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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

my spot! 😃

*edited*

MAYU'S HERE! 😃 (You can tell I'm kinda hyper! 😳)

I loved the way wrote this...all amazing and *sighs* Mayu in the whole business tycoon role is AWESOME! 😃😳 If you didn't know...I have a weird obsession with it! 😳

Anyways you've kept his real character but made him a little more nicer? 😳😛 My comments aren't going to make sense anymore...there's a indian wedding celebrations on TV! 😳 Aww CJ and Uday! 😃😳 YAY! 😛😳 They make Mayu's life more fun! 😉😳

This had me swooning... ""You can't change perfection," Mayank smugly told the other man. Shukla Ji just rolled his eyes. " *sighs*😃

Anyways cant wait for more! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#42

wow tht was nice part plzz contuied soon

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

TOO GUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....awesome amazing.......uff aur kya kahoon......loved it yaar....

luv
ananya

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shinella

@shinella

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

ohoooooooooooooooo

u have made me tooooooooooo impatient yaar

mayur meeting

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

and btw this part was awesooooooooooooomeeeeeee

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Mayank's entry was totally cool...in the best sense possible!!

I can so so imagine him as a Sanjay Singhania in the future!!

And omg...you added shukla and ms. aha too...! This is great...

And i also love the fact that Mayu's mom is in it too...he's going to surprise her...!

I'm loving your FF....absolutly!

Now i'm just waiting for the first meeting..hehe...

Awesome writing!!

Keep it up!

EDIT : omg...how could i forget to mention...Uday and CJ married..!!! That was the BEST part...LOL...this is gonna be great..i hope we'll see them too...

Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

awesome intro of mayu yaar . it was fabulassss

uday & cj 2 gather awesome yaar .

amazing update yaar

update next part soooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Pallavi

@pigbelly4myfeet

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Hey Radz,

LMAO haan yaar I'm Debby's friend who she likes to call Pallojee for some reason...🤔😆...and you're the Radz in her story haina? *ishmarty pants muh* 😆

Ok coming to your update....ahhhhhh YAYYY Mayank's here! 🥳 lol aww you couldn't wait to bring him. LOVEDD his entry! I can totally picture him as Sanjay Singhania; young, serious, and successful businessman types. I'm glad you've kept his original personality in the show in your story too. Like I love how he's still such a good boy in your story, and a "mommy's boy". ☺️ 😆 O and yay for his mom makin' an entry soon. :D

LMAOOO Shuklaji!! 😆😆 ahaha and you got him married to Ms. Aha! LOL nice...and YAYYY for Uday and CJ!! I was totally rooting for them in the show too but aissa ho nahin paya so I'm rejoicing reading it in your story now.🥳😆 And LMAOOO at Uday being Mayank's "closest confidantes" 🤣. In the show toh, he can hardly tolerate the guy. 😆....so I'm guessing he's not a complete dimwit in your story then?

Awesome update! This was such a fun read. And I loved how you described Mayank as "he never saw women" and all...so ahhhhh can't wait till he meets Nupur. 😃. Seriously love how you've related all the characters in your FF, like Samrat and Nupur as best friends and Uday and CJ and Benji and everything.

And that last line was SO Mayank. :D Super excited for you to go on. 😃

Love,

Pallavi =)

Edited by cute2stay - 16 years ago