Thanxxxxxxxxxx Sumi...😃Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Soch rahi hu...kya likhu? mujhe pata hai mere uds kaise hote hain...tabhi tum sab comments likhte waqt itne confused lagte ho...😆 😆Rajveer and Naina ki 'Ankahi' scene ke bare me likhu....ya tumhari khubsurti ke bare me.... haiiila...meri khubshurti ke bare me ...mat likho😆...I mean...the beauty of ur writing...😆 U were actually awesum dear!! 👏👏👏 hmmm...lagta hai pura prepare ho kar aayi ho ke mujhe jhaad par chadha kar rahogi...😳Yaar....ye next line padhte hi....I was stuck....
kahna chahta hun ke...main tumhe tut kar chane laga hun...!!! awwww...thanqqqq😳
Ek ajeeb si sweetness hai iss line me...I mean...I had read such lines....the very same words even before....but jab iss scene me padha na....to jaise kuch alag feel hua...sumthing nice.⭐️👏 sirf nice......aur kuch nahi...!!! actually likhte waqt main kuch aur feel karr rahi thi...😳
And then wo Naaz wala scene....that was to confuse us only...so I cant say anything more on that...😆sab se better yehi hai...😆....bas Naaz ki dua kabul ho jaye....but yeah am doubtful...Raj ne jo wajah Naaz ko batayi kya sirf wahi ek wajah hai? 😕😕 Well...tumhe to pata hi hai...Dimagless Dimag....khali hone ki wajah se zyada tez chalta hai....so I had this feeling....😆😆 kya farq padta hai ke wajah kya hai...mera mission yeh hai ke RN se confession karwana hai...by hook or by crook...!!! hai ki nahi...😆
Next Naina, Aalekh n Huda ka....wo masti wala scene...where at the end...Raj ko kisi ladki ke sath sochte hi Naina by reflex pichhe mur jati hai...😆...and then later on she was abt to punch him only...😆😆...that was a sweet scene. alekh aur huda khud peetne se bachne ke liye rajveer ko fasha gaye the...😆
And the mock drill....⭐️...very well executed by you...👏👏....there were many emotions actually....and u portrayed them really well. And am not just talking abt RN.....Rajveer ki taraf Aalekh n Huda ka bhi ek emotion hai....and u brought that in an equally beautiful way!! 😃👏👏 thanqqqqqq sweety...actually mujhe na darr tha ke tum sab is scene ko le kar mujhe galiyan toh nahi doge...!!! par chalo main toh bach gayi...😃
Salim Khan ke saamne Aalekh n Huda ki convo...was mastttt!!! 😆 I liked this line:
Rajveer sir kah rahe the ke voh confident the ke hum ulluyon ko gadha bana kar chodenge...!!! ha ha ha...yeh us ki andruni feelings thi...jo gusse me bahar aa gayi thi...😆
And next....the way Huda explained 'confident' and 'confidential' to Aalekh...was hilarious!! And even the way... Aalekh understood it...was cool...👏👏...and I shud actually admire ur khurupati dimag (ahh am not so sure of the word shollie😆 khurapati dimag matlab...jis ke dimag me hamesha ajeeb ajeeb aur wired khayal aate rahte hain...😆 aur tum sorry kyoun kah rahi ho...mujhe pata hai na ke mera dimag kaisa hai...😆)....that u actually brought in such a sweet scene...so effortlessly that it just felt to be an intrinsic part of the whole thing!! thanqqqqq... kya hai na one of my fav writer se aise comments sunn na matlab... feeling....'Yeppiiiii'😃
And RN scene was again nice....Naina actually lived up to the lessons of Rajveer....and as Raj always wanted....she put forth her ideals and love for the country....other than HIM!! par naina hai ke manti nahi...just lyk 'dil hai ke manta nahi'...😆
But madam to naraz hai...😆😆...but hey...xcuse me girl....main tumse naraz hu....coz I actually literally hated the Navin thing being brought there....😡....coz mujhe pata hai...Raj ko iss baat se kitniiiii takleef hoti hai...shayad hi koi aur baat koi aur ilzaam usse itna dard de...😭....but still its his Naina...and I knw.....janab khud unhe manayenge!!
I liked Navin's voice over yaar!! 👏👏 Very sweet!! ⭐️ thanqqq dear...tumhe yeh scene achha laga...😃haan...naveen background me hai na...isiliye...!!! kaash is fiction me main thoda sa horror scene dal pati toh...naveen ke bhoot se sara kaam karwa leti...😆!!! par...
Now coming to the LRL jokes (on which I was craving to cum for long😆).....first one is superb!! 😆👏⭐️ Its like...meri Abhimanyu par jo frustration hai....uski ek achhi khaasi reward mil gayi mujhe...🤣....Oh I loveeeeee RAJVEER!!
And next..."Zor se bolo....Jai Mata Di"...🤣...hilarious Pri...😆😆...and next Aalekh ka DEO wala ad...😆😆...too gud sweetie...u rock!! ⭐️ chalo...tumhare chehre par smile aa gayi na...toh mujhe mera reward mil gaya...😃
Achha now...abt the progress of RN relation...well...to be honest...I dont want u to speed up....coz I never felt the actual RN stature was so simple to speed up things so easily....Rajveer and Naina...ek typical kahaani ke hero heroine nahi hai....they hav many things going on wid themselves.......which perhaps doesnt surpass their love...but yeah...cant be overshadowed by just that 'feeling'...so I feel...u r going in the perrrfecct way!!
And yeah...rahi baat ILUTMTLU ko follow karne ki...I hope Ma'm....aap iski happy ending ko happily follow karengi....other than the delays and all...😆😆 main toh sab kuch follow karnewali hun...!!! dost jo hun...'yeh dosti hum nahi todenge...todenge...nair ka sar...(ya phir other options hain na...jaise bharghav n gehlot ka sar...) par tera sath na chodenge...'😆
Achha chalo...ab sach me bahut hua....donno main itna kyun likh rahi hu...take care sweetie...and UD soon...😉 kyoun likh rahi hun...matlab...!!! mujhe achha lagta hai isiliye...aur kya...😆
Luv,
Sumi.
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