ANKAHI...{LRL-RN}note n page 157 - Page 3

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

Hai!! *Sigh*

Pehle hee Part main mujhe rula diya 😭 sorry yaar...par mera aisa koi bhi intention nahin tha. bas Raj aur Naina jahna par bichde the...vahin se suru kiya toh...thoda saddy tho hoga hi na.

Rajveer ka Naina ko Yaad karna, and Naina ka Rajveer ko Yaad karna 😳 Both were a Very Emotional Scenes 😔 Reading this we know very well how much they Love each other 😳 Kaash ... Voh Mil Jayye ... tumhe kya lagta hai...is fic ko maine Naina ki shaadi Huda k sath karwane k liye starat kiya hai....!!!of course yaar bichde hue dilon(RN) ko malayungi hi...!!! 😃

By the way, i don't think i ever told you this but whenever you start a fic ... Your Wordings are soooo Beautiful 😳 and really touches my heart 😊 so well done to you for doing that 👍🏼... really😕...!!! thanx yaar...😛!!! main sochti hun...SLB ko join kar lun...!!! kya kahti ho...😆 😆 😆 ??? voh mujhe pagal hi samjhenge.... jo ki main actual me hun...😆 😆 😆

Aur Ek baat Update Tere Naina 😆 arre itni jaldi kya hai...last ud ek mahine pahle hi toh diya tha...😆

Hum Readers par Taras ka 😔 itna Emotional Attyachar Mat kar 😭 😆 yaar...main khud emotional banda hun...😭!!! toh mujh se aur kya xpect kar sakti ho...!!! ok...ok...ek do din main TN ko ud kar dungi...!!!😃

Anyways I know for a Fact this Fic is going to be just as good or better than Tere Naina so do... dekhte hain...yeh xpress chalti bhi hai ki bich me hi accident ho jati hai...!!!😉

continue ... and let me add SOON 😆 and don't forget to care of yourself 🤗 voh toh main karungi hi...🤗

Yasmin

Originally posted by: sania_58

another fic

great yaar

very nice fic

superb start, very emitional

waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was awesome

and you dont need to ask to start a new fic because we all knew you are a wonderful writer

so plz continue plz

Originally posted by: manatated

loved it!!! Thanxx😃

superb👏 Thanxxx😃 😃

it was very well written.... Thanxxxx again...😃 😃 😃

the voice over of navin...i could actuly hear it as in lrl... haan...puri kahani me vohi toh background me the...humain sab k emotions ko samjhane k liye...

and that song....it was most apt to describe their emotions....mujhe bhi yahi laga tha...😊

emotions of raj and naina were beautifully written... yaar...tum baht tarif karti ho...!!! par sach kahun...tarif sun na sab ko achha lagta hai...😃 aur mujhe kuch jyada hi achha lagta hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

and to top it all....tumhari purani aadat...story ko exciting point pe chod do aur readers ko cliff hanger pe latkao😆😆nahin yaar...main itni bhi buri nahin hun...!!! haan...kabhi kabhi agar aisa nahin kiya toh tum sab mujhe chod kar bhaag jayoge...!!!😆

whose hand is it?? it has 2 b aalekh....or....probably huda?? ya phir....raj aagaya??? u must b jocking...😆!!! Naina ki life me Raj ki re-entry itne saade tarik se thode hi na hogi...!!! voh toh hogi......na na...main abhi nahin batane wali...!!! kuch tym aur wait kar lo yaar...!!!😉

yaar jaldi update karo....

Originally posted by: kads_8302

hi dear, hiiiii😃

its great that u started new fic.. Thanxxx 😃

RN fic on lrl ... great yaar... haan baht dino se soch rahi thi ki Raj aur Naina jahan bichde the...vahin se ek fic suru karun...!!!

u should definitely continue this fic... aap sab ka sath raha toh...jarur cont karungi...

well i wan't to know its again a humerus fic or an intense love story... hmmmm...agar yeh fic hit ho gayi toh...definately yeh mere baki fics ki tarah spices hoga...matlab romance, action, comedy...etc...etc... par agar flop ho gayi toh jarur yeh fic tragedy hoga...😛

but great start... their are some mysterious which i think will be cleared in next few uds... yeah...sure 😃

so waiting for u to ud this fic soon..

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

yet another beautiful fic frm ur side.......⭐️😊

starting dialogues wer awesome........dey truly magical😊 n den comes d main part

again a very emotional yet totally amazing caricaturisation of emotions⭐️⭐️⭐️

totally rocking....👏👏👏

thnk u for starting yet another rn fic...... 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

woww... lovely start Priyanka..... Thanxxx ...!!! 😊 my name is nt Priyanka...dis is Priya...!!!😛

nice plot... but i m confused.. how come naina doesnt know that Rajveer is alive?? pura sach mai aage likhungi...!!! 😃

u have described their feelings sooo beautifully... well done..!!! Thanxxx Neelima...😊
waiting for the next part... 😳

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So all i can say welldone.👏 👏 👏 thanxxx dear...😊

Raj n Naina k KMA background par base stories hum ko humesha real lagti hain 😃 😃 😃 aur shayad yahi reason hai ki un se hum sab se jyada apne ko relate kar paatein hain.😊 😊 😊sahi kaha hai yaar...😃

Lagta hai jaise aakhon k saamne ek ek scene aur ek ek pal dono ka ek saath bitaya hua chalne laga ho. Kuch palon k liye lagta hai ki kaash yahi dikhaya hota na serial me.😭 😭 😭haan...yaar...main baht miss kar rahi hun...!!! khaas kar k raj ko😭...us k charachter k sath bilkul thik nahin hua...😭

Raj ne Naina ko abhi tak nahi bataya ki vo zinda hai yahi sab se bade dukh ki baat hai.😕 😕 😕sayad yeh serial cont hota aur raj agar wapas aa jata toh yahi hota...!!! kyoun ki DJ's itni jaldi raj aur naina ko milne nahin dete...😕!!! par main DJ's nahin hun...toh...😉

Naina ne apne responsibilty poori kar di par ab us ko bhi hak hai apna khoya hua pyaar vapas paane ka.😭 😭 😭vohi toh...😃

Jaldi se ek baar fir Raj aur Naina ko ek doosre ki zindagi me vapas laao. Jis se is baar ankaha sach saamne aa jaaye aur dono humesha k liye ek ho jaayein.😳 😳 😳voh toh main karungi hi...😃

Originally posted by: arpita25

Chalo koi fic to aisa hai jis ko mai shuru se padhoongi. I am damn sure ki is ki story interesting hogi kyounki ye after LRL hai. Naina aur Raj jaroor milenge phir se aur ek ho jaayenge.