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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kool_Naina

oh ho its ok buddy
jab tumahari tabiyat theek ho tab kar dena
GET WELL SOON

Naina
arre dear meri tabiyat jyada kharab nahi hui hai...!!! bass chutku sa chot laga hai...bass...aur kuch nahi...😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Episode:-11
Maj Rajveer ne kuch bhi nahi kaha...bass kuch pal tak aise hi dekhte rahe Naina ko...phir kaha:- "tum chai achha bana leti ho Naina...???"
Naina:- "mujhe aisa kyoun lagg raha hai ki aap mujhe jan bujh kar ignore karna chahte ho...???'
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye aur kaha:- "yeh tumhari galat-faihmi hai Naina...??? main tumhe ignore kyoun karunga...???"
Naina:- "yeh toh aap ko hi pata hoga na...??? aur agar main galat hun toh...mere kahe hue baat ka jawab kyoun nahi dete aap...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "haar baat ka...
Naina:- "har baat ka ek sahi tym hota hai...n etc...etc...!!! aap yeh kahte kahte bore nahi ho jate...??? lekin main aap se yeh sun te sunte bore ho chuki hun...!!! aap batayiye...agar main galat hun toh sahi kya hai...???"
Maj Rajveer ne naina ki taraf dekha...phir mushkuraye aur kaha:- "zidd...!!! baht ziddi ho na tum...???"
Naina:- "haan...hun...ziddi...!!! par mujhe batayiye ki meri kya ahmiyat hai aap ki zindagi me...???"
"Naveen...dekh teri bahn kya puch rahi hai mujh se...!!! mujh se puch rahi hai ki dil ki ahmiyat kya hai dhadkan k liye...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne khud se baat karte hue...aage badhe...aur Naina k kareeb aaye...us ka hath thama...aur kaha:- "mujhe kuch waqt de sakti ho...??? main tumhe tumhare sare sawalon ka jawab sirf ek hi baar ...ek hi line me dena chahata hun...!!! kya itna waqt de sakti ho mujhe...???"
Naina ne gaour se dekha...unhe...phir dhire se kaha:- "koi prob hai kya...??? aap ko kabhi itna pareshan nahi dekha...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "pareshaan toh hun hi Naina...!!! achha ek baat batayo...tum mujh par trust toh karti ho na...???"
Naina:- "kitni baar yehi ek baat pucha hai aap ne mujh se...aur kitni baar is ka jawab aap sunn na chahte hain...???"
Maj Rajveer:- " Naina...ho sakta hai ki kal kuch aise situations aa jayen ki tum mujh par yakeen na karo...!!! sayad kal phir aisa kuch ho...jiasa ki aaj se baht pahle mere aur Naveen k bich hua tha...!!! kya tab bhi tum mujh par trust karogi...???"
Naina ne hairani se dekha Maj Rajveer ko...voh ab thoda thoda samajh ne lagi thi ki Maj Rajveer kisi uljhan me fashe hue hain...jo uljhan sayad us se juda hua hai...
Naina ne Maj Rajveer k ankhon me dekha...toh use ek dard dikhayii diya...sayad voh ek daar bhi tha...kisi apne ko phir se khone ka daar...
Naina ...thoda kareeb aayi Maj Rajveer k...aur Maj Rajveer k kuch samajhne se pahle us ne unhe hug karte hue kaha:- "main kal bhi aap par bharosha karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hun...!!! janti hun ki aap jab bhi aur jo bhi karoge...voh sahi hi hoga...!!! aur aap kabhi bhi mujhe koi dard nahi de sakte...kyoun ki maine hamesha apne dard ko aap ko mehsus karte hue dekha hai...!!! mujhe aap par bharosha hai...main intezaar karungi...apne sawal k jawab ka...!!!"
Maj Rajveer k ankhon me pal bhar k liye anshun aaye...unhone use chupaya...aur Naina ko thoda aur tightly hug karte hue...'thanx' kaha...par dil hi dil me voh Naina se maafi maang rahe the...' i m sorry naina...aaj sham ko jo bhi kuch honewala hai us k liye..."
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Capt Gunny k camp pahunchne par...sabhi khush the...lekin Capt Gunny ki khushi ki ek aur wajah thi...aur voh hai Naina ko dekh kar...!!! us ki mushkurahat dekh kar...
lunch par dono sath me cafeteria ki taraf aa rahe tha...
