ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 61

Pls continue soon

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.


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Originally posted by: neha10.for.u

hi Priya.... Hiiieeeeeeeeee😃

thanks for the pm...... lo...yeh bhi koi THANX kahnewali chiz hai kya...

tumhare charo fics mein ankahi is my favorite for the obvious reason that it is lrl based.....har baar Ankahi ke ud padh ke mein sochti hoon ki kaash lrl me aisa hua hota.... actually is baar mujhe laga ki...aap sabhi ko yeh FIC pasand hai...!!! varna main toh hamesha yehi sochti thi ke yeh fic boring hai...aur sirf isiliye main late ud kiya karti thi...😳

on second thoughts, agar kabhi lrl ka sequence bana (😍) to Ankahi ko bhej sakte hai as the story.... nahi...bhej sakte...!!! kya hai na...is k liye bhi DJ'S k paas...kuch aur plan hoga...ha ha ha...!!! sayad kuch aisa ke naina ki shadi huda se ho gayi hai...aur capt rajveer wapas aa gaye hain...ha ha ha...😆

chalo ab is baar ki ud par aate hai....... thik hai...😃

it was excellent, awesome, fantastic, brilliant, mind blowing, fabulous....and so on.......u see meri vocab kam padh gayi hai....... arre arre...tumhe sirf mere is fic k is ud k liye comment karna tha...tum toh sabhi RN fics k comments yehi bhej rahi ho...😆!!! par koi baat nahi...hum sab ki taraf se THANQQQQ so much...😃

waise pinku ne mujhe kuch words udhar diye hai uski dictionary se....chalo wo use karti hoo........ok ud was rapchick, dhamaal. dinchaak, maska,paisa wassol, mast, dhamaakedaar.....(credit goes to pinka ji for these awesome adjectives 😆😆😆 Pinku ek naya dictionary publish karnewali hai...😆) vaise yeh sab tarif mere liye tha...ha ha ha...SHERNI KHUSH HUI...in fact itna khush hui ki ghaash khane lagi hai...😃😆

in short, ud was 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 thanqqqqqqqq😃 😃 😃

ok ab taarif bahut ho gayi....ab actually ud me kya achcha laga wo to bata doo.....sorry kuch galat likh diya.......kya achcha laga kehna hi galat hai.......poori ud hi bahut achchi lagi........ chane ki jhaad baht unchi hai yaar...plz mat chadhayo...gir jayungi toh meri DIWALI ka kya hoga...😆

Rajveer Naina ke pain ko apne ander feel kar raha tha, khud ko saza dena chahta tha, naina ko chot pahuchaane ke liye.......uske liye to jaise uska past ek baar fir uske saamne aa ke khada ho gaya tha.....pehle Naveen ko shoot karna pada....and aaj Naina........uski helplessness ko bahut hi achche se portray kiya tumne 👏👏👏 thanqqqqqqq...😃 😳 😃 😳 😃 😳

and sirf helplessness hi kyu, naina ke liye uske pyaar, uski parwaah ko bhi to ek hi dialogue me show kar diya.......when he tells gunny that uske rehte naina ko kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta....kya dialogue tha , wow 👏👏👏 yeh credit Raj ko jata hai...!!! jab bhi main us k liye koi scene likhti hun na...toh samne use imagine karte hue hi likhti hun...toh credit toh use hi milna chahiye na...😃

waise gunny apni jagah sahi hai....Raj pe shak karne ke liye....abhi tak wo jaanta hi kya hai RN ke baare me jo unke relation ko samajh paaye, infact wo to ye tak nahi samajh paaya hai ki sirf Naina hi nahi, Raj apne har cadet ke saath ek special bond share karta hai.....tabhi to wo surprised hai....sabhi ka Raj par trust dekh ke....wo hairaan hai ki Raj ne Naina par goli chalayi, ye jaante hue bhi huda aur aalekh Raj ka saath de rahe hai....... Gunny ko abhi baht kuch dekhna hai...!!! main hun na...us ka kaan pakad kar RN aur sabhi k bare me achhi baat batane k liye...😃
jaanti hoon maine hi kaha ki wo apni jagah sahi hai....lekin phir bhi mujhe uspe utna hi gussa aa raha tha jitna lrl me wo Abhimanyu pe aata tha.....jabardasti RN ke beech ghus raha hai......😡😡😡 tabhi toh huda aur alekh ne use jamal ghota khilaya...😆

