Mannnn this is like my 3rd try trying to type out this comment...stupid annoying internet screw ups!
WOHOOOOOOOOOO I'm not the last one to comment for once! 😎
What a great moment. *celebrates*
O YAAA...the update...righhhhttt....was just getting to that too....eeeeeeeeeee loved it!! :D Pshhhhh watch'ya talkin' about? Not upto the standards my a*s! Nakhre toh dekho jee is ladki ke. :P
LOL CJ and Uday arguing. And Mayank amused. What a queet moment. Aww...
OOO I love how you have these 'almost' meeting Mayank and Nupur scenes. It's kinda like in the movie too how Sanjay keeps noticing Kalpana before actually meeting her...like when she's helping those kids etc. So he kinda makes an impression of what she's like before he meets her. Plus it keeps us excited for their actual mulakaat! Juu are a genius writer Radzjee! LOVE how Mayank's already kinda noticing aspects about Nupur...like being slightly amused at her and noticing her bright clothes wagera wagera. MANNNNNN you better make them meet soon!!
LOL the part where Nupur is deliberately irritating the reception desk lady made me smile. SO like Nupur. :D
OOOOOOOOOOO the lift scene...when Gunjan meets the lady...I was like THIS IS SOOOO MAYANK'S MOM YO!!!!!!!!!!! YIPIEEEEEEEEEEE she's here!
And I love how she knows both the sisters! Makes her more closer to Nupur's life I think. I seriously love how you've written all the moments where all these characters interact with each other! Other than just the couples wala angle I mean. 👍🏼
Aww the Nupur and mom meeting wala scene was so adorable. I kinda wish Nupur had been like "haina?" and all excited and agreeing with Maa about Sheena...but it's their first meeting and all so it's totally understandable. It's kinda nice how you had her defending Sheena. Def. adds more to her character. =)
ooo just the last bit...I'm kinda confused...does Gunjan know that the lady is indeed her boss, i.e. Mayank's mom now? Or is that just left for us to ponder upon? left to our imaginations perhaps?...you mean and skillful writer kahin ki....lol...either way....AWESOME update!! Loved it to the core. Can't wait for part 5! :D
*HUGSS*
OO p.s. I'm going to be dissappearing for awhile....going to India where I won't have access to a computer so if I don't comment on a lot of parts you know why. DO keep pm-ing me though. 😃
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