MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88)

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

ohh..i dont know u have updated,plz inform me when ur updating...ur too good...am eagerly waiting for ur next part...

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Jassica C

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

wow!!

2 good yaar

when r u next updating

plzz pm me if possible

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Jinal

@Jinal27

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

hey just want to say that I read a very few ff since I dont have that much time but I read urs and it is really good! You def should continue!

I like ur mixture of hindi and punjabi very much!

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

GREAT update!!

hehe...as always...I loved that Sayank conversation!! Majnu ki aulad...by god...that was funny!

And then Mayur convo after DDLJ movie...i could just imagine that happening!

But I loved those Punjabi bits...vaddi changi punjabi si yaar!! It was the best!

And Mayank's gonna stay in Nupur's house...ab mazaa ayega!!

woooo..lights out!

thanks for the PM...can't wait for the next one!

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

WOW!!

2 GREAT UPDTS!!...AMAZING!!I

I LOVED SAYANK CONVO AND THAT..."MAJNU KI AULAD"

WAH WAH WAH!!

DADI ROCKS...

NOOOO!!

DADI NE CHAK DITTE PHATTE!!..LOL!!

1ST TIME I SAW A FF JAHA NUPS EK PANJABAN HAI!!..LOL!!

NUPUR TOH BADI SONI PUNJABI BOL RAHI SI!!..LOL!!

WHEN MAYANK SAY

" PAKKE PUNJABI LOG HAIN"

AUTOMATICLY LINES COME IN MY MIND!!!

Ek Punjaban...Kudi Punjaban,,,Hay Ek Punjaban...Dil Chura Ke Lai Gayi..Hay Sona Sona..Hay Dil Mera Sona
Sona Sona...Dil Mera Sona...

Surme Waale...Nain Laga Ke Lai Gayi...Hay Sona Sona
Hay Dil Mera Sona...Sona Sona...Dil Mera Sona

Ek Punjaban...Kudi Panjaban...Hey Kudi Pataaka,,,Dil Chura Ke Lai Gayi...Hey Sona Sona...Hey Dil Mera Sona
Sona Sona...Dil Mera Sona

Gora Gora Rang Hai Tera...Yoon Lagdi Punjabi...Yoon Lagdi Punjabi...Mere Hawaale Kar De Ni Kudiye
Roop Nagar Di Chabi...Roop Nagar Di Chabi...Ye Roop Anokha...Hai Shabba
Khushboo Da Jhonka...Hai Shabba...Tere Naak Da Thoka
Hai Shabba...Main Ho Gaya Dhoka..Poorkh Choodiyoon Ko
Khanka Ke Lai Gayi...Hey Sona Sona...Hai, Dil Mera Sona

LOL LOL!!

AB JOH LIGHT CHALI GAYY HAI TOH ...

KUCH TO ACHCHA HOGA..HAI NA?

MAYU IN NUPS HOUSE...

AB AYEGA ASLI MAZAA!!!

REALLY ENJOIED BOTH PARTS!!

PLS CONYINUE SOON!

CANT WAIT!!!

SEE YAAA!!

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I-love-dmg

@I-love-dmg

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

wow...dis is awsome... can u plz add me2 the pm list!
xxxxxxxxxx

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

@Monu : Hayyee...prefect song yaar!!!!

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

@Angels 1988, Nidhi & Monu - Thanks guys! I just wanted to give it an original touch! And as far as my punjabi is concerened, I myself am a punjabi therefore, I'm actually relatiing that to mysekf while writing! :-)

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Part - 3

When the power cut took place, Nupur was trembling with fears! She was almost in tears! And was shouting . . .

N - MAYANK!! MAYANK! Kidar hain aap? 😕😕

M - Nupur, don't worry main yehi hun . . .

N - Mujhe andhere se darr lagta hai . . . ab main . . .

He interrupted . . .

M - Koi baat nahi, bass mujhe ye bata do . . . k candles kahan padi hai!

N - Woh, is kamre mein nahi hain!

M - Koi baat nahi . . . koi aata hoga candles le ke . . . chill! 😛

N to herself - Beda gark kar ditta! Main aithe aayi hi kyun! Kisi hor nu bhej dena chahiye tha! And now, AM STUCK!!

Mayank started laughing . . .

N - Mayank, aap hass kyun rahe ho??

M - Tum jab dar jati hoon toh kya punjabi bolni shuru kar deti ho? 👏

N - Haan toh? Koi problem hai? Ka karien? Mujhe bandaroon k bhasha nahi aati!

M - Bandaroon ki? Kahin tum meri baat toh nahi karri? 😡

N - Arey wah, aap toh bahut intelligent hain . . . 👏

Before Mayank could say anything . . . Nupur started shouting!!