par huda and Aalekh ne mast hool diya gunny ko.....specially jab Aalekh ne unhe dhamkaya ki agar unhone Raj ke against kuch kiya to Raj ke saath saath koi aur bhi hoga jail me apne senior officer par goli chalane ke liye.....and jis par huda ne kaha....1 nahi 2 honge 😆😆😆.....direct dhamki......i just loved that scene...... ha ha ha...kabhi kabhi na... jis ki aqal ghaash charne gayi hoti hai...use is tarh se samjhana bhi padta hai...😆
Waise Aalekh to shuru se hi samajhdaar tha....lekin huda me akal daalne ka credit tumhe jaata hai 👏👏👏 haan...yeh credit toh mera hai...varna DJ'S ne toh kuch aur plan banaya tha...😛

dono ne samajh liya ki agar Raj ne Naina par goli chalayi hai...to sirf use security dilaane ke liye.....and ye bhi decide kar liya ki Naina and Rajveer ko kuch nahi batayenge ki wo dono sab jaante hain........ek baat hai......Aalekh ne sahi kaha ki Raj jaisa koi 1200 saal me ek baar hi aata hai......infact mein to kehti hoon 1200 saal bhi kam hai.........usse bhi jyada time lagta hoga Raj jaise kisi ke liye..... sahi hai...😆

waise agar Aalekh samajhdar hai and Huda to tumne aqal ki tablet khila di hai.....to Naina to really sabki guru nikli....use bhi pehle se pata tha...waise Raj ki protege thi....smart to hogi hi na......but seriously it was really cute to see ki sab jaante hai ki goli kisne chalayi and sab chup hain.......specially naina ka reaction......it was really heart touching to see her belief in Raj.....she knows that Raj can never hurt her ❤️❤️❤️ so sweet....... actually LRL hota toh yeh scene thoda aur khinchta...par maine kuch alag karne ki sochi thi...aur main toh khushi se fuli nahi sama pa rahi hun yeh jan kar ki tum sabhi ko yeh scene itna achha laga...thanqqqqqqqq so much...😃

and best tha uska Raj ko bulaane ka tareeka.....agar nahi aaye to mein phir se aapko Rajveer sir bulaungi 😆😆😆 ha ha ha...yun hi likh diya tha...😆

and gunny par agar huda and Aalekh ki dhamkiyo ka asar nahi bhi hua hoga , to bhi i am sure, naina ki baato se to use bhi akal aa hi gayi hogi....and naina ki baatein sunkar jab huda use hug karne jaane ko kehta hai na....wo scene bhi bahut cute tha....mujhe actually tumhara huda lrl ke huda se better lag raha hai.....👏👏👏 Huda mera nahi hai...voh kisi aur ka tha...aur baad me kisi aur ka hoga...!!! main toh kisi aur ki dewani hun...😆

Now coming to the best part of the ud.....obviously RN conversation.....I know many of ur readers have demanded a confession between RN...vohi toh.........lekin i would say.....tum aise hi fabulous scenes likhti raho.....tumhari fic ka naam bhi justify hota rahega......hai na...😛and hum bas unke unsaid emotions ko feel karte rahenge.....really unhe confession ki jarurat hi nahi hai......bina kahe hi tumne unka love itni beautifully portray kar diya hai.......and actually.....this ud was closest to a confession.....and u have perfectly depicted the trust and understanding between them.....na Raj ko apne action ki justification dene ki jarurat padi......and na hi Naina ko koi shikayat thi......it was really perfect.....tumne really unki unkahi feelings ko apne shabd de ke unhe bahut achche se describe kar diya........bas aise hi achche scenes likhti raho......i don't need a confession..... bass karo yaar...bachhi ki jaan logi kya...😳??? itni tarif nahi kiya karte...tabiyat kharab ho gayi toh...ud late milega...😆

