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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#591

awesomeeeeee blosssommmm upate Pri !!!

oye yaar....mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe tujhe aise hi order dena chahiye !! 😛

Short Notice par tu aur bhi badhiya update likhti hai !!!👏 👏

Aur rahi baat Naam roshan karne ki....toh...well apne Maa-Papa ka toh tu karti hai na? bass toh fir...aur kitniiiiiiiiiiiii cheezo ka karegi???😛

Issliye ...Apne Fic ke Naam ko ITNAAAAAAAAAAAAa seriously mat le ! 😛 😆😆

Aalekh and Huda .....ROCKKKKINNNGGGG !!!

you know what? mera bhi reaction wahi tha ! Aagaya aur ek Abhimanyu !! 🤢

End ka RN scene and woh song....aweeeesooomeeeeeeeeeee !!

well...ab itne jaldi tujhse agle UD ki toh umeed karna bekar hai...but still....update sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn....!!!😃

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#592

hey !!! LRL classes DHAMMAAAALLLL the haan !!! 😆😆 😆 Kya main attend kar sakti hoon???😛

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#593

How sweet naina ko rajveer pe inta trust dekh kar mujhe bahut accha laga

aur alekh and huda giving warning to gunny was really mindblowing

super

the whole update was mind blowing

amazing

excellent

cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#594

hi😊

priya

the up is really a good one😊😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

rajveer naina ke goli chaliye isliye gunny naina se rajveer ko milne tak nahin dena chahate😡😡😡😡 😡😡😡😡😡poor rajveer is guilt ko leekar hospital se bahar chala gaya par alekh aur huda ne sahi kaha ke rajveer ne jo bhi kuch kiya woh naina ke bhalle ke liye kiya hoga 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃isliye gunny should keep himself out of rajveer and naina😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

par gunny he is really a person man woh toh jaise rajveer ke picche par gaya 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

i just dont like his this kind behavoiur 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡maana ke he cares for naina but why he is interfering between naina and rajveer 🤢

rajveer ko ab yeh baat sata rahe haai ke jab naina ko pata chalega ke usne jaan bujkar naina par goli chalaye tab naina sayed usse maaff nahin karege 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

par naina usse pata tha that rajveer ne jo bhi kuch kiya woh sab uske bhalle ke liye he tha 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃kunki agar rajveer usse maarna he chahata tha toh he can shot him in her shoulder par rajveer ne aasa nahin kiya usne goli aase chaliye so that goili bas uske shoulder ko chu ke nikal jaaye 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

kunki naina jaante the rajveer usse kabhie maarne ke baare mein soch bhi nahin sakte 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

hosh aane ke bad naina ne jab rajveer ko nahin dekha she feels bad and alekh told her to call rajveer

rajveer ko dekh ke jaisa naina ka sara dard chala gaya 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊aur saath he saath rajveer ke mann mein jo guilt tha woh bhi naina ke baate sun ke dur ho gaye 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

i loved the whole up 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

plz jaldi se up karna aur do pm me

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#595

amazing part. beautiful.
loved it.
continue soon.

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#596

that was really good
plz continue soon

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poojabi

@poojabi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#597

hey prya sorry for being late.bt ud boht acha tha thank god koi misunderstanding nehi hua rn ke bich me warna gunny to gun leke para tha raj ke piche naina ne jawab de hi dya.aur mujhe lrl jokes bhi boht pasand aya specially rn wala ha ha .

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#598

So here comes the reply for ur update of Ankahi.
Nice one.
Raj jaanta tha ki us ne Gunny k man me shak daal diya hai aisa kar k par jab us ne kuch bhi kiya tha aur koi bhi step uthaya tha to obviously kaafi soch samajh k hi uthaya hoga na.
Gunny ne apni taraf se poori koshish ki hai Naina se Raj ko door rakhne ki par shayad vo bhi theek se nahi jaanta hai abhi. Tabhi to Raj khud ba khud vahan se chala gaya.
Accha kiya Huda aur Alekh ne Gunny ko directly samjha diya acche se ki Raj aur Naina ki zindagi se door rahe vo aur beech me ek aur Abhi aane ki koshish kar raha hai.
Ek baar us ki ki gayi galtiyon se ab dono alert hai but jo baat mujhe sab se jyada pasand aayi vo ye thi ki itna jyada bharosa hai in logon ko Rajveer par.
Itne dangerous ho gaye Alekh n Huda us k liye. Gunny bhi sochta hoga ki jaane kya jaadu kar rakha hai Rajveer ne in logon par ki ye sab kisi ki sunte hi nahi hain.
Naina ne finally Rajveer ko yaad kiya sab se milne k baad aur ab jab Naina ne yaad kiya hai to aana to hoga hi Rajveer ko us k paas. That song was really beautiful n in one of my fav too.
Raj ne Alekh aur Huda ka samjha bhi diya aur responsibility bhi di ki un dono ko ab Naina ka khayal rakhna hai. Naina ki jaan khatre me hai aur isiliye itne tight security lagayi hai.
Raj k saamne aaj ek baar fir past aa k khada ho gaya ki kaise us ne Naveen ko ek baar goli maari thi par tab aur aaj ki situation me bahut difference hai na.
Raj apne aap ko Naina se bhi bahut jyada hurt feel kar raha hai aur akele ansoon bhi nahi nikal paa rahe hain jab Naina ne us ko call kiya aur bola ki milne aaye vo us se.
Teri song choice mere se kaafi milte hai. Kitne koshish ki na Alekh n Huda ne Naina se Gunny ko baat na karne dene ki par jab Naina ne Gunny ko ye jawab diya ki vo apni jaan ko nahi maar sakte to mujhe bahut accha laga.
Naina ne kitne confidentally jawab diya na Raj ko ki us ko poora bharosa hai Raj par ki vo kabhi Naina ko hurt nahi karega aur Naina ne jis tarah se Gunny ko Raj ki saari settings k baare me samjhaya that was fantastic.
Aaj pehli baar mujhe laga ki Naina bahut jyada bharosa karti hai Raj par. Their close scene was really nice, bina kahe bhi dono jaante hain ki kya maayne rakhte hain dono ek doosre k liye.
update kar jaldi.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#599

Wow!!!truely amazing updt....

d way it began and d way it ended simply felt like a flow.....
i just felt that even after reading dis much i want more n more.....

tooo good.....

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#600

Update was Superb, Fantastic, Too good.... 👏👏👏

Naina is being treated at the hospital and Raj wants to be with her ...to take away all her pains. But he is hesitating because of his guilt.😭

Gunny does not let him enter naina's room and demands an explanation for him. But this is raj he does not share his worries with anyone.😭

It was a treat to see Alekh and Huda's confidence in Raj. They not only defended and stood up for Raj but showed gunny their unquestionable trust in their Sir, despite of knowing that Raj was the one to shoot naina. Loved their dialogue when they warned Gunny that they would not tolerate another Abhi in Raj's life.👏👏

Both of them are worried about Raj and naina's safety.😲

And then after seeings naina's faith in Raj, just like Huda even I wanted to give naina a jappi.😉 Gunny is once again shocked when naina tells him that she knows that Rja was the one to shoot her. But then she points out other factors which Gunny had not noticed. She is right Raj could never kill naina because naina toh uske dil mein basti hai.😃

gunny is not able to believe how all of them have so much trust in Raj. 😲

Naina knows how hard this must have been on Raj and so she tries to console him and reassure him that she would never leave him. She will alwyas be his.😊

This part bests potrays the title of this FF. Where sab ne Raj ki ANKAHI baat samji hai. loved this part....and cannot wait to read further.👏