ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 53

Originally posted by: nisha1984

awesome update

Originally posted by: hinal60

why is raj going away

abhi abhi to waapis aaya hai aur ab chala bhi jayega

plz dont send him away.

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi Priya... hiiii neelu...😃

How r u dear?? I heard u r not well..get well soon dear.. 🤗 haan...voh main tree se gir gayi thi...😳

Many many happy returns of the day.... thanqqqqqqq🤗

Update is awesome.... thanqqqqqq Neelu...😃

Raj-Naina scene ws sooo lovely... naina wants to know her place in raj's life n raj asked for some more time.... haan...rajveer ka dimag hamesha aise hi toh chalta hai...pata nahi kyoun ...par hamesha naina k matter me use tym chahiye hoti hai...😆

he is scared of lossing naina...

so finallyt naaz arrived....n met naina,...her target...ohh god... she is showing so much love for raj but on other hand she has decided to harm naina.... she knows what naina means for raj....but still... ab is k bare me main kya kah sakti hun...??? is ka answer toh tumhe tabhi milega na jab tum naaz k intetion ko samajhne lagogi...😉

last scene of raj naina was soo touching...raj is hurting himself....but cant help it... he just wants to protect naina from all probs...but cud he????.... n thats y he is so tensed.... he himself doesnt know the ans... only Priya knows these ans..right?😉 ryt...😆 par fiqar naot yaar...jab hum hain toh kya ghum hai...😆

lovely update.... thanqqqqq

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was amazing thanqqqqq
loved it but ye naya suspense kya dala hain bich main ...yeh tumhe ek do uds me pata chal jayega...!!! main jyada tym nahi lungi...is suspense ko rvl karne me...😃
plz continue soon and a very very Happy birthday to you Thanqqqqqqq 😃

Originally posted by: poojabi

very nice update.i like it.

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 awesome part............. Thanqqqqq Puri 😃 njoyed reading it................specially the starting of the part.conversation b/w Raj-Naina...........😳 😳 😳.......................was expecting confession 4m Raj........ 😉 😉 😉.................but knowing Raj.........he is too good in hiding his feelings...... 😊..............he will take his beauty time to confess........infact LRL mein toh bechare ne confess bhi nahi kiya.....dialogue adhura reh gaya tha,,,,,, 😛 😛 😛.......... tabhi toh dono k confession ka bida maine uthaya hai...!!!😆
Naaz's entry was good.........👏........... thanq😃
i was surprised naina didn't got jealous when pooja told her maj, Rajveer ke sath ladki hai..... 😆😆 😆 😆......... naina ab meri fic me kaam karti hai na...isiliye thodi si badal gayi hai...😆 😆 😆 ab voh kabhi kabhi dimag se bhi sochti hai...😆 😆 😆
lunch idea by huda was good👏................ huda me bhi maine thoda sa dimag dala hai...😃
& special mention of RN room scene.......... & my advice to Raj 😉......confess karlo major......warna writer Priya will not give u chance......she has planned something big 4 u......... 😛 😛 ab yeh toh hai...😆 😆 😆
waise what Raj is hiding..........kuch toh gadbad hain............😕 😕 😕 😕.................& dont make my guess come true.........that u planning Raj to shoot naina............😭 😭 😭 😭...............i know something is running in ur khurapati dimaag......u gonna shock us in next part 😛 😛 😛 ha ha ha...main GEETA ki saugadh kha kar kahti hun ki main kuch nahi kahungi abhi...tum next part padh lo...phir sayad tumhe tumhare sawak ka jawab mil jayega...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
😭don't give readers a heart attack in next part 💔................... arre fiqar not... yahan par ek doc bhi toh hai...doc MANA😆 😆 😆 voh sambhal legi na...😆 😆 😆

& yes most important thing............continue soon............... 😃 😃 😃 😃 jee Hajur...😃

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hey Pri !! Hiiiieeee doc...😛

brilliant update sweetheart !! 👏 👏 👏 thanqqqqqq...😃 😃 😃par sach kahun toh tu jab bhi mujhe swthrt kahti hai na...mujhe voh sholey me VEERU ka dail yaad aata hai...'maine tujhe kya samjhtha Jay(mana)...aur tu kya nikla(nikli)'😆 😆 😆

starting ka RN convo hi itna zabardast aur touching tha, ki main sure hogayi, aage bhi bahot achcha padhne milega....ah,...as usual ! 😃 sab kuch tere senior (hamare family doc😆) se sikha hai...!!! voh bhi mujhe bade pyar se baat karte hai...baad me lambi si prescription aur us me kamm se kamm 4-6 boring medicine...

gunny Naina convo mast tha ! I liked the way Huda ne firse bechare Ali ko phasaya ...sach hai...jiski fiancee pooja hai, uske dimaag ka toh koi thikana ho hi nahi sakta 😆 😆 😆 he he he...tabhi toh bichara Ali phasa hai...

Aur phir Huda ki Raj aur " WOh " ko lekar ' theory ' ! 😆 jyadatar purane hindi movies me kuch aisa hi hota hai...nahi...😆

Yeh kya ??? 😲 😲 😲 😲 Naaz ki target NAINA hai ???? 😲 😲 main bhi yehi soch kar hairan hun yaar...

