MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 14

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

<br><br><font color="#ff00ff">Hiya Sweety,<br>thanxu for the sweetest pmz and replies... seriously bohot sweet the.... <br>im really happy that you like the suggestion... i'll think of more things that you could write bout but i dont think you need the help, your doing such an awsome job huni....<br>yehhh we'll both think of names and then tell each other.... then my fren can make a siggie for us😊😊😊<br>also huni... no worries bout the lambi update thing... i read ur pm and totally understand.... n inshallah everythin will be awsome soon in ur life 😊<br>also don't thank me for reading it yaar... tum understand nahi kar sakti ke me kitna enjoy kar rahi hoon... bohot hi achi hai.... <br>now you take care...<br>n lets think of a awsome name for this awsome ff...<br>love lots<br>xxxx</font><br><br><font color="#ff00ff">p.s. arrey yaar jus read the update... seriously good... lovely... cannt wait for the next part....😊😊😊<br>xxxxxxxxx</font><br>

heyyy love,
I just read ur pm I can't say enough on how sweet u r yaar... thanks sooo much for the care i really appreciate it.... n yesssss plssss do come up with more suggestions hun.... n u r just such a sweetie n yes we will think of the names n the siggie would b soooo wonderful that is just so adorable of u to even think about that.... thanks for ur sweet wishes dear they worked everything is good now :) i mean still a few probs with that but mostly all good... thanks for the care n love once again .... i really appreciate it.....i am soooooo glad u liked this part too thanks sooooooooooo much for ur encouragement too .... all i can say is thanks for everythinggg!! n i will continue again soon lots n loads of love

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

it was very cute.....but plzz keep it long nxt time....!!!

the coming one will b long don't worry... thank so much for reading this part n liking it .... sorry for the long wait got a bit caught up with things

Originally posted by: Kanky

<font color="#0033cc">I just now finished reading all the parts!! 😊 It's awesome!! Try writinig longer updates and stop torturing us by finishing it at such crucial stages! 🤣 And do PM when u update the next part! <br></font>

hi kanky,
thanks soooooooooo much for appreciating n liking my FF ..... i am soooo very glad u liked it :) i'll for sure PM you when i update the next part n i'll for sure make the next part longer... sorry for the long wait!
ps: can't guarantee about the torture of crucial parts tho lol :)

Nupur scream "ahhhh" and tears start to appear in her eyes out of pain. After a second it became obvious that she sprained her foot. Mayank froze in his tracks and looked back to realise what happened. He rushed towards Nupur and embraces her. He picks up her foot and looks at it with great tenderness, care, and love. He looks back up into her eyes and feels her pain. He can't stand to see her tears. He wipes away her tears slowly and leans forward to kiss her forehead. This makes Nupur forget about her pain and become really shy. She rests her head on Mayank's shoulder who hugs her even more tightly. He then whispers "Nupur tum theek ho na?" Nupur doesn't reply. She just hugs him even more tightly and snuggles even more comfortably by Mayank's shoulder. Both Nupur and Mayank loose themselves in each other's thoughts. They go through flashbacks of all their memories together. Tears emerge in Nupur's eyes once again. Mayank feels his shoulder getting wet and he pulls Nupur away while holding her face. He softly says "bohat dard ho raha hai na?" Mayank then lightly touches her foot and his hands start to tremble just imagining her pain. She holds his shaking hand and pulls it up close to her cheek. She rests her face on his hand and closes her eyes while saying "main dard ki wajah se nahi roh rahi hoon" Mayank asks in a very confused voice "toh phir kyun nupur? maine kuch galat kiya kya?" Nupur lightly kisses his hand and then smiles "By god tum bhi na ek dum pagal ho" She pauses and pulls his cheek while making an adoring face "ye khushi ke ansoon hai"

here is part 11 all my dear friends..... i am truly very sorry for taking so long to update.... i just had a lot of things going on.... i hope all of u like it and thank u soooo very much for reading.... pls do leave ur suggestions and comments .... thanksss!!

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

Gudiaaaaa.....yaar tumne update finally kar diyaa 😊
again it was shorttt but at least u wrote something na.....
bless it was a very cuteeee mayur moment.....
i want 2 take dis opportunity and say thanxu for all the lovely messages and pms.... ur toooo cuteeeeee and sweeeetttt.......
love loadsss
xxxxxxxxx

hanji maine finally update kar hi diya hehe 😳
im sorry yaar i try to make it longer lakin it just doesnt happen that way ...... sorryyyy!!! 😔
i'm glad u liked it tho yaar real glad about that hun
awwwwwwww nahi sweetie u r the one who is totally adorable n sweet it is soooooooooooo nice of u to check up on me i just can't thank u enough for being so caring n sweet
stay that way my dear
lots n lots of love hun
tc

Originally posted by: Kanky

How cute! 😊 Try updating faster na!

im glad u liked it my dear 😊
yeah for sure ill update faster this time pakka
probably n hopefully ill update tomorrow only
thanks for reading n liking my FF dear