MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
hey dear, sorry to comment so late!
ur ff is fantastic!
loved mayur!
simply awesome


love Zoah
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
Thanks a ton guys, I'll get u guys a LONG update tomorrow!! :-)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
ok huni! will be waiting for it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
sorry 4 the late reply.....
very cute updates....
they were very short......
😊
waiting 4 ur nxt part....
plzz update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
wow great job
thanx a ton 4 the pm
as usual it was a great update
i love when samrat calls mayu majnu ki aulad
lolzzz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
awesome yar
lovely part
samart is the best
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
Part - 4

Early next morning, Gunjan woke up and saw Nupur sitting outside the room, in the balcony . . . wailing! 😭😭

G - Nupur, ka hua?

N - Kuch nahi Di, tum chalo andar! 🥱

G - Mujhe pata hai, main jane wali hun isliye hi udas hai na tu!

N - Aur nahi toh kya? I'll miss u a lot! U knw wat? Aapki shadi ho rahi hai aur main bahut dukhi hun! 😉

G - Dukhi? Kyun? Tujhe Samrat accha nahi lagta?

N - Nahi, jiju bahut acche hain lekin I'll miss u a lot! But then, am really ahppy 4 u. 😃

Gunjan had tears in her eyes . . . she hugged Nupur! Both the sisters were wailing when their Grand ma came up to em! 😉😃

D - Kudiyun, ki kardi payi ho?

N - Kuch nahi Dadi, tussi aithe? Kuch chayida si?

Gunjan was still wailing . . . she was not in a state of saying anything! 😭 Dadi then asked Nupur to go and her her towel . . . which she had left in the guest room's balcony the previous day's morning! 😃😳

Nupur went their while . . . Dadi told somethings to Gunjan! 😃

D - Gujan putar, aie ki kardi payi hai tu?

G - Kya karun Dadi? Mere mann nahi hai aapko chood k jaane ka! 😭

D - Asi tenu jane kidar de rahe hain? Asi te tenu ik aisi jagah, aise logoon de kool bhejde pay hain jina nu tu nahi jandi par tu unade di family da hissa hai! Ise tu ek test samjh le, tu bass una nu khush rakhan di koshish kar riyo! Dheere dheere tenu unadan saath accha lagne lagega!

G - Ye toh theek hai Dadi par aap log . . .

She interrupted . . .

D - Jahan tak rahi sadi gal toh tenu asi mile rahange aur dekh kudiye, ai te ekdum natural hai . . . ai te har Kudi de nal hota hai na! 😃

Dadi got successful in cheering Gunjan up as well as in telling her some very imp. things that are imp. 4 her to know before she's married! 😃

On the other hand, on the way to the guest room . . . Nupur all of a sudden realized that Mayank was staying in that room! She didn't know why but she felt a Lil uneasy!

N to herself - Ab main Mayank k room mein kaise jao? Woh so rahe honge na! 😲 Aur pata nahi kyun? Main toh theek se usse baat bhi nahi kar pati hun! 😳

She reached the room, and knocked . . .

N - Mayank . . . so rahe ho kya?

Mayank was getting ready at that time . . . he thought Anne is there so he didn't even bother to wear his shirt, he rushed towards the door and the moment he opened the door, he saw Nupur out there. 😳

Nupur was like this . . . 😳 she could'nt utter a single word . . .

M - Oops . . .😳 kya hua?

N - Woh, peeche . . . Dadi ka towel pada hai . . . balcony mein . . . please dedo . . .

M - Theek hai! 😃

He brought the towel and gave it to her! 😃 He was a lil embarrased! But he found so very cute as he was ab;e to notice that she was blushing like anything! 😳


N - Thanks!

M - Your wel . . .

He didn't even complete his statement as the moment Nupur thanked him . . . she ran away! 😳

Mayank got ready and went to Samrat's place, he was staying at a Community Center near the Bhushan Residence! 😃

M - Hey Samrat! Hey Anne, Benji aur Diya kidar hain? Namestey Uncle!

After Mayank greeted everyone he took Samrat aside . . .

S - Kya hua? Kya karra hai? Subey subey he peeli kya? 👏

M - Main peeta nahi hun! 👏

S - Accha, phir tujhe mujh mein Nupur kaise dikh rahi hai?👏 😉

M - Oh shut up, waise main tujhse usi ki baat karne aaya hun! 😉

S - Hain? Aaj suraj kidar se uga tha?

M - Stop these one liners at once and please listen to me!! Sun . ..

S - Suna? 😃😃

Mayank told him bout the incident took place in the morning, Samrat was grinned at him!

M - Kya hua?

S - Beta, ab toh maan ja ki u're in love? 😛

M - U're right, ab toh manna hi padega! Par isse bhulaya kaise jata hai?

S - Abey oh Majno k naam pe BADE SE DHABBE 👏👏 . . . iss sab k baad bhulane ki zarurat kya hai?

M - Matlab? 😲

S - Abey dhakkan, tu uske saath thoda time spend kar, usse samajh and the confess ur love!

M - Are u joking?

S - No dude, am serious!

Mayank to himself . . . ab toh kuch karna hi padega! 😉



To Be Continued . . . 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
hi kanky
yaar awesome
itne achi update ke liya u deserve a hug
luv it
samart and mayu conversatioin
and the best part
is dadi conversation to gunjan
or mayu is very hot i remember the incident in mjht
hatssssss of to u for this updaTE
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
woooww awesome update!!
I loved that little Mayur scene...! It was adorable!
And as always...sayank rocked!! Majnu ke naam pe bade se dabbe...LOL...it cracked me up!!
Lets see what mayank does now...!
Looking forward to the next update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww............loved it
mayank gonna spend time now...wow

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