waise abhi bhi kuch sawal baaki hai......Naina ki jaan ko khatra kyu hai ?? Last ud se pehle wali ud me Raj, Naina ko leke pareshaan tha.....wo pareshaani sirf Naina ko shoot karne ko leke thi....yaa abhi koi aur badi baat baaki hai........pls update soon yaar...... page 56...epi 10 me sayad tumhe tumahara answer mil jaye...!!! ek baar phir padh lena...!!! agar phir bhi nahi samajh payi toh...main ek do uds k baad toh use clear kar hi dungi...😃

and yes, bina lrl jokes ki baat kiye mein comment close kaise kar sakti hoon........the classes were too gud.....bas ek question hai....admissions kab se open hai ??? addmission bandh ho chuka hai...!!! dekha nahi class chalu hai...!!! next year jab addmission suru hoga toh main tumhe bata dungi...😆i am sure many would be interested in joining them........mujhse mat poochna ki mein interested hoon ya nahi......kyuki wo to secret hai 😆😆😆 secret...??? kya hai secret...voh bhi bol do...!!! kya hai na...jab tak tum bologi nahi...mere pet me dard hota rahega...😆

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Priya hiiii suhana...

Nice part.. thanqqq

Rajveer was so unhappy ..He was feeling really guilty coz he had had shot Naina knowingly..But something is really very wrong..I think Raj Naina ko protection dilana chahta tha jo ki goli lagne ka baad usko mil gayi.. yeh tumhe ek do uds me pata chal hi jayega...😃

Yeh gunny kyun villian ka role play kar raha hai yahan par..He is exactly like Abhimanyu n I hate them both.😡😡😡 dont woory dear...Gunny ko main villian bann ne dungi hi nahi...!!! sab ki destiny toh main hi likh rahi hun na...😛

Huda n Alekh ne sahi kiya..They both warned Gunny regarding Rajveer..Gunny is shocked to see that all the 6 cadets or Lts trust Raj with their life.. Gunny un sab k sath Rajveer k relation ko sahi tarah se nahi janta...isiliye aisa behave karr raha hai...

Naina was missing Raj n Gunny was adamant to tell her the truth..Huda was trying hard to control his temper..But unfortunately for Gunny Naina already knew the fact that Raj shot her knowingly..But she had full faith on him.. meri fic hai...dear...!!! mazal hai jo naina Raj ko galat samjhe...😆

Raj was so surprised to hear Naina's voice..He came o meet her n he was so sad to see her like this..But he didn't had any option..Naina was so happy to see him and she told him that watever may b the reason of all this she never wanna loose him..Raj is so happy to her this from her.. raj ko khushi thi ki kamm se kam...naina ab us par itna bharosha toh karti hi hai...😃

That song was really beautiful..never heard of it but now I'll definetely try to hear it.It was a sort of silent confession between them just like its title..😃 jarur sunn na yeh song...!!! sirf is k lyrics hi nahi...Lata jee ne itna achha gaya hai...aur jo music hai us ka...voh sab itna touchy hai na...ki tum sach me baht enjoy karogi...one of my fav song...😃

I think abhi iss update mein RN ka proper confession to nahin hua hai.I HOPE NEXT PART MEIN WOH BHI HO JAAYE..😉😆😆 aise kaise confession ho jayega...!!! mere fic k naam ko badnaam karogi kya...???? ANKAHI hai is ka naam...yeh fic khatam bhi ho jayega...lekin confession nahi hoga...!!! tumhe yakeen nahi aa raha hai...main sach kah rahi hun...mujhe us machhar ki kasamm hai jo abhi type karte waqt...mere leg par baith karr mera khun bade pyar se pee raha hai...!!! yeh dekho...jaise hi maine kasamm khayi...bichara mere hi thappad se marr bhi gaya...😆

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

LRL jokes were really too funny 🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 n the last one was romantic too.😆😆😉😉

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Thank you mujhe yeh ud dedicate karne ke liye... is k liye THANQ kyoun...yeh toh mera farz tha...😃

aur usse bhi bada thank u ud karne ke liye....😛😛 aur yeh bhi mera FARZ tha...😆 😆

Yeh kya jhamela ho raha hai...sab kehte hai kisi se mat kehna...lekin malum sab ko hai....😆😆😆 arre nahi...yudi,ali pooja,neelu,naaz...in sab ko toh pata bhi nahi hai...!!! in fact script sunate waqt bhi maine un se yeh baat nahi kahi...😆

