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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zenia

hey..dear..

very nice ff yaar....... thanxxxx Ananya...😃
rajveer and gunny....nice combi.. i like them very much...and naina is very nice....
gunny aur naaz ki luv story kab start karogi????? baht jald...😃
luved ur ff... thanqqqqq😃
plz cont. soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

hey Priya 😊 Hiii Naina😃
love ur this fic also 😃 thanqqqq😃
all update was awesome....... thanxxxx again...😃
again words are less to describe ur fics😳 sachhi me...😛
comment for last update ...okay...😃
yeh naaz kya karne waali hai yaar😕 hmmm...yeh toh tumhe 12th part me pata chalega...😉
naaz aur gunny ki story bahut jaldi shuru hone waali hai ryt😆 ha ha ha...pata nahi...😆 😆 😆
now raj n naina were less shy to each other aur nahi toh kya...??? varna sharmate sharmate voh dono retired ho jate...😆
ab naina raj ko uske naam se bulayegi 😍 ab kya karen...raj ne use fashha jo diya apne baton me...😃
huda n gang was too good n funny😆 ab fic me ek comedy track bhi toh rahna chahiye na...😛
ali is so scared from 3 of them😆 vaise toh Ali kisi se nahi darta...!!! par aisi baton se apni frnds se darta hai...😆
in last raj n naina cnvo is so sweet n lovely👏 thanxxxx dear...😃
plz pm me next tym ab yeh bhi koi kahnewali baat hai kya😉
do cont soon
Loves
Naina😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: poojabi

cmon update sooooon.pls.

bass thoda sa tym aur de do...dear...!!! ud toh ready hai...bass us me thodi si editing baki hai...voh jaldi se khatam karne k baad Ud kar dungi...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Priya r u going to update this fic or main dhara se kahun tujhe maarne ki dhamkhi dene ke liye

haan...meri maa kar dungi jaldi...!!! ab na...Dhara achhi ladki bann gayi hai...voh ab dhamki nahi deti...!!! dekha...meri dosti ka asar...😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Priya
update it sooooooon yaar
w8ng eagerly for next part

Luv
Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi Priya?.. hiiii preet😃

How r u? hmmmm...jyada achhi nahi hun...!!! ab plz...mat puchna ...kyoun...???😆

Dekho.mein yahan bhi tumhe bore karne aa gayi????????par kya karun, tum itna acha likhti ho to mein tumhe bore to krungi hi na. ab mein apni bakwas band karungi aur tumhare updates par aati hun. toh...tum ne decide karr hi liya hai meri khinchai karne ki...???😛

Part 8:-

Raj thodha sa confused hai tabhi wo is tarah behave kar raha hai naina ke saath. Naina ke man me raj ke liye bahut se questions hain aur wo pochana bhi chahti hai par kya Karen, raj abhi kisi bhi sawal ka answer karne ki condition me nahin hai. ab raj k dil me kya hai...yeh koi nahi janta...

Raj naina ke mom dad se milna chahta hai aur unse maafi mangna chahta hai. Please ab unko raj par gussa mat karne dena aur unhe jaldi se mana lena in dono ki shaadi ke liye. Naina raj ki condition samajhti hai aur issiliye wo chahti hai ki raj kud aa kar naina se sab discuss kare. tum ne kya mujhe itna bore samjha hai...!!! main definately kuch alag karungi....dont worry😉

Dekho yeh pedh kitna acha hai na, usse pata hai ki raj aur naina ko baat karne ke liye time chahiye issi liye wo gir gaya aur raj naina ko baat karne ke liye time bhi mil gaya??.vese naina na pagal hai wo jeep se isliye bahar aayi kyunki wo dekhna chahti thi ki khayi kitni gehri hai??.uff??yeh ladki na sach me pagal hai. naina ki curosity k bare me toh sabhi jante hain yaar😆

Naina aaj bhi naveen ko bahut yaad karti hai aur uski aankhon me aanso aa jate hain. Aur yeh dard uske saath hamesha rahega. haan...ab naveen us ka bhai bhi tha aur dost bhi...

Raj naina ka scene bahut acha tha jab raj na naina ko uska naam lene ke liye kaha aur naina ko kitni problem ho rahi thi raj ka naam lene me. It was very funny. Raj ne sahi kaha ki huda aalekh yudi ali aur pooja sab naina ke dost hai aur pata nahin raj ko dekh kar wo kaise react karenge issiliye usne naina ko chup rehne ke liye keh kar acha iya varna bechara un sab se kaise bachta. tabhi toh us ne naina ko sab se kuch na kahne k liye kaha tha...😃

Shalini ne samjhaya raj ko ki wo aise sabko chood kar na jaye, acha kiya varna raj apne dimaag ka istemal karte karte aur koi galat kaam kar bhethata aur sab kuch gadbad ho jati. isiliye maine raj ko dimag ishtemal karne ka mauka hi nahi diya....!!! us ka dimag hamesha' sacrifice-compromise' inhi sabhi k piche bhaagta hai...😆

Ending to mast thi?.aise situation me naina ko bhook lagna??.wow ha ha ha...😆

In whole, the update was superb thanxxxx Preet...😃

Luv Preet love u too😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi again priya??.. Hiiiieeeeee😃

Is baar me faltu ki baatein anhin arungi aur seedhe comment karungi. jaisi tumhari marzi...vaise tum jinhe faltu baat kahti ho na...voh mujhe bade achhe lagte hain...😃

Part 9:-

Raj ka reaction to superb tha bechara confuse hi ho gaya ki naina sach me naveen ki hi behen hai yan nahin. Par naina ki agli justification ne raj ka shaq door kr diya aur usse yakeen ho gaya ki naina naveen ki I behen hai kyunki uske pass question puchne se pehle hi uska answer ready hota hai. naina kuch aisi hi thi...!!! matlab LRL me khud hi sawal puchti thi...aur khud hi unka ajeeb jawab dhundhti thi😆

Ab naina ko bhuta khana hai aur raj usse hilne se mana akr gaya usse dar hai ki kahiin phir se khayi ki gehrayi dekhne na chali jaye. Par naina ke reaction to fab hai yaar. Just loved them aur uska bhutte wale se behas karna,bilkul bachi hi hai yeh ladki. jab hamare paas...koi hamari care karne wala hota hai na...hum khud-b-khud bachhe bann hi jate hain...😃

When I was reading the bhutte ke daane wala scene, I was shocked. Mene socha ki aisa kaam raj ar hi nahin sakta kyunki pyaar ka izhaar to usse karna hi nahin aata na aur mera khyaal theek bhi tha yeh dono sapne bahut dekhte hain aur wo bhi kholi aankhon se. I loved raj's reaction, jaise wo jeep se bahar kood gaya. It was very funny yaar. ha ha ha...sahi socha tha tumne...!!!😆 raj aise kaam karr hi nahi sakta...matlab kam se kam abhi toh BILKUL BHI NAHI...😆

Jab naina ne apni watch raj se vaapis mangi na, I totally loved it. It was so sweet and very special moment for both of them. glad u like it...

Party scene was fab and raj's entry was beautiful. All were happy to see him and were also angry with him because he hasn't met them. I loved the way he met everyone and then he left, but naina sudherti hi nahin phir se raj ko sir bula rahi thi par wo aadat se majboor thi, jaldi hi sudhar jayegi. nahi...naina nahi sudhregi...agar raj nahi chahega toh😉

Aalekh ne naina ka jhuth pakad hi liya aur pakadta bhi kaise na in sab me wohi hai jo apne dimag ka use karta hai. sahi kaha hai tum ne...sirf Alekh k paas hi toh DIMAG hai😃

I am looking forward to read about raj's case. Going to next part. okay...😃

Luv Preet luv u too dear...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi again Priya?.. Hiiiieeeeeeeeee😃

Now, last part of this ff?? matlab...tumhe aage kuch tym tak toh aur bore hone hi nahi padenge...😆

Part 10:-

Raj ka new case itna difficult, naina ki jaan khatre me raj kaise dhal sakta hai par jahan tak raj ki baat hai to m sure wo koi aisa rasta dhund lega jisse wo apne desh ko bhi bacha le aur phir uski naina ko bhi kuch na ho kyunki naina to uski jaan se bhi badh kar hai. arre yaar...rashta dhundhega nahi...bal ki dhundh liya hai...😃

Raj ne col. Gupta ke saath naian ke bare me baatein ki aur dekho wo bhi samajh gaye ki raj naina se pyaar karta hai par in dno ko koi kaise samjhaye ki pyaar kiya hai to uska izhaar karna bhi zaruri hai. main hun na unhe samjhane k liye...😃

Naaz aur yusuf ka scene bhi acha tha, mujhe acha laga jise naaz na yusuf ke har sawal ka jawab diya. thanxxx😃

In cafeteria, sab log raj aur naina ko milane ka plan bana rahe the aur ali ji hamesha kit rah budhu hi bane rahe, thank God sabne usse samjha diya aur phir huda ne bahut ache se raj ko naina ke room me bheej diya. maine Huda ka char thoda change kiya hai. voh is fic me ulte kaam nahi karega...😃

Naina to sach me bachi hi hai, door par yeh dekha nahin ki kaun aaya hai aur shoro ho gayi order dena, ki yeh pakdao aur wo pakdhao. Aj bilkul ek ache bache ki tarah sab suntan raha ur karta raha. Par jab naina ne bola ki usse raj par shak hai to bechara shock ho gaya aur naina bina kuch dekhe hue bolti rahi aur agar raj na kehta ki uski zindagi me aour koi nahin hai to wo aise hi bolti jati na. their scene was just superb yaar, the way raj said that no one needs him here and the way he told naina to call him raj and thankfully naina ne bhi ab raj ko uske naam se bulana shoro kar hi diya. raj ne baton hi baton me naina se khuch kaha hai...voh naina ne toh notice nahi kiya...par tum ne kiya kya...??? n thanxx a lot...tumhe yeh scene achha laga😃

Naina ne jaise raj ke samne uski aur apni pic deewar pe lagayi aur raj ke bare me jo hi bola na, I just loved it yaar, wo na bahut acha tha and just fab. I am eagerly waiting to see raj's reply. thanx....aur next part me raj ka rply bhi hoga...aur kuch aur scene bhi😃

Please continue soon.

Luv Preet love u too dear...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

Hey Priya
update it sooooooon yaar
w8ng eagerly for next part

Luv
Naina

sorry naina...maine kaha tha ki main aaj UD karungi...aur main aaj evening me karr bhi deti...!!! par meri thodi si tabiyat kharab hai...isiliye karr hi nahi payi...😭 sorry again😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh ho its ok buddy
jab tumahari tabiyat theek ho tab kar dena
GET WELL SOON

Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago

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