ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

this was too good

Pls i hope next update comes up soon..........

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#682

Soch rahi hu...kya likhu? Rajveer and Naina ki 'Ankahi' scene ke bare me likhu....ya tumhari khubsurti ke bare me....I mean...the beauty of ur writing...😆 U were actually awesum dear!! 👏👏👏 Yaar....ye next line padhte hi....I was stuck....😳

kahna chahta hun ke...main tumhe tut kar chane laga hun...!!!

Ek ajeeb si sweetness hai iss line me...I mean...I had read such lines....the very same words even before....but jab iss scene me padha na....to jaise kuch alag feel hua...sumthing nice. 😳⭐️👏

And then wo Naaz wala scene....that was to confuse us only...so I cant say anything more on that...😆....bas Naaz ki dua kabul ho jaye....but yeah am doubtful...Raj ne jo wajah Naaz ko batayi kya sirf wahi ek wajah hai? 😕😕 Well...tumhe to pata hi hai...Dimagless Dimag....khali hone ki wajah se zyada tez chalta hai....so I had this feeling....😆😆

Next Naina, Aalekh n Huda ka....wo masti wala scene...where at the end...Raj ko kisi ladki ke sath sochte hi Naina by reflex pichhe mur jati hai...😆...and then later on she was abt to punch him only...😆😆...that was a sweet scene.

And the mock drill....⭐️...very well executed by you...👏👏....there were many emotions actually....and u portrayed them really well. And am not just talking abt RN.....Rajveer ki taraf Aalekh n Huda ka bhi ek emotion hai....and u brought that in an equally beautiful way!! 😃👏👏

Salim Khan ke saamne Aalekh n Huda ki convo...was mastttt!!! 😆 I liked this line:

Rajveer sir kah rahe the ke voh confident the ke hum ulluyon ko gadha bana kar chodenge...!!!

And next....the way Huda explained 'confident' and 'confidential' to Aalekh...was hilarious!! And even the way...Aalekh understood it...was cool...👏👏...and I shud actually admire ur khurupati dimag (ahh am not so sure of the word shollie😆)....that u actually brought in such a sweet scene...so effortlessly that it just felt to be an intrinsic part of the whole thing!!

And RN scene was again nice....Naina actually lived up to the lessons of Rajveer....and as Raj always wanted....she put forth her ideals and love for the country....other than HIM!!

But madam to naraz hai...😆😆...but hey...xcuse me girl....main tumse naraz hu....coz I actually literally hated the Navin thing being brought there....😡....coz mujhe pata hai...Raj ko iss baat se kitniiiii takleef hoti hai...shayad hi koi aur baat koi aur ilzaam usse itna dard de...😭....but still its his Naina...and I knw.....janab khud unhe manayenge!! 😳

I liked Navin's voice over yaar!! 👏👏 Very sweet!! ⭐️

Now coming to the LRL jokes (on which I was craving to cum for long😆).....first one is superb!! 😆👏⭐️ Its like...meri Abhimanyu par jo frustration hai....uski ek achhi khaasi reward mil gayi mujhe...🤣....Oh I loveeeeee RAJVEER!! 😳😆😆 (though I do it anyways) 😳

And next..."Zor se bolo....Jai Mata Di"...🤣...hilarious Pri...😆😆...and next Aalekh ka DEO wala ad...😆😆...too gud sweetie...u rock!! ⭐️

Achha now...abt the progress of RN relation...well...to be honest...I dont want u to speed up....coz I never felt the actual RN stature was so simple to speed up things so easily....Rajveer and Naina...ek typical kahaani ke hero heroine nahi hai....they hav many things going on wid themselves.......which perhaps doesnt surpass their love...but yeah...cant be overshadowed by just that 'feeling'...so I feel...u r going in the perrrfecct way!! 😳😳 'Speed up' shayad isliye kehti hu....coz kabhi kabhi lagta hai...sab kuch nazar andaz karke....sirf achhe ko dekhu....and uske saath chalu..😉...but then thats not actually possible!! 😆

And yeah...rahi baat ILUTMTLU ko follow karne ki...I hope Ma'm....aap iski happy ending ko happily follow karengi....other than the delays and all...😆😆

Achha chalo...ab sach me bahut hua....donno main itna kyun likh rahi hu...take care sweetie...and UD soon...😉

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Hi Priya

Chalo finally u got time to update this 1..😃

Raj was so silent but his silence was speaking volumes..Even Naina cud hear his unsaid emotions..this time she didn't keep quite and she wanted Raj to say something..

Raj as usual was unable to say anything but atleast he hugged her when he saw that she is so hurt..Naina was blissfully happy in his arms..

yeh itne fastrack zamane mein Raj Bharat Bhooshan ke time ka romance kyun kar raha hai?? Dj's ki excuse to dena hi mat..Mana ne sahi kaha unki kaafi dhulaayi fans already kar chuke hain iss baat par😆😆😆

That song is pretty gud...😃 aur woh shayri bhi kaafi acchi thi😊

Yeh Naaz ka kya secret mission hai?? as usual usne bhi Raj ko bahut samjhaya but kahin na khain Raj ki baat bhi sach hai..Naina ke parents ke sath woh aisa kaise kar sakta hai?? par usne jo kiya bhi kiya uski majboori thi and I am sure Naina ke parents iss baat ko samjhenge..

I am sure God will definetely help Raj this time.😊 he'll surely have his love with him.😃

Huda and Alekh ko har waqt ladkiyon mein hi buraayi dikhti hai!! Naina ne unko sahi punch mara but woh dono to usko hi bewkoof banakar bhaag gaye..😆😆

Yeh mock drill tha ko horror show!! Wat was Raj thinking while planning such a thing..All three Alekh,Huda and Naina were so shocked and hurt at first.they cudn't believe that Raj cud do such a thing .Then when the truth was revealed they were so angry on Raj..he really deserved that.😡

Naina ko manana ab bahut hi zyaada tough hoga Raj ke liya😆😆

Kaash Raj Naveen ki baatein sun sakta.!!

Pls continue soon

Bye

LRL kokes were as usual too funny😆😆

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#684

Happy Makar Sankranti and Pongal to u too Priya. 😊

Edited by suhana_dixit - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#685

Maine na ghalti se...reserved post ki jagah yaha comment post kar diya tha...😆...so now to validate my post I hav an excuse...😆😆

Happy Makar Sankranti or Lohri 😃😃

P.S. I hope these two are different festivals...😳

Edited by sumaiya wahid - 14 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#686

awesome part. loved it.
continue soon.

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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#687

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMGGG ....awesome story ..oomg fabulous ..ff..i loved whole story line...and i really enjoy myself......after..read...the whole story....woooomgggg awesome part...
i love it.........
luv olivee

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#688

nice part
loved it
plz continue soon

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#689

Awesomeeeee update !!!

And it was full of smileeeeeeeessss and nothing about suffering alright?

I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddd Huda and Aalekh's reactions in the3 whole update !!

miss universe hone k baad muh pe haath rakhke aise roti hai ki jaise khushi ke maare ulti kar degi! 😆 😆 😆

and after they got to know that it waz mock drill, their dialogues were simplyyyy supeerbbb !!!

i mean i loved whole of their segment...

jab huda bolta hai ki usse Rajveer ka senior hona chahiye tha to their dial when dalim khan was following them....

it was jus fab fab fab !!👏👏👏

Huda and Alekh were stars of the update !!

ANdddddddddd priyaaaa jee !!

AAp itniiiiiiii samajhdaari ki baatein na kare!theek hai?>

Apne aap ko DJ ke barabar kyun banana chahti hai?

tu jaanti hai na t\ki unki iss samajhdaari ki wajehse hum unhe kitniiiiiiiii gaaliya dete hai??

tu kyun usse share karna chahti hai?

aur haan mujhe teri baat smajh aayi...issliye main haath toh utha sakti hoon...par tu bhi sochle ki yeh haath kisliye uthega?😛😆 😆 😆 😆

jaldi jaldi update karo jaaniiii !😉

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#690

an update after long time felt so good 😃😃😃........... sabka bata diya ..kiske ghar kya sweets milengi 😆😆😆......... but khud patang udane chali gayi ......... come back soon else all sweets will be finished 😆😆😆😆............

coming to part .thoda continuity ke liye last part padhna pada tha .😆😆😆.coz way u started RN back from walk 😆😆😆....... i started thinking RN kahan gaye the 🤔......... last padh ke yaad aaya ...... a walk in moonlight 😍...........

Rajveer literally gave a heartattack to me 😆😆😆....by that mockdrill 😆😆😆....gosh what he was thinking 😆😆😆.......... sach mein goli lag jati toh 😭😭😭.... aise shock dene se pehle warning deni chaiye 😆😆😆.........

why the guy is so complicated 😕😕😕.... he is yet to confess 😒.... he thinks abt evry1..... naina, uske parents sab ke bare mein sochega but not himself 😭😭........ kab confess karega ❓ ... hope he does that soon ......... & i agree with naveen oops naveen's aatma.....for once & 4 all sab kuch naina ko aaram se bata do 😆😆😆..... itni tension lekar ghumte ho sar par 😆😆😆

will wait 4 next part 😛😛..........sooner this time 😃😃😃

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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