Yaar maza aa gaya...fir se yeh vishwaas and all that padh ke...missing lrl all the more....😭 maza aa gaya isiliye ro rahi ho...!!! chalo...chalo ro nahi...varna main geet ko maan k sath nahi...bali ki kisi aur k sath bhaga dungi...😆

Yeh new classes ka segment ekdum mast tha...nair ke muchein...besan ke pakode....lol...!!! he he he...😆


Puchna bekaar hai lekin wen can we expect the next update...????😕 mujhe kya pata...??? main toh tum se puchnewali thi...😆

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...........loved it.

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

comment bhi karna hai 😛😛............. can only say 1 thing .................wow.......... 👏👏👏...........too good........ superb 👏👏👏👏..........thanqqqq😃...thanqqqq😃...thanqqqq😃

starting was emotional 😭...........Raj ke do ansu........to use rota dekhkar mere 4 😭😭............😛😛..... good u didn't made him cry much 😊😊😊............ main kya karti...raj k 2 anshun k sath jab tumhare 4 nikle...toh maine dekha...nukshan mera ho raha hai...!!! flood aa jaye...us se pahle maine raj ko tissue pakda diya...😆

& also didn't made naina a fiesty character like DJs 😛😛 arre DJ'S aur SL me kuch toh faraq hona chahiye na...!!! akhir voh Tony n deeya inshan hai...aur main Sherni...!!! isiliye palda toh mara hi bhari rahega na...😆

gunny i'm coming to kill u.....guess alekh & huda will help me....... 😆😆😆😆......... of course...aur gun ki fiqar tum mat karna...voh alekh le aayega...😆

waise sabko sach pata tha.......fir bhi ek dusre se chupa rahe the 😆😆😆........even i also knew 😆😆😆😆.....rajveer naina ko kabhi nahi mar sakte 😳😳😳...... yeh trust rajveer k liye hai...ya mere liye...??? soch samajh kar answer dena...!!! kyoun ki in sab ki destiny likhne k liye main yahan par baithi hui hun...😆

what u were planning to do in end........... 😕😕😕............. Raj shooting his hand 😭😭😭..........thank god phone rang at right time...... 😃😃😃........ tabhi toh maine shooting se pahle sabhi ko ek ek IDEA ka fone de rakha hai...ki koi agar galat scene aaye toh idea lagayo...galat scene ko achha bana do...!!! achha idea hai na...😆

aaaww the last scene was cute 😍..........all hugging shugging....... thanqqqq miss...😃 lagta hai is baar achhe marks mil gaye mujhe😃

when the practical classes will start 😉😉😉.......... make rajveer inspire from ur LRL classes.........😛 😛............i also wanna attend Rajveer sir class.........guess naina will kill me 😆😆😆😆.......... addmission khatam ho chuka hai...!!! dekha nahi...class chalu hai...😆 varna haan...sayad naina thoda violent ho jati...😆

so now continue soon ......... pretty soon 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Umm.....mujhe na....bahuuuuuuuut kuch kehna hai.....lekin I am actually speechless.....😳😳 Phir bhi....Raj ki khatir thodi der ke liye ek speech de hi deti hu....wat say? 😉 Ab tum kuch bhi say karo....maine to decide kar liya hai....so here starts my pakao comments!!! 😈 nahiiiiiiii... yeh nahi ho sakta...??? tum ne kaha tumhe baht kuch kahan hai...ab kah rahi ho ki thodi der k liye speech dogi...!!! tum ne toh mera dil hi tod diya...aise jaise mera dil nahi bal ke LIJJAT PAPAD ho...😆

Do u knw I love Raj?? 😳 ☺️ nahi...mujhe nahi pata tha...sach me...???😆Ahh...of course u do.....but do u knw U make me love him all the more?? 😉😳....well....agar nahi pata tha....to abhi jaan lo....I love the way u characterize Raj....in ur each fic..... lagta hai ab...raj ko villian banana hi padega...ha ha ha...😆!!! sach kahun...sumi...main raj ko personally nahi janti...par main jab kabhi bhi us k bare me sochti hun na...toh lagta hai ki sayad voh aisa hi inshan hoga...aur main jaisa us k bare me sochti hun vaisa hi likh deti hun😳

and after TN this is surely my fav....😉 Aur pata hai kya....tum nahi keh sakti...meri YE fav fic khatam hone jaa rahi hai....coz ye to bas kuch din pehle hi shuru hua tha na....😆 arre kyoun nahi kah sakti...main jarur kah sakti hun...!!! main koun si Satavadi Harishchandra ki poti hun...jo jhuth nahi bol sakti...😆

Ab point par ati hu yaar....to be honest....I cant say wat am feeling ryt now....its not sumthing I can express....the way u described 'gestures' were brilliant!! Iss baar jaise dialogues se zyada 'gestures' me dum tha....in fact u actually wrote an 'Ankahi' UD this tym.....jahan har Ankahi baat mujhe chhu rahi thi....Wo Zinda wala sequence.....and all the descriptions of that sort....were simply beautiful!! 👏👏👏 SUMIIIIIIII...jhaad par chadhane pahle se kamm the kya...jo ab tum bhi samil ho gayi...!!! ok...ok...thanqqqqqqqq so much...😳!!! ek writer k liye... matlab mere jaise bakwas writer k liye...jo school me bhi essey likhne sab se piche rahti thi😆...voh agar aaj itni tarif sunn rahi hai...toh batayo...us k dil ka kya haal hoga...???😆 par sachhi me...THANX alawa aur kuch nahi kah sakti...😳 😳 😳

Gunny Raj ko samajh nahi paa raha hai....well....ye department to sirf Naina ke liye hai....he doesnt hav an access na....😆😆😉 aur nahi toh kya...😆 raj ko aaj tak koi samajh paya hai...na payega...!!! par hum hain na...use khaash banane k liye jo ki hum jaise khaash log hi use samajh payenge...!!! aur gunny toh sid charc hai...voh khaash toh ho hi nahi sakta...hai na...😆

.....I Loved Raj's dialogue to him "Naina kuch nahi hota.....aur na hi kuch hoga....jab tak main zinda hu" 😳😳.....and it was sooooo nice to see Aalekh and Huda right there....giving sum dose to Gunny Ustaad...😆...bechare ko pata nahi hai....ye Gang aur Raj ka rishtaa kaisa hai....I dont balme him actually....iss rishte ko aise samjha nahi jaa sakta....hai na? 😉😉 haan...aur gunny ki entry bhi toh raj k jane k baad hui thi...toh use kya pata ki raj k sath sabhi ka rishta kaisa hai...😉

So basically Gunny, Aalekh, Huda, Naina and of course Raj knw that the bullet was shot intentionally.....😊....lekin hamein to aage ki kahani janni hai.....but as Aalekh said...."Bhagwan 1200 saal me aisa ek insaan banata hoga"....and we so hav to w8 for Raj to say all....😛...or rather we hav to w8 for PriyaJi.....to hav sum mercy on us....in this respect!! 😉😉 ab tum kah hi rahi ho toh...hum mana kaise mana kar sakte hain...!!! par main kuch nahi batayungi...tum apne fav hero k muh se hi sari baat sun lena...okay...😛

Chahe jo bhi ho I'll just go wid the flow....sawal poochhke fayda thodi hai....😆😆 nahi faida toh nahi hai...par kya hai na...aise sawal poochne ne bada maza aata hai...!!! dekh lo tumhare har ud par main kitne sawal karti hun...aur kisi kisi sawal k toh main khud hi jawab de deti hun ha ha ha...😆

....I loved Naina n Gunny's convo as well....Naina is surely a gud observer.....aakhir protigee kiski hai!! 😉😳😉 aur akhir heroine kis k fi ki hai...😆

Now the phn call....thanks to u it was made....warna Raj to pata nahi kya karne jaa raha tha....😲😳....and then the way Naina told him to cum....and he was on his way....that small talk said so much....unhone zyada kuch nahi kaha....phir pata nahi....mujhe laga kitna kuch keh gaye....😳 is ka matlab tumhe voh scene achha laga tha...!!! thanqqqqqqqqq sumi...maine na baht darte hue voh scene likha tha...ki pata nahi tum sabhi kaise react karoge...!!! matlab...naina ka raj par itna 😳 jyada bharosha n all dis...