Huda,Yudi, Ali and Alekh ka convo...😆 😆 😆 😆 yeh sab toh kabhi nahi badalnewaale !😆 badal jayenge toh KMA k x-factor ka kya hoga...😆

Again a beautifully written RN scene ! 👏 👏 👏 Raj ka har ek emotion was mentioned beautifully !! hats off girl !! thanqqqqqqqqqqq...😃 😃 😃vaise na doc k muh se tarif sunn ne ka maza hi aur hota hai...!!! hamare doc toh mujhe dekh kar hi chunkte hain...😆 😆 😆

par ab aage kya hone waala hai?????????? am dead curiousss !!!

jaldi UD karde yaar ! pahle yeh bata ki tu kab ud karne wali hai...??? matlab isi saal karegi ya tujhe aur 2-4 saal chahiye...😆

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hey Priya.... Hiiiieeeee yogi...😃

WOW!!!!!! kya part tha yaar... simply Awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏 thanqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

The first scene is soooooooooo beautiful ....i loved it sooooooooo much..specially jab raj ne khudh se kaha tha.... mujh se puch rahi hai ki dil ki ahmiyat kya hai dhadkan k liye...tujhe yaad hai😲...ha ha ha😆...main toh khud hi bhul jati hun ki maine kya likha tha...!!!😆 thanqqq yaar😃 😃 😃...kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki tu kaise yaad rakhti hai sari batain...👏 👏 👏

Ye raj aise kyun kehraha hain ki kal koi aise situation aaajaye ki naina us par trust nahin karegi ..aur wo dil hi dil main naina se kyun maafi maang raha tha..aisa kya honewala hain shaam ko..jaldi batao na priya..please next part me hai tere sawalon k jawab...par mujhe darr hai ki kahin meri peetai na ho jaye...😆

Gunny n nainas scene is so nice...gunny kitna tease kar raha tha naina ko..sach kahun to when naina adressed raj as unhe ....mujhe to bahut accha laga....Naina alekh se kuch bhi nahin chupathi..even he knows that naina ab rajveer ko rajveer sir kehkar nahin bulathi hain LRL me bhi toh naina sab kuch alekh ko hi sab se pahle batati thi hai na...😛

Huda is so funny..poor ali wo to gaya pooja ki haaton main 😆 😆😆😆😆 .....i like huda in your fic...usne kya kahani bandi when pooja said ki usne rajveer sir ko ek naye sim card ke saath dekha maine us ka char thoda change kiya hai...bichare ko ajeeb sa role diya tha...matlab sab kuch samajhta tha...janta tha...phir bhi ajeeb harkatain karta tha...!!! isiliye maine ek naya xperiment kiya hai us k sath...!!! le ab toh tujhe bhi yeh pasand aa gaya hai...matlab mera xperiment itna bhi bura nahi tha... 😛

yudi bhi kafi intelligent ho gaya hain ..usne bhaut accha idea diya hain ki bata denge ki lunch ke liye bhulane ke liye aaye hain meri fic hai yaar...mujhe aur villains ko chod kar sabhi intelligent banege...😆

Naaz kyun chupa rahi hain raj se ki wo real main kaha gayi ..jaroor iske piche kuch accha reason hi hoga.... pata nahi...yeh toh Naaz hi bata sakti hai...

Liked Naaz n rajs scenes ..liked their bonding....its so funny when he said to naaz kyun bindu banrahi hain 😆😆😆😆😆 ab voh bhi toh raj ka bhanda fodne wali thi na...😆

tune aise kyun kaha...naina ..naaz ki target hain ...i dont think naaz naina ko koi choth pahunchayegi... ab is ka jawab toh tujhe aage k uds me hi pata chalega na...😉

Yaar ye rajveer itna pareshan kyun hain ..what he is going to do apne marzi ke khilaf mujhe kya pata...??? raj kahan mujhe kuch kah kar karta hai...!!! pichli baar maine us se kaha tha...ki kamm se kamm LRL me apna confession pura kar lo...phir common-wlth game(AAMIR) me bhaagne jana...par nahi...janab ko bhaagne ki itni jaldi thi ki na toh mujhe kuch kaha...aur na hi naina se...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

alekh ne jo kuch bhi kaha china ke maal ke bare main ..its so hillarious 😆😆😆😆😆 arre sahi bhi toh kaha na...😆 😆 😆

RN scene in the last part is so sweet n emotional too....rajveer when he closed his eyes usko naveen ki jagah naina kyun dikhayi di...aur wo itna dara hua kyun hain ???? maine use apne bachpan ki tashveer dikha di thi...bass usi shock se bahar nahi aa paya hai abhi tak...😆 😆 😆

Jaldi se next part post karo yaar....i told you pehle se hi ki is fic ko tum this time jaldi se update kardo..par tu hain ki meri dhamkiyon ka koi khadhar hi nahin karthi nahi yaar...aisa mat bol...tere liye toh jaan bhi hazir hai...par ud k bare me kuch nahi kah sakti...😆 😆 😆

chal ab to jaldi se update karo..bahut din hogaye ab tu kah hi rahi hai tohhhhhhhhhhh😆

love

yogitha

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi,priya Hiii Ria...

bohot khubsurat up likha 😊😊😊😊haai tune thanqqqq😃 😃 😃

par raj kun jaa raha haai 😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕 raj kahin nahi ja raha hai...naina aur raj dinner par ja rahe hain...aur baki sabhi pahle se hi ja chuke hain us dinner par...kyoun ki raj ne apne promotion ki khushi me ek dinner party rakhi thi...

plz cont soon and do pm me 😊

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome update

too good

interesting

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon