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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Nice prologue!!!!!!

It was a trip down memory lane!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waiting to know what will happen next!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
thanx a lot for that recap!!
it felt nostalgic...
glad to see a rn fic based on lrl!
pls continue soon.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Beautiful prologue.
Please update soon.
We are all waiting eagerly for it.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Part One:

The events that took place in her life, were unbearable for her. She was fed up of everything.She developed a deep hatred for Army....

ARMY.........

Which was passion for her brother.......

ARMY......

Which was in every breath of her Mentor.......

ARMY.....

Which had trapped them both,the best army officers and hard core patriots.....

ARMY.........

Which had ruthlessly crushed her life,her dreams,her aspirations,her innocence,her desires....

THE ARMY......

Which had stained the name of her Brother,her Family, may be now...FOREVER....

THE ARMY......

Which had snatched away her Brother.....

AND THE SAME VERY ARMY.......

Which had taken away her LOVE,Her LIFE....Her Rajveer...

Yes,she stopped calling him Rajveer sir....atleast when she is left to herself.....which is the case most of the times...and when she is thinking of him.....Which is the only thing she does now......

NAINA SINGH AHLUWALIA is shattered to the core.The horrible death of Capt.Rajveer had taken away all the happiness in her life and has reduced her mere existence to nothing.

"Ajab hai ishq yaara...

Pal do pal ki khushiya...

Gham ke khazane milte hai phir..

Milti hai tanhayeeyan...

Kabhie aansu, kabhie aahen,

kabhie shikvey,kabhie naaley,

Tera chehra nazar aaye..."

She found him everywhere and she found him Nowhere....

She cried and cried and cried for him....But he won't return...

But somewhere,deep inside her heart....she knew He was there...If she is alive,He has to be....

She could feel his Heartbeats....or were they "tic-tic" of the watch Capt.Rajveer gifted her which she has now held close to her Heart?

Naina decided to quit INDIA itself,coz this was the country where that corrupt system belonged that took away the the two most important person in her life.

She applied for M.B.A in US and got selected.

Everybody tried convincing her but she being the usual stubborn,won't budge.

But Destiny....as always;made a decision on her behalf and stayed...She stayed in the VERY ARMY....

To fulfill the the promise made to her love....

She became the best cadet and now she has to punish the culprits.

It

was all due to the wishes and hard efforts of her faithful friends , that she was atleast trying to live……but it was just for the sake of her parents, for her friends.

The events that took place in her life, were unbearable for her. She wanted to run away from her own, from her own life. Her life was nothing but like a rotten fruit……Her fruitful happy life had turned into sour and unwanted living. She did not wish to live……not without her mentor,her love,her life …..Capt.Rajveer Singh Shekhawat….

DESTINY....again.....

She received her first posting letter.....and.....

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Friends this update specially for you on the ocassion of anniversary of LRL...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
very nice update!!!
hope naina and raj meet soon...
thanks for informing..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16

Grt update. You have described Naina's emtions very well.👏👏👏

Hope ki Raj ki dhamakedar entry ho. Waiting for the two lovers to meet.😉
Thnx for informing me.
Update the next part soon.
Bye!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Cool part. U hav portrayed very well how Raj's demise has affected Naina. I specially liked the line: She found him everywhere, but she found him nowhere. And the heartbeat line was also beautiful.

Now dat she has got her first posting letter, I hope it is gonna be sumthing gud 4 her n us as well. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Too good!!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

You have portrayed very well how Raj's death has affected Naina!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Tumne jaise Naina ki feelings aur uski haalat likhi hai that was awesome!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 👏 👏 👏 👏

I am happy that she has stopped calling him Rajveer Sir and shifted to Rajveer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song was very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved this line that she found him everywhere and she found him nowhere!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

She felt his heartbeats in the tic-tic of the watch he had gifted her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina Raj ko wapas zaroor le aayegi I am sure of that!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

She has received her posting letter!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊I am sure it somewhere where it will help her in her mission!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
that was really good
but is it going to be a sad fic
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Oye hoye first part to bahut hi changa tha jee 😛 😛 😛 aur tum ne jitne acche se Naina ki haalat aur us ki feelings likhi hain 😭 😭 😭 Raj k jaane k baad that were awesome.👏 👏 👏 Raj ko vapas le k aayegi Naina i am sure about it.😃 😃 😃 Aur Naina ne un logon ko saza bhi dila di, i am happy. 😊 😊 😊
ab jaldi se aage likho.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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