Gunny:- "toh finally tumhara vishwas jeet gaya...aur tumhe tumhare Rajveer sir bhi mil gaye...!!!"
Naina ne jawab me sirf mushkuraya aur kuch nahi kaha...
Gunny:- "lekin itne din tak voh the kahan par...??? kuch bataya unhone...???"
Naina:- "nahi...sayad aaj sham ko kah de...!!! aaj unhone camp k bahar ek choti si party rakhi hai...hum sab k liye...sayad vohin par sab kuch batayenge...!!! aap bhi chalna...!!!"
Gunny:- "main...??? sayad nahi...??? mujhe thode hi na bulaya hai unhone...???"
Naina:- "aap toh abhi abhi aaye hain na...toh kaise kahte aap se sab kuch...!!! par i m sure...voh aap ko bhi apne sath chalne k liye kahnege...!!! aap nahi jante...Raj sab se alag hai...sab se pyar karte hain...par kabhi kabhi un k pyar ka faida bhi uthate hain log...jaise Lala Gehlot type k log...!!!"
Gunny:- "kya baat hai Naina...??? tum kafi badli hui lag rahi ho...??? matlab...Rajveer sir se sidha Raj...kafi improve kiya hai tumne..!!!"
Naina ko yaad aaya ki baton hi baton me us ne Raj kah diya tha...
Naina:- "plz...kisi se mat kahna...sabhi meri khinchai karne lagenge...!!! matlab meri khinchai karnge...thik hai...par unhe bhi nahi chodenge...!!!"
Gunny hassa zor se...aur kaha:- "Maj Rajveer ki lottery lag gayi...!!! hamari pyari Naina...ab unhe...ya toh RAJ kahti hai...ya phir 'unhe'...!!!"
Naina:- "oh...God...aap baat ko thik se samajh nahi rahe ho...!!!matlab...hum dono jab akele hote hain toh main unhe Raj kahti hun...!!!"
Gunny:- "phir se 'Unhe'...
Naina:- "hadh hai...mujhe aap se koi baat hi nahi karni hai...
Naina cafeteria k ander chali gayi...Gunny hassta hi raha...
Ali:- "kya baat hai ustaad...Naina aap se naraz kyoun hain...???"
Alekh:- "kyoun ki phir se voh hamari purani Naina bann gayi hai...!!!"
Ali:- "main samjha nahi...!!!"
Huda:- "abe usool...samajhne k liye dimag ki jarurat padti hai...!!! par jis ki mangetar Pooja ho...us k paas dimag hoga hi nahi...kyoun ki Pooja roz subah voh chatti hogi...!!!"
Ali:- "voh toh hai...aap ko kaise pata chala...???" hala ki use pata nahi tha ki Pooja us k piche se aa rahi thi...
Pooja(screemed):- "Ali...kya kaha tune...main tera dimag chat ti hun...thik hai...tu yahi baith kar khana kha...main yahan se chalti hun...khabar daar jo mera picha kiya toh...!!!"
Pooja gusse se jane lagi...
Ali:- "Huda bhai...yeh aap ne kya kiya...??? ab hum kya karenge... inhe mana na baht mushkil hai..!!!"
Ali bhaga...Pooja k piche...
Huda gaya...Yudi ko tang kar k apna tym paas karne...
Alekh:- "Naina ...achanak kyoun gusse chali gayi...???"
Gunny:- "kuch nahi...maine bass us k Rajveer sir k bare me kuch kah diya toh...thodi si naraz ho gayi...!!!"
Alekh:- "ab voh Rajveer sir kahan kah kar bulati hai...???"
Gunny:- "matlab tumhe pata hai...!!!"
Alekh:- "Naina apun se kabhi kuch chupati hi nahi...kabhi kabhi...mazburi me kuch chupati hai...!!! par apne dil ki har ek khushi aur ghum...voh sab se pahle apun ko batati hai...!!! aur apun ka parivaar bole toh bass Naina aur Neelu hi toh hai...!!! in k chehre par khushi dekhta hun...toh sare ghum bhul jata hun...!!!"
tabhi Pooja daudi hui aayi...Naina k paas...sabhi ne hairani se dekha...
Pooja:- "Naina...pata hai maine bahar kya dekha...???"
Ali:- "shhh...dhire...sabhi aap ko dekh rahe hain Pooja...!!!;"
Yudi, Huda, Naina...baith kar lunch kar rahe the...vohin aa kar Pooja baithi...aur us k side me Ali baitha...!!! Gunny aur Alekh aa kar un k kareeb khade hue...
Pooja:- "tujhe pata hai Naina...bahar na maine Rajveer sir ko ek naye memorey card k sath dekha...!!!"
Naina:- "kya...???"
Pooja:- "arre yaar...ek nayi ladki k sath dekha...voh un k gale se chipki hui thi...chipkali kahin ki...aisa lagg raha tha...jaise sir ka gala daba rahi ho....!!! jaldi chal aur dekh...!!! lagta hain yahna par bhi ek aur 'woh' ki entry ho hi gayi...!!!"
Huda kahna khate khate bola:- "mujhe pata hai voh ladki koun ho sakti hai...???"
Alekh:- "tujhe kaise pata...???"
Huda:- "dekh...apne Rajveer sir us bomb blast k baad gayab the...hai na...???"
sabhi Huda ko dekh rahe the...!!!"
Huda:- "toh apne Rajveer sir...ne apne aap ko bachane k liye us jungle me chale gaye honge...aur phir unhe pyaas lagi hogi...phir ek gaon ki gori ne unhe paani pilaya hoga...apne sath apne ghar le gayi hogi...phir dono me dosti...hua hoga...aur phir...
itna kah kar us ne apna sar upar uthaya toh sabhi use gusse se dekh rahe the...
Huda:- "sorry yaar...main mazak karr raha tha...!!!"
Pooja:- "voh koi gaon ki gori toh bilkul bhi nahi lagti...!!! badi khubshurat dikhti hai...aur jeans aur kurta pahna hua hai...gaon ki gori aise kapde pahnte hain kya...???"
Yudi:- "uffo...tum dono bhi na...kis bekar ki baat me fasse hue ho yaar...!!! chalo khud ja kar dekh lete hain ki akhir voh hai koun...???"
Naina phir bhi baithi rahi..........
Huda:- chal na Phulan dekh lete hain...!!!aur plz...tu meri baat ko seriously mat liya kar...!!! mere paida hone par...meri mummy jee serious nahi hui thi...toh tu kyoun ho rahi hai...???"
Pooja:- "lekin ek sath itne sare missed call dekh kar...sir ne agar kuch pucha toh kya batayenge...???"
Yudi:- "bata denge ki sath me lunch karne k liye invite karne aaye hain...aur kya...???"
Gunny:- "tum log chalo...main thodi hi der me pahunchta hun...!!!"
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Maj Rajveer k qtr me...
Maj Rajveer aur Naaz dono baithe hue the...
Maj Rajveer:- "achanak yahan kaise aa gayi...??? kam se kam fone kar diya hota toh main aa jata tujhe lene...station par....!!!"
door par knock hua toh Maj Rajveer ne door khola...samne sabhi ko dekh kar hairan hua...
Yudi:- "sir...hum sab lunch karne ja rahe the...!!! socha ki raat ko toh dinner aap ki taraf se hai...kyoun na lunch humairi taraf se ho jaye...aap k liye...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "kyoun nahi...??? ander aayo...main hum sab ka lunch yahi order kar deta hun...!!!"
:- "maine already kar diya hai...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne ek naya chehra dekha...
Maj Rajveer:- "u must b capt Randhawa...ryt...???"
Maj Rajveer ne apna hath aage badhte hue kaha...
Gunny:- "yes sir....!!!!
sabhi ander aaye...
Gunny ko dekh kar Naaz mushkurayi...
Gunny hairani se kaha:- "tum yahan...???"
Naaz:- "maine kaha tha na aap se ki...hum zaldi hi milenge...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "tum dono ek dushre ko pahle se jante ho kya...??? matlab mile kahan tum dono...???"
Gunny aur Naaz ne sath me jawab diya:- "train me...!!!"
Maj rajveer:- "hun....train me...???"
Naaz:- "haan...hum dono sath me Delhi se aaye the...!!!"
Gunny:- "aur mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum Maj Rajveer ki bahn ho...???"
Huda:- "aap ko kaise pata chala...ki yeh Maj Rajveer ki behn hain...???"
Gunny:- "inhone khud bataya tha ki yeh apne bhai se milne aayi hain...par yeh nahi bataya ki in k bhai hain koun...!!! varna hum sath me aa jate...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne Naaz ki taraf dekha...!!! Naaz ne nazrain jhukayi...
Gunny:- "tum abhi pahunch rahi ho...??? jab ki train toh subah hi pahunch gayi thi na...???"
Naaz:- "haan...voh meri ek saheli yahin rahti hai...toh maine socha ki pahle us se mil leti hun...phir bhaiya se mil lungi...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ki nazar abhi tak Naaz ko dekh rahi thi...Naaz apne aap ko us nazar se bachane ki koshish karr rahi thi...
Naaz uth kar sab k paas aayi aur kaha:- "apna introduction main khud hi de deti hun...!!! main NAAZ hun...Rajveer bhaiya ki czn sister...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "sirf sister kahogi toh bhi cahlega...!!! vaise bhi is duniya me NAAZ k alawa mera aur koi saga nahi hai...!!!" unhone Naaz ko gusse se dekhte hue kaha...
Naaz:- "sorry bhaiya...???"
Maj rajveer:- "hum us k bare me baad me baat karenge...!!!"
Naaz ne sorry kyoun kaha...yeh Maj Rajveer bhi jante the aur Naaz bhi...!!! par baki khade sabhi me se kisi ne is baat ko notice nahi kiya...par Gunny ne kiya tha...
Naaz ne sabhi se shake hand kiya aur unhe un ka naam bataya....sabhi hairan the...
Naaz:- "bhiya baht baat karte the tum sab ki...!!!"
Naina k kareeb aa kar ruki naaz aur kaha:- "NAINA...??? tum Naina ho na...???"
Naina mushkurayi aur 'haan' kaha...
Naaz ne use hug kiya.........
Huda ne dhire se Yudi k kanon me kaha:- "dekha...Bhaiya k liye bhabi ko hot response mila...lekin humain kya...sukha sukha 'hello'.....
Maj Rajveer:- " par tu yahan achanak kaise...???"
Naaz:- "Batayun...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "haan....
Naaz:- "soch lijiye bhaiya...baad me mujhe dosh mat dena...!!!"
Maj Rajveer (confused look):- "kya matlab...???"
Naaz:- "aap ne fone par kaha tha na ki aap yahan se kahin aur ja rahe hain...kyoun ki yeh sab yahan aanewale hain...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne naaz k muh par hath rakha aur khud ko bachane k liye ek fake smile dete hue kaha:- "is ki baat ko koi bhi seriously mat lena...!!! ise toh aadat hai mazak karne ki...!!!"
Naaz ne zabardast hath hataya aur kaha:- "main mazak nahi karr rahi hun...bhiaya...
Maj Rajveer:- "Naaz...tu baht thak gayi hogi...ja kar freash ho ja...tab tak lunch bhi aa gaya hoga...phir sath me lunch karenege...!!!"
unhone lagbhag khinchte hue Naaz ko le kar ander chale gaye aur kaha:- "yeh sab kya kahna jaruri tha vahan par...!!!"
Naaz:- "haan...tabhi toh aap ki akal thikane par aayegi na...??? aap Naina ki wajah se yahan se jana chahte the...yeh baat Naina ko bhi toh pata chalna chahiye tha na...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "khabardaar yeh baat dubara chedi toh...!!! ab hum dono k bich sab kuch thik ho gaya hai toh phir kyoun purane movies ki BINDU ban rahi hai...!!!"
Naaz:- "main BINDU bann rahi hun...ya phir aap AMRISH PURI wale kaam karr rahe the...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "jyada bak bak ki na toh teri khair nahi..."
unhone us ka kaan pakad kar kaha....
Naaz:- "bhaiya choda na...dard ho raha hai...
Maj Rajveer:- "ab tu mujhe yeh bata ki tu toh subah se aa gayi thi na...toh ab tak kahan thi...???"
Naaz ne kuch bhi nahi kaha...bass apni nazrain jhukayi...
Maj Rajveer:- "phir se gayi thi vahan par...???"
Naaz ne kuch bhi nahi kaha...
Maj Rajveer:- " kyoun baar baar khud ko taklif deti hai...???"
Naaz:- "in ankhon ne jo dard dekha hai...voh itni asani se bhul toh nahi payegi na...bhaiya...!!!"
Naaz ne sachhai chupayi...voh janti thi ki Rajveer samajh raha hai ki voh apne purane ghar par gayi thi...par voh toh kahin aur thi...apne naye makshad ko mukam dene k liye...
door par dastak hui toh dono ne dekha Naina khadi thi
Naina:- "sir...lunch aa gaya hai...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "tum chalo hum aate hain...!!!"
Naaz:- "bhaiya...aap jayo...Naina ko yahan rahne do...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "kyoun...???"
Naaz:- "kya 'kyoun'...!!! mujhe aap k parde fassh karne hain Naina k samne...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne darr kar dekha...Naaz ki taraf ...voh jante hain ki Naaz yeh bhi karr sakti hai...
Naaz un ka xpression dekh kar mushkurayi aur dhire se un k kanon me kaha:- "dariye mat bhaiya...voh nahi kahungi...jo sirf aur sirf aap ko kahna hai...!!! bass ladies talk...!!! ab aap jayenge...plz...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "thik hai...par tum dono jaldi bahar aa jana...!!"
jate waqt Maj Rajveer ne Naina k kareeb kaha:- "is ki baat ko seriously mat lena...!!! us k dimag ka upar floor khali hai...!!!"
Naina mushkurayi...ander aayi...
Naaz ne use pyar se dekha...
'yeh hai us ki target ....

...Lft Naina Singh Ahluwalia ..."

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shaam ko Naaz taiyaar ho kar apne room se bahar aayi toh dekha...Maj Rajveer kafi tensed khade the...window k paas....
jab se voh Rajveer ko jana hai...apna bhai mana hai...tab se voh yeh achhe se janti hai ki Rajveer tabhi itne tensed hota hai jab koi kaam use apni marzi k khilaf karna pade...
Naaz:- "bhaiya....aap abhi tak taiyaar nahi hue...??? "
Maj Rajveer ne koi jawab nahi diya...!!! Naaz un k kareeb aayi...un k kandhe par hath rakha aur kaha:- "kya hua...aap baht pareshan lagg rahe ho...???"
Maj Rajveer apne duniya se bahar aaye...Naaz ki taraf dekha...aur kaha:- "tune kuch kaha...???"
Naaz mushkurayi...use pata hai ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye Maj Rajveer k muh se kuch bhi nikalna itna aasan nahi hai...voh tabhi apne dil ki baat ko kahenge...jab unhe kahna hoga...
Naaz:- "main yeh kah rahi thi ki dinner aap de rahe ho...aur us ka bill bhi aap ko hi dena padega...!!! lekin sab se pahle jise tayaar hona tha...vohi taiyaar nahi hai dinner par jane k liye...!!"
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye aur kaha:- "main bass 10 min me taiyaar ho jayunga...yeh toh tum ladkiyan ho jo taiyaar hone k liye itna late karte ho...!!!"
Naaz:- "achha achha...ab bhaashan bazi bandh ki jiye aur jaldi se taiyaar ho kar aayiye...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne turn kiya jane k liye...phir kuch socha aur Naaz k kareeb aaye...use bade pyar se dekha...us ne ek white embrodery ki salwar suit pahni hui thi...
Maj Rajveer ne us k fore head ko kiss kiya aur kaha:- "achhi lag rahi hai tu...aur tere chehre par mushkurahat achhi lagti hai...!!! tujhe mushkurata hua dekhta hun toh aisa lagta hai ki kam se kam main apni ek zimmedari toh thik se nibha pa raha hun...!!!"
Naaz:- aap ko pata hai...aap duniya k sab se achhe bhai ho...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "achha...
Naaz:- "ab apna tarif sun na bandh karo...aur jaldi se tayaar ho kar bahar aa jayo...!!! main doc Shalini k qtr me ja rahi hun....!!!"
Naaz chali gayi....
Maj Rajveer taiyaar ho kar apne room se nikle...apna revolver chk kiya...!!! apne aap ko haushla dene ki koshish ki...
Naaz jab dr Shalini k qtr me pahunchi toh dekha ki voh apna qtr lock kar k bass nikal hi rahi hain...
Naaz:- "hiii doc Shalini....
Shalini:- "hey...tum mujhe har baar doc Shalini mat bulaya karo...!!! call me...Shalini or Shalu...!!! yeh har baar doc Shalini bulana...aisa lag raha hai ki abhi samne se aur koi patient tapakne wala hai...!!!"
Naaz:- "ok....main aap ko Shalini bula yungi...chalega....???"
Shalini:- "arre..dudega...!!! achha tumhare pyare bhai sahab kahan hai...???"
Naaz:- "abhi taiyaar ho rahe hain...abhi aa jayenge...!!!"
Shalini:- "thik hai...hum ground par chalte hain...vohin se sabhi sath me jane ka plan hai...!!!"
Naaz:- "okkkk....
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cut to Ground....
Huda ek bike par baitha....ashmaan me dekh raha tha...paas hi Yudi khada...apne mobile se kuch chk karr raha tha....Alekh aaya....
Huda:- "abe tu akela...tera jodidaar kahan hai...???"
Alekh:- "Neelu...doc Shalini aur Naaz k sath aa rahi hai...!!!"
Huda:- "yaar...kabhi kabhi ladkiyon ki kishmat par tarash aata hai...???"
Yudi:- "kyoun bro....ladkiyo ki kismat ko kya ho gaya...???"
Huda:- "abhi dekh na...??? Naina ne jis din KMA join kiya...us din voh sab se pahle agar mujh se milti...toh Rajveer sir par fida nahi hoti...!!! par Naina ka bad luck hi khrab hai...us k nasheeb me toh mere jais handsome ladka tha hi nahi...!!! phir dekh...yeh Naaz...kitni khubshurat ladki hai...!!! lekin mujh se milne se pahle Gunny se mulakaat ho gayi...ab voh bhi us ki...!!!"
tabhi Ali pahuncha aur kaha:- "aisa kuch nahi hai...!!! ushtaad...ka Naaz jee k sath kuch nahi hai...!!!"
Huda:- "tujhe kaise pata...??? Naaz ne tujhe kone me le kar samjhaya tha kya...???"
Alekh:- "maine bhi pahli baar ushtaad ko kisi ladki k liye itne khush ho kar baat karte hue dekha...!!! lagta hai ushtaad ka yahi setting honewala hai...!!!"
Yudi:- "sayad...??? hey...Huda...tujhe koi naya flat(gf) mila ya nahi...!!!"
Huda:- "nahi yaar...!!! last tym jab RAJASTHAN me tha...reth k bich me...!!! socha ki yahin kisi se setting kar lunga...!!! isiliye kai baar...jo bhi ladkiyaan pani le kar apne ghar wapas ja rahi hoti thi...un se pani peelane ki req karta tha...!!! par yaar.... prob yeh thi ki kisi ki bhi shurat dikhai nahi deti thi...!!!"
Ali:- "kyoun...???"
Huda:- "arre yaar...sabhi 2 ft ki lambi ghunghat daal kar aati-jati rahti thi...pata hi nahi chalta tha ki ghunghat k ander dadi hai...ya poti...!!! main kise line maarta...???"
Yudi:- "thik hai...koi baat nahi hai...!!! meri ek frnd bani hai China ki...!!! us ki baht sari frnds hain...main tujhe us se milwa dunga...vohin se tere liye ek flat ka intezaam karte hain...!!!"
Alekh:- "rahne de...!!! china ka maal ek toh jyada din tak tikta nahi...aur upar se vahan k sare flats lagbhag ek hi tarah k dikhte hain...!!! Huda apna flat samajh kar kahin aur ghush gaya toh...bichare ka kya hoga...???"
sabhi hassne lage...tabhi Gunny aaya...
Gunny:- "hiii...all...baki k sab kahan hain...???
Huda:- "sir jee...baki k sab ladkiyaan hain...toh aap samajh hi rahe honge ki kahan honge...!!!'
Pooja tabhi bhaagti hui aayi aur kaha:- "chalo..chalo...!!!"
Huda:- "kahan...chalo chalo...!!! teri kitty party kahan hain...???"
Pooja:- "kya bol raha hai...???"
Yudi:- "is ka kahne ka matlab hai ki Naina, Shalini,Naaz aur Neelu kahan hain...???"
Pooja:- "mujhe kya pata...???"
tabhi Shalini, Neelu aur Naaz aayi...
Naaz:- "bhaiya abhi tak nahi aaye...???"
Huda:- "unhe toh aadat hai...sahi tym par entry maarne ki...isiliye sahi tym abhi tak aaya...i mean sahi tym abhi tak aayi hi nahi toh voh aa kar kya karenge....???"
Naaz:- "matlab...abhi tak Naina bhi nahi aayi...???"
Alekh:- "tum sach me Rajveer sir ki behn ho...fatt se jaan liya ki hum kis ki baat karr rahe hain...!!!"
Naaz:- "kyoun...tumhe shaq tha...???"
Alekh:- "haan... rajveer sir ne kabhi bhi apne kisi behn k bare me kaha hi nahi...!!!"
Naaz:- "bhaiya...aise hi hain...!!! baht si batain unhe dil me rakhne ki aadat hai...!!!"
Shalini:- "chalo...ab hum sab chalte hain...!!!"
Yudi:- "lekin Naina...aur Rajveer sir...
Shalini:- "hum sab chalte hain...voh dono toh aa hi jayenge...
Huda:- "sahi hai maam...!!! hum sab chalte hain...!!! "
Pooja:- "lekin jayenge kaise...???"
phir sabhi ne bike me jane ka plan banaya...!!! par Huda naraz ho gaya...
Huda:- "tum sab apni waliyon k sath jayoge...!!! mera kya...??? main toh akela hi jayunga na....???"
Ali:- "ho sakta hai ki isi bahane aap ko rashte me koi mil jaye,,,???"
Pooja-Ali, Shalini-Yudi, Alekh- Neelu n Naaz-Gunny k sath chale gayi....
Huda apna bike start karr hi rahi thi ki Maj Rajveer aa kar pahunche...
Maj Rajveer:- "Huda...baki k sabhi abhi tak aaye hi nahi hain kya...???"
Huda:- "voh sabhi toh aa kar chale bhi gaye...jungle me...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "jungle me...???"
Huda:- "haan...sir...voh 'wild grass' (resturant) aur kahna milega...jungle me hi na...??? toh voh sab aap dono ka intezaar karte karte chale gaye...!!! abhi main bhi ja raha hun...aap Naina ko le kar aa jayiyega...!!!"
