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prerna_agrawal

@prerna_agrawal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

nice one!!......very sweet!!!......thanx for the pm!!

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

awesome yaar

update next part soooooooooooooon yaar

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Rabbia

@Bewafa_Behan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

too gud..!!
very nupurish n mayankish style indeed..!!
thanx for the PM..!! 😊

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Radz!! 🤗 I thought u were going to PM me when you update... I just happened to find this thread today and you have already updated 2 more chapters. Looks like I will have to keep better watch from now on.

Part 2: Mayank is in!! *jumps up in the air* Thanks so much for bringing him in. And I must say u deserve a special round of applause for the interesting characterization... Mayank's Mom, CJ, Uday, Aha and of course Shukla Sir! Mayank sounds like the perfect guy, as he himself says. He has all the sarcasm, wit and confidence that I love - add to that success, big bucks, good looks and an adorable Mom.. Man, I would marry him right away!

Part 3: Benji has a crush on Diya? Haila, that is interesting.. I remember some speculation on that front even on the show. High time Benji gets a girl.. Nupur is so upset abt the junior artiste treatment she's getting... You write her so well. I could almost see her getting hyper and frustrated with the situation.
Ok now the first sight scene - brilliant! Benji getting irritated with Nupur's overreaction and Mayank giving them a smug smile - ah! I cant wait till their first meeting.

Continue soon Radz, lotsa love.

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

ohhh it was such a short update!! But i still loved it!

hehe...mayank asking his mom not to try anything else to cook..LOL...

hmmm...first meeting toh ho gayi but not officially...I'm waiting eagrly for that!!

LOL...shenna is in this too! I loved the Benji-Dia angle you put!

Update soon..! Thanks for the PM!

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heena

@heena.damor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

hey dear..gr8 update yaar... plzz continue soon... n thanks 4 d pm.....

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

part 1: it was brilliant i loved nupur and samrat at the beginning for their scene.

part 2: it was imaginative i loved mayank he sounded great

part 3: i loved benjy and diya and i cannot wait for mayank and nupur to meet

👏all the parts were amazing i enjoyed reading every single bit i thoroughly enjoyed continue soon and i hope you like my comments and i can't wait for the next part of this ff

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Lovely FF!

The way you've potrayed the actions of characters are just like it would happen in the show.

Please do continue soon.

Anjali

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Guess what I found 😃

I demand to be on the PM list! 😆

Part 1:

I love the name of the serial and how close they are =) Poor Gunjan, people used to take advantage of her being quiet and stuff? Well at least her friends and sister were there for her =)

Part 2:

Loved Mayank's intro! Leave it to him to be a workaholic 😆 Aww he came back a day early for his mom's b-day? So sweet

Part 3:

Ooh Sheena's in it too? And Benji has a crush on Diya? Aww.

Nupur and Mayank almost met? That would've been interesting. Too bad he didn't bump into Nupur. I bet she would've yelled at him 😆

Aww poor Nupur's dupatta ripped 😆 She's so adorable. Poor Benji doesn't know what to do to make her stop crying 😆

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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Posted: 16 years ago

#70

It saddens me how late I am...but my spot! 😳

*edited*

Sorry for taking so long Radz! *holds ears*

Oh and since I am doing this after our talk I'm warning you now....the comments won't be that great...

I love how upset Nupur gets over the lack of fair treatment and aww Benji has a crush on Diya? Cute! 😳 Okay...why is Sheena here? 😔 Bleh!! 😔 But anyways....

I love the part with Mayu sounds so hectic for him, but I'm glad you showed them kinda bump into each other but not meet! 😊

Awww poor Nupur!😔 Wonder what'll happen next! 😊

Love you,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago