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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Superb. Arey intro hua to kya hua, padhkar bahut acha laga.Aur wapas se LRL ki yaad bhi tazaa ho gayi.😊 Aur tumne fir se ek mod pe lakar kahani ko adhura chod diya.

Huda was hilarious.😆😆😆

The part about Aalekh and Neelu was a bit sad. 😭Kash ki Neelu ko jaldi samajh me aa jaye ki Aalekh usse kitna pyar karta hai.😭

Also sabki posting J&K me hui hai. Kash Naina wahan Raj se mile. Aur Raj usse Barfile wadiyon me propose kare.😉(Just joking).

Raj: Kya entry thi. Wah!!!!!!!Dil kush ho gaya.👏 Par Naaz hai kaun?

Absolutely mind blowing.

And the last part where Rajveer said to Naaz that TU MAJ RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT KI BEHEN HAI!!!!!!!!Wah kya baat hai. Arey meri excitement control nahi ho rahi hai.👏...

Pata chala ye sab padhte padhte mai khud hi kabhi likhne lagun.😆😆😆.😉😉😉

And thanks for sending me the pm.

Jaldi update karna next part. I'm waiting eagerly for it.

Edited by guglu088 - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Wow very beautiful part. Aur main last se start karungi. Haiiiii, kya entry tha hamare hero ki. Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!!! 😳 I luved this portion a lot. Actually pure part me main Raj ka hi scene dhund rahi thi......hehe. But sabse achhi cheez to end k liye hi rakhi jayegi na.

And now my cutie, Gunny. I'm happy dat he's also in the FF. Luved his convo wid Naina. And to tell the truth, I hav always wanted a glimpse of Navin in him whenever he was wid Naina. So u kinda fulfilled it.

I am feeling very bad abt Aalekh. He doesnt deserve such a painful lyf. And Huda's encounter wid Capt. Pallavi was really funny. Poor guy always gets himself embarrassed. Yudi's part was also sweet. And so was Ali n Puja's. they both wer having such sweet dreams aur Puja ne to baccho k naam bhi dekh liye.....lol.

Anyways, ab main sabke ek sath hone ka besabhri se intezaar kar rahi hu. Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.

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Lee Min Ho

@gujunpyo

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#43

aww....i liked ur ff...liked the 1st part too...superb entry of rajveer...

huda wal part is so🤣

aalekh..😒

gr8 ff..continue soon..

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Hi Priya, u hv got a new reader...!!!
Awesome start...!!!👏👏👏
All the charcters very well introduced...!!!
N loved Naaz-Raj part...!!
Update soon...!!!😊

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Sufia

@.x.Shilky.x.

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#45

waitng fr the nxt part lol... contin more.. xxxsufiaxxx

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Sufia

@.x.Shilky.x.

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#46

All the charcters very well introduced...!!!
N loved Naaz-Raj part...!!
n nice ff once again

its fab...!!!

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#47

soooooooooooooo goooooooooooooood...................👏

absolutely wonderful.......👏

loved d way u had d start n den d fic ....👏👏

also d description of situation of every character was brilliant......👏👏👏

loved rajs entry.......👏

totally rocking....👏👏👏

always njoy ur dialogues hamesha.....dey r beautiful 😊

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#48

WOW..FANTASTIC...SUPERB...ROCKING..

Tumne sabhi ke character intro bahut badhiya diye hai...

Huda is still the flirt that he used to be and sometimes ends up embarassing himself by flirting with the wrong girls..his scene with Capt. Pallavi was very funny.But he has also matured...he now knows how to be a true friend.

Its good to see that Yudi has gained his confidence...has become a brave soldier..even his parents are proud of him.

Pooja and Ali are the cutest pair..Ali still being the shy guy that he was..Pooja dreaming of her perfect life with ali.

I hope that Neelu realises soon...just how much Alekh loves her..because both of them can only be truely happy if neely accepts alekh..He does deserve to be happy with her

The best was the scene with Gunny and Naina..Its good to see that you have decided to explore a brother-sister relationship between them..

Raj's action scene was simple amazing..but tell us more about who Naaz is...and also bring all of them together..because even though they have all grown in themselves they are all incomplete with out each other and most of all bring raj and naian together as they live for one another..

Waiting eager for you to reunite RN together...so please continue soon

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hinal

@hinal60

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#49

another RN fic wonderful

really nice concept.

sorry for late reply i was out on vacation

jaise hi UD padha reply kiya

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#50

awesome as usual. 👏 👏 👏

Sab ko apne character k hisaab se present situation sahi likhe hai yaar.😉 😉 😉 Huda to humesha vaisa hi rahega fir bhi vo Naina ka bahut khayal rakhta hai ye kam nahi hai.😛 😛 😛 Yahan Pallvi k saath bhi flirt me busy hai vo.😉 😉 😉

Yudi as usual bus Shalu ko chahta hai abhi bhi aur miss bhi kar raha hai sagar dekh k. Ali ka dimaag atleast engagement k baad to thoda badla ki sapne me vo Pooja k saath atleast romance to kar le raha hai na.😳 😳 😳

Pooja ka haal abhi bhi vahi hai vo aur apne hero k sapne me busy 😳 😳 😳 aur sab se funny to bachhon k naam mobile handsets k naam pe.😆 😆 😆 Alekh aur Neelu abhi bhi apne rishte me ek nayi shuruvaat nahi kar paayein hain 😭 😭 😭 par i hope jaldi hi kar lenge.😊 😊 😊

Naina aur Gunny ka rishta accha laga.😃 😃 😃 Naina ko Gunny me ek bhai fir se mil gaya.😊 😊 😊 Par ye Raj army se kyoun bhaag raha hai ye samajh nahi aaya?😕 😕 😕 Naaz us ki sis kaise bani ye bhi samajh nahi aaya?😕 😕 😕 Abhi thodi confusions chal rahi hain na jo i think jaldi hi khatam hongi.😊 😊 😊

Try to ud soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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