Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina is so heartbroken and does not wish to live!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She is posted at KMA and is assigned as an assistant in guarding the triggers!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina also like Rajveer will be teaching Strategy and Communication!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's parents wanted her to give up working on Navin's case!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

I liked the way she refused her dad and decided to go on with Raj's incomplete mission!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka faisla bilkul sahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌI know Raj is alive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's emotions were very well described!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The lines were beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

She touched the watch and promised Raj that she will do it for him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ


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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
really nice UD bit emotional but i guess there is lot more store in the fice.
sorry could not reply early
i was out on vacation just came home today
will try to comment soon from now on
waiting for next UD
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
Nice part but very sad. I hope Raj is alive. Naina is so heart-broken. But i liked the way she refused her father n decided to go on wid Raj's incomplete mission. Mostly, after so many loss, this mission has to be completed.

Anyways, pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
that was really nice but very sad part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35

God....awesome yaar...πŸ‘

kya ud tha...!!! maine ek hi saansh me khatam kiya...πŸ€—
very well written dear...πŸ‘πŸΌ
naina ka faisla ek dam sahi tha...!!! mujhe pata hai raj zinda hai...!!!
kaise...??? well...kaal raat is fic ki writer mere sapno me aayi thi...usi ne bataya ki Raj zinda hai...πŸ˜†
tumne naina k emotions ko baht hi achhe se describe kiya hai...!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thanxxx for dis beautiful ud......πŸ˜ƒ
cont soon.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
WOW...new RN fic...
Both the parts are very nice..but a little sad
Please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
fabulously written part!
i could feel the whole thing in frony of me.
keep up the good work!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
fabulous.....

I caught up wid the fic its awesome.......truely gr8 part......

loved it...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thnx....

You have portrayed very well how Raj's death has affected Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘I'm relieved that my words conveyed her pain well...

Tumne jaise Naina ki feelings aur uski haalat likhi hai that was awesome!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thanks yaar..

I am happy that she has stopped calling him Rajveer Sir and shifted to Rajveer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Yeah...she suffered so much so early in her life....she and Raj both cared for rules and society and restricted themselves 4m expressing their love....and now see her life is a big mess...so HELL with the norms she thought.

The song was very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊thanx

I loved this line that she found him everywhere and she found him nowhere!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Well, that line came out in flow...glad that every one liked it!

She felt his heartbeats in the tic-tic of the watch he had gifted her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭True naa?? she is left with nothing but Raj's memories and his gift...😭

Naina Raj ko wapas zaroor le aayegi I am sure of that!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌNaina to tumhare issi vishwas ki zaroorat hai dear...

She has received her posting letter!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊I am sure it somewhere where it will help her in her mission!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊It has to! aise hi thodehi naa main kahi bhi bhej dungi hamari naina koπŸ˜†


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!! Thnx😊

Naina is so heartbroken and does not wish to live!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

She is posted at KMA and is assigned as an assistant in guarding the triggers!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina also like Rajveer will be teaching Strategy and Communication!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Yes...their Destiny is connected, u know...

Naina's parents wanted her to give up working on Navin's case!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’They have already lost their son....and after what happened to Capt.Rajveer they r very scared...

I liked the way she refused her dad and decided to go on with Raj's incomplete mission!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊It was obvious isn't it? both can do anything 4 each other...πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ƒ

Naina ka faisla bilkul sahi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌI know Raj is alive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊oh..ok...πŸ˜• what if hez not?? Jst a question...

Naina's emotions were very well described!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thnx...

The lines were beautiful!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘Thnx...😊

She touched the watch and promised Raj that she will do it for him!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌLike Rajveer, woh jo bhi karegi usske liye karegi...nahi karegi toh bhi ussi ke liye karegi..😊


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