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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#501

Hey Pri !!

brilliant update sweetheart !! 👏 👏 👏

starting ka RN convo hi itna zabardast aur touching tha, ki main sure hogayi, aage bhi bahot achcha padhne milega....ah,...as usual ! 😃

gunny Naina convo mast tha ! I liked the way Huda ne firse bechare Ali ko phasaya ...sach hai...jiski fiancee pooja hai, uske dimaag ka toh koi thikana ho hi nahi sakta 😆 😆 😆

Aur phir Huda ki Raj aur " WOh " ko lekar ' theory ' ! 😆

Yeh kya ??? 😲 😲 😲 😲 Naaz ki target NAINA hai ???? 😲 😲

Huda,Yudi, Ali and Alekh ka convo...😆 😆 😆 😆 yeh sab toh kabhi nahi badalnewaale !😆

Again a beautifully written RN scene ! 👏 👏 👏 Raj ka har ek emotion was mentioned beautifully !! hats off girl !!

par ab aage kya hone waala hai?????????? am dead curiousss !!!

jaldi UD karde yaar !

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 15 years ago

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#502

Hey Priya....

WOW!!!!!! kya part tha yaar... simply Awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The first scene is soooooooooo beautiful ....i loved it sooooooooo much..specially jab raj ne khudh se kaha tha.... mujh se puch rahi hai ki dil ki ahmiyat kya hai dhadkan k liye...

Ye raj aise kyun kehraha hain ki kal koi aise situation aaajaye ki naina us par trust nahin karegi ..aur wo dil hi dil main naina se kyun maafi maang raha tha..aisa kya honewala hain shaam ko..jaldi batao na priya..please

Gunny n nainas scene is so nice...gunny kitna tease kar raha tha naina ko..sach kahun to when naina adressed raj as unhe ....mujhe to bahut accha laga....Naina alekh se kuch bhi nahin chupathi..even he knows that naina ab rajveer ko rajveer sir kehkar nahin bulathi hain

Huda is so funny..poor ali wo to gaya pooja ki haaton main 😆 😆😆😆😆 .....i like huda in your fic...usne kya kahani bandi when pooja said ki usne rajveer sir ko ek naye sim card ke saath dekha

yudi bhi kafi intelligent hogaya hain ..usne bhaut accha idea diya hain ki batadenge ki lunch ke liye bhulane ke liye aaye hain

Naaz kyun chupa rahi hain raj se ki wo real main kaha gayi ..jaroor iske piche kuch accha reason hi hoga....

Liked Naaz n rajs scenes ..liked their bonding....its so funny when he said to naaz kyun bindu banrahi hain 😆😆😆😆😆

tune aise kyun kaha...naina ..naaz ki target hain ...i dont think naaz naina ko koi choth pahunchayegi...

Yaar ye rajveer itna pareshan kyun hain ..what he is going to do apne marzi ke khilaf

alekh ne jo kuch bhi kaha china ke maal ke bare main ..its so hillarious 😆😆😆😆😆

RN scene in the last part is so sweet n emotional too....rajveer when he closed his eyes usko naveen ki jagah naina kyun dikhayi di...aur wo itna dara hua kyun hain ????

Jaldi se next part post karo yaar....i told you pehle se hi ki is fic ko tum this time jaldi se update kardo..par tu hain ki meri dhamkiyon ka koi khadhar hi nahin karthi

chal ab to jaldi se update karo..bahut din hogaye

love

yogitha

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#503

hi,priya bohot khubsurat up likha 😊😊😊😊haai

tune par raj kun jaa raha haai 😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕

plz cont soon and do pm me 😊

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#504

awsome update

too good

interesting

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

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annanya

@zenia

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#505

hey

very nice update dear.....

cont. soon yaar

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#506

Wonderful...mind blowing update Priya.
har ek scene har ek dilouge it just simply gr88888
Raj's dilema...Naina's confusion...wats going to happen now...plzzz update soon.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#507

Awesome update

Naina wants to know her importance in Raj's life. She wants to hear the words which his eyes are saying. But once again Raj tells her that he needs some time...and when the right time will come he will tell her his feelings.

Naina feels that Raj is hiding something from her...who janti hai ko kuch toh hai jis ki wajah se Raj itna pareshan hai. But Raj just tells her to trust him. And she reassures him that she will always trust him.

Pooja is surprised to see Raj with another girl...but naina remains cool. Loved the Idea that Huda came up with just to find out who the girl is.

Everyone is shocked to know that Naaz is Raj's sister. Why did Naaz consider Naina to be her target when she first met naina. Hope that she is not planning to cause any harm to Naina. It is good to see RAj joking around with Naaz..

Poor Huda has yet to find a janani for himself. He is left alone on his bike while the others have left with their partners.

Once again Raj and naina are left alone. Seeing naina he promises himself and her that he would never let any harm come to her. She is afraid to see fear in his eyes. Naina wants to comfort him but Raj is worried about her safety. Why has Raj become weak...when he had promised that he would make Naina his strength.

Toh phir Raj itna dara hua kyun hai aur use itne bure khayal kyun aa rahe hai. Yeh saare sawal ka jawab toh Priyaji hi de sakti hai...

So please continue soon this time.

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#508

awesome, brilliant update. too good.
loved it.
loved the conversation between raj and naina.
iye huda nehi sudhrega.
iye naaz ka suspense and raj kaha ja raha hain kyuon itna daar raha hain.
continue soon.

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#509

Hi Priya...

Kaisi ho??? Tumhara pair kaisa hai...? Kya karti ho yaar...humesha kahin na kahin chot lagati rehti ho khud ko... apna khayal rakha karo madam...

Chal ab update par aati hun...Maina pichle kai updates se reply nahi kiya...so ab kar rahi hun... kya karun yaar...bahut busy chal rahi hun...

Fantastic update... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Raj aur Naina ka convo bahut hi cute tha... aur Raj ka time manga samajh me aata hai...wo waise bhi bahut pareshan hai... par mujhe sab se achha Naina ka sawal laga...ki aap ki zindagi me meri kya ahemiyaat hai...aur usse bhi khubsurat Raj ki soch thi... Shukar hai madam iss baar ye hug aapne sapne me nahi karwaya... par shaam ko kya hone wala hai...???😕😕😕

Gunny aur Naina ki batchit bahut hi funny thi... 😆😆😆Gunny kitna chidha raha tha Naina ko... aur fir puri team bhi aa gayi...maze ko dugna karne ke liye... aur upar se unke dialogues...chun chun ke likha hai tumne sab kuch Priya...it was awesome...😆😆😆

Naaz ki entry ho gayi... ab wo to apne bhabhi ko kitna achha response de rahi hai... par last line ne mujhe shak ke ghere me daal diya hai... Matlab mujhe pata hai ki Naina ko kuch hoga to nahi... par agar Naaz ne Naina ko nuksaan pahunchane ki galati kar di aur Raj ko pata chal gaya...to fir jo uss par bitegi wo mai nahi chahti...ek Gehlot kam nahi tha kya jo Naaz bhi Naina par vaar kar rahi hai...but I understand her predicament... Wo apne bhaiyya ko bachana chahti hai...🤢😕

Last part was too good...tumne bahut achhi tarah se uss scene me Naina aur Raj ki bhavnayon ko portray kiya hai... Raj ka dar...atit ke khayal aur Naina ka uski bahon me hona... Fantastic yaar...

AB aur intezaar anhi hota...jaldi continue karo...

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago