly wrapped gift box.
"Iski kya jaroorat..."
"Aap khol ke nahi dekhegi?"
She opened it to find an exquisite watch. She looked up in surprise.
"Aap ki watch kaafi purani lagi..",he said pointing to Rajveer's watch which adorned her hand, " toh mujhe laga aapko yeh pasand aajaye."
She didn't reply. She was not in a state to.
She just wave him goodbye and ran to her room.
She didn't even stop when her parents called her.

She shut the door behind her and slowly slid down with her back at the door.

She cried bitterly..... She looked at the gift beside her.Rahul's words echoed...
"Aapki watch kaafi puraani lagi..."

Her fingers crushed the wrapper.

"Aapki watch kaafi puraani lagi..."
She glanced again at the watch gifted by Rahul. A storm forming in her mind. Anger taking it's toll. How dare he call Raj's watch like that? Does he think i will ever replace Raj's watch with his? She was about to break the watch gifted by Rahul into several pieces when her eye fell on photo of her parents photograph. She was in turmoil.
"Aapki watch kaafi puraani lagi..."
She got up suddenly.Went to one of her drawers and put that gift deep down inside where she will never catch glimpse of it.
Then her eye fell on her hand that was adorned with Raj's watch.She instantly calmed down.She slowly moved her fingers over it and kissed it, as if she is kissing his hand.
The ticking of the watch reminded her of his heart beats....
She slowly got up and went near window. She stood there gazing at the moon.

I walk the streets alone
I hate being on my own
And everyone can see that I really fell
And I'm going through hell
Thinking about you were somebody else

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That Somebody's Me

How, How could we go wrong
It was so good and now it's gone
And I pray at night that our paths will soon cross
And what we had isn't lost
Cause you're always right here in my thoughts

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That Somebody's Me

You'll always be in my life
Even if I'm not in your life
Because you're in my memory
You, will you remember me
And before you set me free
Oh listen please

Somebody wants you
Somebody needs you
Somebody dreams about you every single night
Somebody can't breath without you, it's lonely
Somebody hopes someday you will see
That somebody's me

She can't even replace Raj's watch.....How is anyone going to replace RAJ?

And she smiled sadly....at her destiny.....

'Life can't be worse than this' ....

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All my dear dear friendz....here was the update....Hope (this time seriously hope!😉) u likd reading it....
Well.....main bhi taiyyar hoon aap logokee joote-chappal aur gaaliyan khane ke liye.....
Please...recession chal raha hai, toh apni gaaliyon pe agar break lagao to.....😛
But haa...if any kind soul wants to praise,plz plz plz comment mein kanjusi mat karna😆
me waitingggg...
Edited by manatated - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Good!!!!

Standing in front of the Wall of Fame Naina was reminded of the first time she had met Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She was imagining Raj saying fresher!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍That was so touching!!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The song is very nice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But then reality strikes and she understands it was only her dream!!!!!!

Naina pretended to be happy and yet everyone knew she was unhappy!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina's condition is really sad!!!!!! I feel really sad for her!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina, Aalekh aur Huda bhale hi apne students ke liye favourite teacher ho but they miss their best and most friendly teacher!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

They will always miss him and try to be like him for their students!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But they know that the most wonderful and friendly teacher was lost!!!!!!!

Naina's parents want her to marry someone else!!!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Mujhe ek baat batana ke aise situations pe fathers ko heart attack kyun aata hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Very conveniently heart attack aajata hai taaki they could emotionally blackmail their kids!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

It was very bad of them!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Decisions like marriage should never be forced upon!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Yeh Rahul ne aise kaise Raj ke watch ko purana kaha??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡How dare he??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Usse toh main ICU mein bhej dungi!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

This reminded me of Andrea's fic Pariah!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Seeing and feeling Raj's watch calmed her down!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The poem was very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The line was beautiful that she can't even replace Raj's watch then how is anyone going to replace Raj??😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is right that life can't be worse than this!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I hope Raj comes back in Naina's life soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
woww...lovely update....
u have described naina's pain/emotions so well..poor naina.. she cant forget raj. never... n now her parents want her to marry someone else..again her life is at that stage where she thinks only one thing "life cant be worse than this..."...!!!...how cruel life can be for one soul??....!!!
she cant replaced Raj's watch then how is anyone going to replace Raj ??..no..no one can...never.....
awesome update...pls update next part soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yeah waakai mein saad Update tha
i hope next UD mein kuch exciting sa mile
and yah please please please naina ki shaadi us rahul se mat karana aur raj ki entry to ab karni hi hogi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hmm....Not too happy with the new entry and his words but happy with Naina's reaction...!!!😃

Edited by Dhara_s - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_shona

woww...lovely update....
u have described naina's pain/emotions so well..poor naina.. she cant forget raj. never... n now her parents want her to marry someone else..again her life is at that stage where she thinks only one thing "life cant be worse than this..."...!!!...how cruel life can be for one soul??....!!!
she cant replaced Raj's watch then how is anyone going to replace Raj ??..no..no one can...never.....
awesome update...pls update next part soon...

Thanks a ton shona.....but this torture is gonna end soon....stay tuned😊

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