N - COCKROACH!! 😕

She ran as fast as she can, went close to Mayank . . . and hugged him tightly . . . she was actually crying! Mayank was infleunced by her child like innocence! He came to know that this innocence is her real charm . . . he didn't utter a word! He wished that that particular moment never comes to an end! But then . . . he thought that y was he thinking like that! He was very confused! On the other hand . . . Gunjan came up stairs with a candle in as she knew that Mayank-Nupur wer upstairs . . . when she reached their . . . she saw Nupur in Mayank's arms! 😃

G to herself - Ye kya ho raha hai? 😲

G - Ahem Ahem . . .

Nupur turned around . . .

N - Di, woh . . . YAHAN COCKROACH HAI . . .

Mayank was still holding her hand . . . but as sson as her sister came in . . . she left him aside and went to her! He didn't know what to say! His feeling were still a mystery to himself! 😆😆 😳😳

All the 3 went down stairs, the fuse got fixed and the function started again! All the girls wer dancing n some punjabi wedding songs!! 😃😃 BUt Gunjan was sitting with Samrat . . . they were lost in their own world but then, Gunjan noticed Mayank staring at Nupur, she was dancing . . . and Mayank couldn't take his eyes off her! 😳 😲

G - Samrat, wo dekhiye . . .

S - Kya? Mayank ko?

G - Haan, aap theek keh rahe the . . . woh to Nupur ko . . .

I'll continue this afterwards . . . I have to go 4 tuitions! Will give u the next update within 2 hours! :)

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403848

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Part - 3 (Continuation)

G - Is Mayank in love with Nupur?

S - No idea, but one thing is for sure that I've never my best friend like this before so obviously kuch oh hua hai! 😉😉

G - But wat about Nupur? Ye dono to ek jaise bilkul bhi nahi hai! In fact, abhi to mile hain duno! 😉😆

S - Toh kya hua? Have u ever heard of the phrase "opposites attract"? 👏 Aur haan, agar use pyar hua hai toh twas like LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT! Wat say? 😆

G - Aap sahi keh rahe ho but main thodi confused hun!

S - Aap tension mat lo yarr, jo hona hai woh toh ho kar hi rahega! None of us can't help it! Woh dekho . . . Nupur ko!

G - Goodness . . . NUPUR BHUSHAN is BLUSHING! 😆 Ye kya ho gaya?

S - Wohi toh, ab idhar dekho k woh blush kar kyun rahi hai . . . 😉

Mayank was forced by Dadi to go and dance! Benji and Anne were also dancing . . . Mayank simply had no control on his heart . . . and he started dancing with Nupur! 😳

When everyone fifnished dancing, they went out to have dinner! Mayank asked to Nuput to wait 4 a minute! 😃

M - Nupur, ruko!

N - Kya hua? 😲

M - Woh tumhare haathun ki mehendi bahut acchi lag rahi hai! 😃

N - 😳😳😳

She never felt like that but WAIT Y? 😲

N - Woh, ab chalo . . . khana kahlo! 😛

M - Tum jao, I'll be right back!

Mayank went up to his room and was lost in his own world! He was very confused as to what he's feeling for Nupur! Those feelings had been chasing him since the morning when he met her for the first time! Tabhi, Samrat entered his room!

S - Oye hoye!! Majnu ki aulad! 👏 Kiske khyalun mein duba hua hai! 😲😛

M - Let's be frank . .. waise bhi u're my best fren toh ujh se kuch nahi chupaonga!!

S - Bol bhi de ab sadu Mayank!

M - sadu Mayank?? 😲

NS- Haan, Nupur ne abhi abhi yehi nick name diya tujhe!

M - Main kuch bhi sadane wale kiya kab?

S - Nahi nahi, main use tere purane kisse suna raha tha! 👏

M - Kyun?

S - Usi ne pucha tha!

M - Kyun? Use mujh mein kya interest hai? 😳😃😲

S - Wohi jo tujhe us mein hai . . .👏

M - Nahi, am not interested! 😆

S - Abhi toh tu frank hone wala tha na . . . sach bol, do u love her? 😊

M - Love? Subey hi toh mila hun use? Abhi janta hi kahan hun!

S - Beta, isi kehte hain love at first sight! Tu mane yan na mane . ..

M - Par ab karun kya? 😲

S - Jo tera man kare!

M - Huh??

S - Haan, thoda time lagega but I'm sure tu samjh jayega! 😃

M - Thanks!

Samrat didn't say anything . . . he hugged him and both the two went down stairs to have dinner! Samrat was highly delighted to know that his friend is in love where as Mayank was utterly conuused! 😳😃

On the other hand, Gunjan was really very worried as she didn't know what her sister felt bout Mayank! And Nupur had started feeling something weird about her jiju's best friend! But y? 😳

To Be Continued . . . 😉

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