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arpita25

@arpita25

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Hey g8 second part.

Sorry yaar mujhe thoda time laga padhne me. Actually bahut saare fics padhne pad rahe hain. Is liiye mujhe time lag gaya sorry for dat.

Naina aur group k baare me tum ne jo bhi bataya vo bahut interesting tha sab apne nature k according hain aur lage hue hain. Chahe Poo, Ali, Yudi, Alekh koi bhi ho. Gunny ka relation accha laga mujhe Naina k saath.

waiting for next part.

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

sorry yaar mai kya karoon time nahi mil paa raha tha mujhe,🥱 extremely sorry.
Good ud yaar.😊 Raj ne kabhi kaha nahi Naina se ki vo kitna pyaar karta hai us se tabhi is fic ka naam ankahi hai jo shayad justified bhi hai.😃 Raj jaanta hai ki jab Naina ko pata chalega ki vo zinda hai to kitne khush hogi vo fir bhi na jaane kyoun vo batana nahi chahta hai.😕
Par kuch bhi ho mujhe lagta hai Naina dhoondh nikaalegi Raj ko.😉
Aaj k liye bus itna second part ka reply next time.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Hi Dear

sorry for replying so late but u know the reason...U took me down to memory lane again.U made me nostalgic..I real;ly loved wathching this serial..U r such a gud writer dat my expectations r really high from dis fiction...nyways back to the reply..Update was truely fantastic..Sabke emotions ko bahut acche se portay ki tumne..Ali,poja,Alekh,Naina,Huda n even Raj..Raj is back in action..I really love your writing style...😊😊😊

Yeh Naaz kaun hai yaar???

When will Raj meet Naina????

Do update soon

Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: varshita
sorry yaar mai kya karoon time nahi mil paa raha tha mujhe,🥱 extremely sorry.chalo kam se kam tumhare darshan toh hue...

Good ud yaar.😊 thanxxxx

Raj ne kabhi kaha nahi Naina se ki vo kitna pyaar karta hai us se tabhi is fic ka naam ankahi hai jo shayad justified bhi hai.😃bilkul sahi pakda hain tum ne...

Raj jaanta hai ki jab Naina ko pata chalega ki vo zinda hai to kitne khush hogi vo fir bhi na jaane kyoun vo batana nahi chahta hai.😕kyoun...us ka jawab bhi vohi dega...

Par kuch bhi ho mujhe lagta hai Naina dhoondh nikaalegi Raj ko.😉let's c...
Aaj k liye bus itna second part ka reply next time. thik hai...main wait kar rahi hun...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sania_58
hmm, it was the introduction part
just awsome yaar

mindblowing

too good

plz continue soon

Thanxxxx Sania...😊

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

The words about Life and First Love were just beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I could almost hear Navin's voice say them!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ka Naina ko yaad karna was very emotional!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Sach kaha ke Raj kabhi apne pehle pyaar ko bhul nahi payega!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko toh lagta tha ke Rajveer par sabse zyada haq uska hai aur yeh sahi bhi hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj apne saare ilzaamo se bari ho gaya and now has been promoted to the rank of Major!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

It is nice to see that justice was done chahe der se hi sahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The system in which Raj believed in completely did work!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Navin bhi chahta hai ke Raj aur Naina ek ho jaye hamesha hamesha ke liye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's feelings about Naina was described beautifully!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

It's great that he has been posted in India again!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for describing their emotions!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was seeing Raj's accident again in her nightmare!!!!!!!!

Naina is remembering all the moments she had spent with Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was a trip down memory lane!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It is very sad that Raj has not told Naina that he is alive!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Doesn't he know how happy she will be to know that??😡 😡 😡 😡 😡But how come she has not found out??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina ne apni responsibilty poori kar di par ab usko bhi hak hai apna khoya huya pyaar wapas paane ka!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The way Naina's emotions and pain were depicted was beautiful!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina is sitting and crying!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina ke kandhe par kisne haath rakha??😕 😕 😕 😕

Jaldi se Raj aur Naina ko ek dusre ki zindagi mein wapas lao taaki woh dono hamesha ke liye ek ho jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

WOW!!! amazing story so far yaar, I'm so happy you started a new one, so none of the gang knows their Rajveer Sir is still alive? interesting! Huda is incorrigible! he'll never change will he? I liked the scene b/w Gunny and Naina, it's nice to know she has someone other than alekh to take care of her...speaking of which I feel sad for alekh and neelu, I hope things get better between them soon! thanx for the pm yaar

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

hey nice episode yaa.please continue and update soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: aneeshadgr8
aww....i liked ur ff...liked the 1st part too...superb entry of rajveer...
huda wal part is so🤣

aalekh..😒

gr8 ff..continue soon..

Thanxxx Aneesha...😊