Huda ne bike start ki...phir bola:- "sir jee...main apna wallet le kar nahi ja raha hun...!!! isiliye plz....jaldi se aa jayiyega...!!! kahin hamain bartan dhone na padd jaye...!!!"
Maj Rajveer mushkuraye......Huda apna bike start kar k chala gaya...
"toh Naina abhi tak nahi aayi...!!! main khud ja kar dekhta hun...ki kahan reh gayi yeh...!!!"
Maj Rajveer khud se baat karte karte Naina k qtr ki taraf chalne lage...
door knock karne hi wale the ki door ko khula hua hi dekha...voh ander gaye...Naina kisi se fone par baat karr rahi thi...us ka chehra mirror ki taraf tha...
Maj Rajveer ne ek pal k liye khud ko kamzor mehsus kiya...Naina ko us black dress me dekh kar...
mirror k through...Naina ki nazar padi Maj Rajveer par...voh mushkurayi...turn kiya...aur fone off karte hue kaha:- "sorry ...!!! voh maa ka fone aa gaya tha...isiliye main late ho gayi...!!!"
Maj Rajveer:- "itz ok...Naina...!!! ab chalo...chalte hain...baki k sabhi ja chuke hain...!!!
Naina thodi si dissapoint hui...kyoun ki Maj Rajveer ne use koi bhi compliment nahi diya...
Maj Rajveer ki haton se car k keys achanak niche gire...Naina ne jhuk kar niche uthaya...tab Maj Rajveer bhi jhuke the keys uthane k liye...un ki nazarain ruki ...Naina par...un ka dil thode se tym k liye jaise dhadkana bhul gaya tha...
Naina baht khubshurat lag rahi thi...us me dress me...
thode se tym k liye Maj Rajveer kafi sukun mehshush karr arhe the...unhe Naina k kareeb rahna achha lag raha tha...
Maj Rajveer:- "achhi lag rahi ho...!!!"
Naina ne notice nahi kiya tha ki Maj Rajveer use dekh rahe the...us ne hairani se kaha :- "kuch kaha aap ne Raj...???"
Maj Rajveer thode se kareeb aaye Naina k aur kaha:- "baht achhi lag rahi ho is dress me tum...!!!"
Naina k chehre ko unhone apne ryt hand se touch karte huekaha:- " aur jab tak main tumhare sath hun...tumhe kuch nahi hoga...!!!"
Naina khush bhi hui aur hairan bhi...Maj Rajveer ki last line use samajh me nahi aa rahi thi...jab ki Maj Rajveer apne jacket k ander rakhe...apne revolver ko chuu rahe the...
Naina ne Maj Rajveer ko gaur se dekha...voh baht tensed lag rahe the...
Naina janti thi achhe se Maj Rajveer ko...voh aise hi kabhi pareshan nahi hote...
Naina:- "kya baat hai ...kuch prob hai...???"
Maj Rajveer:- "nahi toh...!!!"
Maj Rajveer ne yeh kah kar turn kiya jane k liye...par Naina ne un ka hath thama....
Maj Rajveer ruke...apni ankhen band ki...us dard ko dabane ki koshish ki...jo kuch pal baad unhe jyada dard denewala tha...
ek dard...jo ek insaan ko agar achanak mile...toh taklif hoti hai...par vohi dard agar us insaan ko milne se pahle hi pata hota hai toh voh taklif jyada hota hai...!!! us ek dard milne tak voh inshaan us taklif ko mehshush karte karte jyada dard sahta hai...!!! vohi dard aaj Maj Rajveer mehshush karr rahe the...
unhone turn kiya...Naina se nazrain nahi milayi...aur kuch kaha bhi nahi...ek jhatke k sath unhone Naina ko apni bahon me liya...kafi tightly hug karte hue...apni ankhen band ki...na chahte hue bhi do boond anshun chalke un k ankhon se...
Naina mehshush karr rahi thi ki Maj rajveer kisi ek dard se gujar rahe hain...lekin voh kya hai...yeh voh samajh nahi pa rahi thi...
aur Maj Rajveer apne bandh ankhon se Naveen ko dekh rahe the...un k ankhon k samne vohi pal tha....
jab Naveen par unhone bullet chaalayi thi................
phir achanak voh scene badal gaya...unhe Naveen ki jagah Naina dikhai di...aur Naina k samne Maj Rajveer apna gun point kar k khade the..........
Maj Rajveer ne darr kar apni ankhen kholi...Naina abhi bhi un k bahon me thi......
end of d epi
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😃Plz do comments or press d LIKE button😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya😊
How r u?

