MayUr FF - You and I . . . (Last Part - Pg. 88)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys!! 😉😉

This is the 1st time am writing an FF myself! Am really excited as this is originally my idea! Lolzz . . . hope u guys like it! 😳😳

YOU AND I . . .

Two women were standing on the terrace of a beautiful apartment in USA. . . both the two were busy talking! Both the two were talking about a marriage that took place 2 years back . . .

FLASHBACK -

Gunjan was getting ready for her Mehendi ceromany . . . when all of a sudden . . . she heard someone shouting at the workers . . . that was Nupur, her younger sister . . . the one who was the arranging everything . . .

N - Kya bhaiya? Maine ye wali nahi ye wali phool lagane k liye kaha tha aapko!

W - Maaf kardo Baby . . . main abhi badalta hun!

N - Nahi bhaiya, aap jao . . . udar aur bahut kaam hai . . . main karti hun . . .

G to herself - Ye Nupr bhi na! 😆😆

Nupur was standing on a ladder decorating the pillar with some flowers! And after some time, she lost her balance and fell down . . . but then . . . a guy coming from behind caught her in his arms . . . that guy was the bride groom's friend . . . who had come to India after almost 3 yrs . . . his name was Mayank Sharma!!

M - Aap theek toh hain? (asking her with concern)

N - Jee, main bilkul theek hun . . . thanks!

M - Thanks ki koi zarurat nahi! :-)

N - 😛😛😛

M - Excuse me . . .

N to herself - Ye kaun tha? 😲😲

Nupur then went upstairs . . . got ready . . . she was wearing a beautiful green lehenga! She then went to her sister Gunjan's room and brought her down . . .

Samrat and his friends were standingdownstairs . . . and then Samrat whispered something in Mayank's ears . . .

S - Wo dekh! Meri wali aa rahi hai!

M - Mujhe bhi dikh raha hai!

S - Toh tujhi koi acchi lagi yahan! Ya koi amkiri mame pasand aa chuki hai! Aur agar nahi aayi . . .toh dekhle yahan, shaadi ka ghar hai . . . bahut laakiya hai . . .


Mayank didn't reply . . . he was lost in his thoughts . . . just then . . . he looked at Nupur . . . the gal bout whom he was thinking . . . he thought she was looking very pretty! Just then, Samrat noticed him staring at Nupur!

S - Abey oye, jise tu dekh raha hai na . . . tu janta nahi wo kaun hai!

M - Mujhe jaanna bhi nahi hai . . . waise, tu itna insist kar hi raha hai toh bata de . . . kon hai woh? 😉😉

S - Batau?

M - Bata na? Theek hai matt bata! 👏

S - Accha theek hai sun le, Majno ki aaulad . . . woh meri saali hai . . . aur haan dekhne mein toh kafi achi hai par jab bolne pe utar aayi na toh tu fass jayega . . . aur . . .

Mayank stopped him . . .

M - Bol woh nahi bol tu raha hai wo bhi itna zyada! Aur waise bhi mujhe teri yan kisi ki bhi sali mein koi interest nahi hai!

S- Haan haan, Padku Mayank ko kitaboon se fursat mile tab na! 👏👏

Just then, Nupur and Gunjan came up to the bride groom and his friends . . .

N - Hey Jiju!

S - Hii Nupur . . . bahut acchi lag rahi ho!

Both of them hug each other . . .

S - Hii Gunjan . . . aap bhi bahut acchi lag rahi hain!

G - 😳😳😳

Everyone made Gunjan and Samrat together! They were busy talking to each other when Samrat noticed Mayank staring the same girl, Nupur again!

S - Gunjan, wo dekho!

G - Kya?

S - Mera friend . . . Mayank . . . kaise Nupur ko dekh raha hai . . .😆😆

G - Main kaise dekhun, u didn't introduce him 2 me . . . 👏👏

Samrat then went up to all his friends along with Gunjan . . . to indroce them to her . . .