Waise....waha tumne 'namaz' ki awaz likha hai....it wud be 'azaan' ki awaz.....ho sake to edit kar dena.... kar diya hai...thanx...batane k liye...!!! mujhe bhi nahi pata tha...!!! mere ghar k paas hi ek masjid hai...!!! matlab...hamare ghar k ryt side se 10 min k duri par ek mosque hai...aur left side se 5 min ki duri par ek shiv jee ka mandir...aur roz subah jab main jaldi uthti hun padhne k liye toh...azan ki awaz sunayi deti hai aur dushri taraf se Aarti bhi sunayi deti hai...!!!😃

and yeah....that meantym when Naina was w8ing for him to cum.....ohh...that was such a serene scene.....mujhe bahut hi soothing laga wo jagah.....and of course as Raj came....and watever followed by that.....it was allll toooooooooooo gud!!! Loved it Priya....just loved it!!! 👏👏 thanqqqqqqq sumi...😃

Phew....kitna likh liya maine....however thoda aur baki hai....😆....those classes....I loved the 'Love-National Game' wala class.....👏👏...and of course I need not say.....other classes were gr8 as well....😆😉😆😆 he he he...😆

Of course....last but surely not the least....our spl class....dont I say Rajveer is a genius....Kiss ko kya describe kiya hai yaar....mashallah!!! (That goes for u actually😉) ha ha ha... raj jo samjha raha tha...dil se samjha raha tha...aur naina dil laga kar samajh rahi thi he he he...😆

Abhi chalo bahut zyada ho gaya I guess....I'll stop now....take care.😊😃 main toh hamesha hi apni care karti rahti hun...yeh toh meri kishmat hi kharab hai jo...kuch ajeeb sa ho jata hai mere sath...😆

Luv,

Sumi.😛

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

awesomeeeeee blosssommmm upate Pri !!! shukriya...vaid jee😃😛

oye yaar....mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe tujhe aise hi order dena chahiye !! 😛 aaj kal...tu vohi toh karr rahi hai...!!! thoda sa laad mil gaya toh doc bigad gayi...ab pata nahi patients ka kya hoga...😆

Short Notice par tu aur bhi badhiya update likhti hai !!!👏 👏 achha...??? chal tu kah rahi hai toh main maan leti hun...😃

Aur rahi baat Naam roshan karne ki....toh...well apne Maa-Papa ka toh tu karti hai na? bass toh fir...aur kitniiiiiiiiiiiii cheezo ka karegi???😛 abhi tak kiya kahan hai...maa-baba ka naam roshan voh toh abhi karna baki hai...!!! maine ek 100 watt k bulb par un ka naam likh diya hai...bas use hamare hall me lagana baki hai...😆

Issliye ...Apne Fic ke Naam ko ITNAAAAAAAAAAAAa seriously mat le ! 😛 😆😆 kya baat karr rahi hai...maine mushkil se toh kisi ko seriously liya hai aur tu kah rahi hai ki na lun...??? ho nahi sakta...ho nahi sakta...😆

Aalekh and Huda .....ROCKKKKINNNGGGG !!! thanqqqq😃

you know what? mera bhi reaction wahi tha ! Aagaya aur ek Abhimanyu !! 🤢 he he he...ab tune dil se kaha hoga...tabhi toh Alekh ne bhi kaha...!!! mujhe pata hai na...tujhe KARAN-ARJUN me se KARAN pasand hai...ha ha ha...😆

End ka RN scene and woh song....aweeeesooomeeeeeeeeeee !! thanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq😃

well...ab itne jaldi tujhse agle UD ki toh umeed karna bekar hai...but still....update sooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn....!!!😃 arre umeed par toh duniya kayam hai...aur tu mujhi se umeed chod rahi hai...not fair😆