Mein janti hun me comment edit karne ke liye late hun, par I know u will not be angry with me. Kyun, sahi kaha na?😉😆😆

Now, coming to ur update.😊
It was awesome, brilliant, beautiful, fantastic and min-blowing.👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏
👏The starting is awesome. Loved the understanding between them and I know na tum naina ko kuch nahin hone degi. 😃

Liked the scene between gunny and naina, it was beautiful. Naina ko kitna gussa aata hai na, uff...........😆

The scene is Raj's room was awesome⭐️. Naaz and Gunny were excited to see each other, which is noticed by every cadet. Ab raj ke cadets hain to notice to karna tha na.😉😆😆

M very upset yaar, tum hi dekho na raj naaz ki kitni care karta hai aur agar naaz ne naina ko koi dukh pohanchaya to wo kitna upset ho jayega. par, tum hamesha kuch alag karti ho to is baar bhi mein wait kr rahi hun😳.

Bechara Huda, uska luck hi kharab hai.............😆

The last scene was awesome. It has everything- love, passion, trust, fear. Just loved it yaar.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Please continue soon.😊
Luv Preet😃😃😃
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Priya😊

The update was superb, mind-blowing,awesome yaar👏👏

Woooooow starting aur ending main sirf Raj aur Naina😊

Raj n Naina scenes were soooo lovely 😳n emotional😭

Raj is scared to loose Naina

Gunny tease Naina 😆n she gets angry wid him😡

The canteen scene is so funny😆, Pooja Ali se naraj ho gayi aur Ali use manane k liye uske pchhe gaya🤣

Pooja jab canteen main batane aayi ki usne Raj ko new memory card(kisi ladki) ke saath dekha 🤣n Huda imagination but sabka reaction dekh kar who chup ho gaya🤣😆

Naaz Raj ko apna bhai manti hai aur Raj bhi use kitna pyaar karta hai phir bhi woh Naina ko harm karne wali hai😕😡

Everybody left for restaurant n leaves Raj n Naina alone😉

Last scene was so emotional n scary as well yaar😭

Naina also feels that Raj kuch pareshaan hai 😔

Raj Naina ko protect karna chahta hai par fir woh itna dara hua kyun hai ?????????😕😭

Plz Naina aur Raj main misunderstanding create mat karwana yaar😔

In sab sawalon ka jawab sirf ek insaan de sakta hai aur who tum ho madam 😈 😈 😉 😆 😉 😆 😉 😆 😈 😈

So do cont soooooooooooooooooooooon

Luvs

Naina🤗

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey priya
kya baat hai bday gift se pehle return gift?
Happy birthday dear!!! god bless you!
lets come to the ud now
Maj Rajveer se ek baar me sidhe prashn ka sidha uttar nikalwana to jaise impossible hai...par lagta hai naina ise I M ossible bana kar chodegi!
naaz seems a shady character...raj se pyaar aur naina se dushmani...thats strange...i hope raj doesnt have to kill her, or worst she doesnt have to do something to hurt naina...priya k dimaag ka kya bharosa??!!!
dialogues were great as usual...huda kabhi apni harkato se baaz to ayega nahi...
ab pata nahi aisa kya hone wala hai jisse maj rajveer itna darre huye hai...its pretty scray u know...last k scenes bahut achche the.
now plz nxt ud jaldi post karna
sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
why is raj going away
abhi abhi to waapis aaya hai aur ab chala bhi jayega
plz dont send him away.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Priya... How r u dear?? I heard u r not well..get well soon dear.. 🤗
Many many happy returns of the day....
Update is awesome....
Raj-Naina scene ws sooo lovely... naina wants to know her place in raj's life n raj asked for some more time....
he is scared of lossing naina...
so finallyt naaz arrived....n met naina,...her target...ohh god... she is showing so much love for raj but on other hand she has decided to harm naina.... she knows what naina means for raj....but still...
last scene of raj naina was soo touching...raj is hurting himself....but cant help it... he just wants to protect naina from all probs...but cud he????.... n thats y he is so tensed.... he himself doesnt know the ans... only Priya knows these ans..right?😉
lovely update....
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was amazing
loved it but ye naya suspense kya dala hain bich main
plz continue soon and a very very Happy birthday to you
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update.i like it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 awesome part.............njoyed reading it................specially the starting of the part.conversation b/w Raj-Naina...........😳 😳 😳.......................was expecting confession 4m Raj........ 😉 😉 😉.................but knowing Raj.........he is too good in hiding his feelings...... 😊..............he will take his beauty time to confess........infact LRL mein toh bechare ne confess bhi nahi kiya.....dialogue adhura reh gaya tha,,,,,, 😛 😛 😛..........
Naaz's entry was good.........👏...........
i was surprised naina didn't got jealous when pooja told her maj, Rajveer ke sath ladki hai..... 😆😆 😆 😆.........
lunch idea by huda was good👏................
& special mention of RN room scene.......... & my advice to Raj 😉......confess karlo major......warna writer Priya will not give u chance......she has planned something big 4 u......... 😛 😛
waise what Raj is hiding..........kuch toh gadbad hain............😕 😕 😕 😕.................& dont make my guess come true.........that u planning Raj to shoot naina............😭 😭 😭 😭...............i know something is running in ur khurapati dimaag......u gonna shock us in next part 😛 😛 😛
😭don't give readers a heart attack in next part 💔...................

& yes most important thing............continue soon............... 😃 😃 😃 😃


👏
Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago

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