S - Dia, Anne, Benji, Sheena and Mayank . . . guys, this is Gunjan . . . my . . .

Benji stopped him . . .

B - Samrat ki woh! 👏👏

Everyone started giggling and then Samrat asked Gunjan to interact with his frens! He then took Mayank aside . . .

S - Ye ho raha hai?

M - Kya kya?


S - Chood beta tu nahi maanne wala . . .

Samrat then shouted and called Nupur . . . "NUPUR!!"

N - Jee jiju . . . boliye . . . kuch kaam tha?

S - Nahi bass, meet my friend .. . Mayank!

N - Ye? Inse toh main mil chuki hun! 😃

S - Kab?

M - Bas thodi der pehle, ye seedi se neeche gir gayi thie aur maine . . .

Samrat interrupted . . .

S 2 M - Kya baat hai? Kya entry maari hai!

N - Kya baatien ho rahi hain? 👏

S - Kuch nahi . . . so Mayank . . . this is Nupur, main sister in law. . . and Nupur this is Mayank, my best friend!

M - Hii Nupur! 😛

N - Hii Mayank! So, aap India mein nahi rehte?

M - Haan, but tumhe ye kaise pata?

N - Woh, bass 2 min pehle Di ne bataya . . .

M - Di ne? U mean Gunjan ne!

N - Haan!

M - Accha, toh aap Kya karti hain?

N - Jee, am a fashion designer . . . and u?

M - Am a business man, USA mein!

N - Oh, cool!

Tabhi, Nupur saw her cousin watching TV . . . her fave movie . . . DDLJ . . . she imdiately went up to him and started watching the movie . . . leaving Mayank behind!

M 2 S - Kya ladki hai ye!

S - Haan ye to bass aisi hi hai . . .

M smiled . . . he had actually fallen in love but he wasn't aware of it! 😳😃


How's it guys?? If u giys like it .. . I'd continue it! 😳

Love,
Kanky!





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Posted: 16 years ago
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***EDITED***

wowwwwwwwwwwwwww....awesome...yaar...👏👏👏
gunjan's wedding and nupz is here younger sis....cool....
jab starting itni achhi hai..
to i m sure poori ff bhi mind blowing hogi...
loved it..plz do continue soon...😃



Edited by falak01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow!! You're starting a new fanfic!!
this looks really interesting to me...hehe...Mayu ki entry toh kamaal thi!
And I loved the Sayank conversation!!
Also benji ka woh dialogue..."samrat ki woh!"...LOL...!
Do continue and do PM me when you update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy Kanky
Loved the start..
funny how sammy how padku mayank se books ki fursat mili tab na..
loved that bit.
do cont soon
and plz do PM me
: )
xxSonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi kanky
lovely yaar
just loved this part yaar
specially when sammy said mayu majno ke aulaad
awesome yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@All - Thanks a lot guys! I'll post the next by tomorrow!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kanky ....... muahs dear kya likha hai * seeti maari* and nice how Gunjan is potrayed as da big sis..... kaash main nupur ki jagah uss seedi se girti toh mayu mujhe pakad leta...... Sigh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

kanky ....... muahs dear kya likha hai * seeti maari* and nice how Gunjan is potrayed as da big sis..... kaash main nupur ki jagah uss seedi se girti toh mayu mujhe pakad leta...... Sigh



Mera bhi kuch aisa hi khayal hai but kya karien? Agar main girti toh us bichare ki hadiyan chakna CHUR ho jaati! LOLZZZ! 🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kanky



Mera bhi kuch aisa hi khayal hai but kya karien? Agar main girti toh us bichare ki hadiyan chakna CHUR ho jaati! LOLZZZ! 🤣

are hum to apne sapno ki baat kar rahe hain....😆😆😆
@kanky:edited my post....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i like it!!!!!!..............................go ahead yaar bahut hi set intro tha!!!>......update soon!!

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