MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

hiya sweety,
first of all thanxs for adding me to the pm list.......love you for doing dat!
also for sending such a sweet pm!!!! awww!!! so sweeett....
secondly...... thanxs n it was so sweet of you 2 take my suggestion... i was smiling whilst reading part 9, dat u used the phrase 'by god' many times!!😊 soo sweeett.....
aur part 9 was very good....thoda short tha par tum be busy ho na...toh i cant argue wiv u na.... pehle se tum hum sab ko itni achi ff deh rahi ho...toh jab time mile na...toh lambi banana...theek hai....
lovely update....you kno wot we should name this ff and then request a siggie... i av a fren who makes dem, so i cud ask her....😊 if she has the time...
ok cnt wait for the date...
love loads
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx


OMG first of all lemme just say thank u for being soooooooooo sweet love! aap bohat pyari hai.... thanks a ton for such encouraging and sweet words...... ofcourse, main aap ki baat toh manugi hi..... i had to include the "by god" aap ki agar aur koi bhi request ho pls lemme know i'll make sure to include that aswell :)
hanji sorry there are a few things going on right now jinki vaja se ive not had a lot of time on my hand lakin pakka i'll try to continue it very soon and make it as long as i can - i'm not too good that im sorry hun :(
hanji, that would b great n sooo sweet to get a lil sigie n name for the FF.... lakin aap suggest kihjiye what the name should b???
oh n i totally forgot to thank u for reading this update as well my dear and im soooooo very glad aap ko abhi tak ye FF pasand ah raha hai :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
m so eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt part.....
wen r u updating....
i hope soon....
😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank

m so eagerly waiting 4 ur nxt part.....

wen r u updating....
i hope soon....
😊


hi hun,
im soooo sorry im being so slow its just theres a lil bit of drama going on with me .... but i'll continue it very very soon ..... aap ke koi suggestions hai for the first date?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello my dear buddies,
here's a quick lil update.... im real sorry in advance.... its a really short update.....but im kinda stressed n out of time so won't b able to write much.... just wanted to write a lil for all of u tho..... i hope u guys like it thanks a ton for reading :) lots of love to all of you my friends


Nupur gets back to her bubbly self and says "acha toh mujhe date peh le jakar ehsan karoge kya?"
Mayank "aur kya?" he smirks and says "tumhe jhelna ehsan thodi na hai?"
Nupur rushes towards Mayank to hit him while screaming "By God Mayank. main tumhara khoon pih jahoongi"
Nupur runs towards him and Mayank starts running away. Nupur keeps on chasing Mayank in great anger while Mayank keeps laughing and running. Mayank jumps over a table to avoid Nupur and Nupur decides to do the same and trips.
Nupur scream "ahhhh" and tears start to appear in her eyes out of pain. After a second it became obvious that she sprained her foot. Mayank froze in his tracks and looked back to realise what happened. He rushed towards Nupur and.......

Okay guys, here is part 10.... i know its very short im sorry.... but i hope its still enjoyable! thanks for reading everyone :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww if only it was long but i loved it continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruky786

aww if only it was long but i loved it continue soon


im sorry yaar was in a hurry.... next part pakka will b longer.... thanks a ton for reading it!
i'm glad eventhough it was real short u liked it :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyyy dat was gud ...
hope u will write next part longgggggg lol
can u plz add me on ur pm list ??
byeee
tc
update it soonn .. =)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: singh008


OMG first of all lemme just say thank u for being soooooooooo sweet love! aap bohat pyari hai.... thanks a ton for such encouraging and sweet words...... ofcourse, main aap ki baat toh manugi hi..... i had to include the "by god" aap ki agar aur koi bhi request ho pls lemme know i'll make sure to include that aswell :)
hanji sorry there are a few things going on right now jinki vaja se ive not had a lot of time on my hand lakin pakka i'll try to continue it very soon and make it as long as i can - i'm not too good that im sorry hun :(
hanji, that would b great n sooo sweet to get a lil sigie n name for the FF.... lakin aap suggest kihjiye what the name should b???
oh n i totally forgot to thank u for reading this update as well my dear and im soooooo very glad aap ko abhi tak ye FF pasand ah raha hai :)



Hiya Sweety,
thanxu for the sweetest pmz and replies... seriously bohot sweet the....
im really happy that you like the suggestion... i'll think of more things that you could write bout but i dont think you need the help, your doing such an awsome job huni....
yehhh we'll both think of names and then tell each other.... then my fren can make a siggie for us😊😊😊
also huni... no worries bout the lambi update thing... i read ur pm and totally understand.... n inshallah everythin will be awsome soon in ur life 😊
also don't thank me for reading it yaar... tum understand nahi kar sakti ke me kitna enjoy kar rahi hoon... bohot hi achi hai....
now you take care...
n lets think of a awsome name for this awsome ff...
love lots
xxxx


p.s. arrey yaar jus read the update... seriously good... lovely... cannt wait for the next part....😊😊😊
xxxxxxxxx

Edited by I-love-dmg - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was very cute.....but plzz keep it long nxt time....!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angelwingz04

heyyy dat was gud ...<br>hope u will write next part longgggggg lol <br>can u plz add me on ur pm list ?? <br>byeee<br>tc <br>update it soonn .. =) <br>


hi hun,
first of all thanks for reading it!
i'm glad u liked it eventhough it was soooo short :( hanji pakka the next part will b longer thats y i won't update for like a day or two but when i do update it i'll make sure its a fully justified FF and is a nice full scene :)
hanji, pakka i'll pm u the next time i update the FF!!

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