Luv happens only once(RN)-last part,pg63(14/02) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
are haan mai to batana hi bhool gayi ki prologue kaafi accha tha story ka.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
very nyc yaar...👏
aur apne first fic mein hi tumne kamal ka likh hai...👏
naina k emotions baht hi achhe tarik se describe kiya hai tum ne...👏
every line ...each word... just perfect...yaar...👏
hope ki naina aur raj bhi jaldi mil jayen...
waiting for d next one...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: strawberrychip

very nice update!!!

hope naina and raj meet soon...
thanks for informing..

Thnx a lot for liking it dear....
Raj and Naina will meet or not is what is that this fic has...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: guglu088

Grt update. You have described Naina's emtions very well.👏👏👏

Hope ki Raj ki dhamakedar entry ho. Waiting for the two lovers to meet.😉
Thnx for informing me.
Update the next part soon.
Bye!!!!!!!!

Thnx a lot dear....
Hmmm...ab apne Raj ki entry dhamakedaar hoti hai yaa nahi pata nahi but jaha apna Raj hota hai waha DHAMAKE hote rehte hai..!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Cool part. U hav portrayed very well how Raj's demise has affected Naina. I specially liked the line: She found him everywhere, but she found him nowhere. And the heartbeat line was also beautiful.

Now dat she has got her first posting letter, I hope it is gonna be sumthing gud 4 her n us as well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.

Thnx a ton...😊 your appreciation means a lot...!
Yeah...Hope it's good...Don't know how many sorrows future held for her....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sania_58

cool update

plz continue soon

Thanks...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really good

but is it going to be a sad fic
plz continue soon

Thanks dear...😊
Ab agar Raj nahi hai toh sab kuch sad sad hi hoga naa...
Aakhir se hi toh Naina ki khushiyaan hai...!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Oye hoye first part to bahut hi changa tha jee 😛 😛 😛 aur tum ne jitne acche se Naina ki haalat aur us ki feelings likhi hain 😭 😭 😭 Raj k jaane k baad that were awesome.👏 👏 👏 Raj ko vapas le k aayegi Naina i am sure about it.😃 😃 😃 Aur Naina ne un logon ko saza bhi dila di, i am happy. 😊 😊 😊

ab jaldi se aage likho.

Thanks !!! u know this means a lot to me!! thanks 4 liking it !
Aur haan Naina ko hamare vishwaas ki zaroorat hai apna mission complete karne ke liye toh keep faith in her , bhale hi kitne bhi mod aaye..
will update soon..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: srojaleen

very nyc yaar...👏

aur apne first fic mein hi tumne kamal ka likh hai...👏
naina k emotions baht hi achhe tarik se describe kiya hai tum ne...👏
every line ...each word... just perfect...yaar...👏
hope ki naina aur raj bhi jaldi mil jayen...
waiting for d next one...

Thanks a ton priya !!
Ur appreciation means a lot to me....coz i was really not sure how you people are gonna take this....
And likte waqt to kuch nahi but post karne ke baad aise lag raha tha shayad mujhe ek baar check karna chahiye tha coz i wasn't sure if it was apt or not...
Naina and Raj ka milna is Destiny...! Ab kab miltey hai woh meri marzi😉😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Part Two:

The events that took place in her life, were unbearable for her. She wanted to run away from her own, from her own life. Her life was nothing but like a rotten fruit……Her fruitful happy life had turned into sour and unwanted living. She did not wish to live……not without her mentor,her love,her life …..Capt.Rajveer Singh Shekhawat….

DESTINY....again.....

She received her first posting letter.....and.....

The moment she opened it,got a shock of her life.

She was posted in KMA.....

KMA....which has been responsible for miseries of her life.But the same KMA has made her what she is today and had given her such anmol(invaluable) Friends ...

It was at KMA she met Rajveer....

She was in dilemma.She had mixed feelings for KMA.

Naina being the best cadet pass-out and most promising soldier was assigned as an assisstant in guarding the triggers.

She was supposed to go there as an undercover officer and was supposed to teach Strategy and communication!

Naina was scared a bit...was history repeating itself,again...???

She was lost in thought when her mother entered her room.

"Naina beta....KMA? Can't u ask for a change in posting?", worry clearly evident in her voice.

"No maa,you know thats not possible."

"But beta..."

"Don't worry maa...i'l be fine."

"But beta i'm scared.First Naveen,then capt.Rajveer,and...",she couldn't complete.

"Maa....i understand that you are scared,but maa i have to go.God has given me one more chance and i'll not waste it."

"Beta, there is no need.",a voice came from behind.

" Baba...."

"Yes beta, u will no more work into Naveen's case."

Naina was shocked.She couldn't believe her ears.

"Baba..what are you saying?"

"U heard right.",he stated blankly.

"I don't believe it baba,i just don't.You know why i joined KMA and..."

"Yes we know that but we nomore want u to work in that matter."

Naina,raising her voice,"Baba i had promised myself that i will proove Naveen bhaiya innocent,and nobody can abort me from my resolve" ,anger clearly evident in her voice.

Naina's father ,shouting,"YES WE KNOW THAT but you UNDERSTAND one thing that we have lived with our son's name stained till now and we will SURVIVE further.But you are our only child now and we can't lose you.U GET THAT?"

Naina(shouting back) : "FINE...but both of you understand onething.I AM going to do this.I HAVE TO.",her eyes welled up of tears,"For I have promised my MENTOR that I shall complete his incomplete mission and take revenge of those who had ripped him of his career,his position,his life.And I WILL DO IT."

"Naina,don't you care for us?Just for the sake of promise you made to that Captai..."

"HE is not THAT Captain baba",Naina cut him in between, "He is my teacher, my Mentor, my support, my LO...",she stopped abruptly and stormed out of the room.

Her parents stared after she left,helplessly.

Naina came running into the lawn.She fell on her knees.She stared at the sky above.Soon the vision blurred as tears appeared in her eyes,rolling down her cheeks.She cried and cried but it didn't lessen her pain a bit.

"Why Raj why?why did u leave me? you know my life is worthless without you.Still you made me promise to stay behind.Why Raj?Why.....",Naina screamed,"I don't want to live....i DON'T. Do you hear me?" "But I have to...",helplessness evident in her voice,"I have to,to fulfill the promise i made to you."

So this is who I am

And this is I know

And I must choose to live

For all that i can give

And I will stand for my dream if I can

Symbol of my faith in who I am

But you are my only

And I must follow on the road that lies ahead

And I won't let my heart control my head

But you are my only

I keep the memory of YOU and ME inside.

She softly touched the watch on her wrist and said,

"I shall do it Raj...I WILL fulfill my promise.I shall do it.For YOU......"

There is a vision and fire in me

I keep the memory of YOU and ME, Inside

And we don't say goodbye

We don't say goodbye

With all my love for you

And what else we may do

WE DON'T SAY , GOODBYE.

Edited by manatated - 16 years ago

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