MAYUR (FF) short; Part 11 pg 18 (august 19) - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

142

Views

18.7k

Users

25

Likes

64

Frequent Posters

swarnima123 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
yes dear u should include mayur date in ur next part.i am eagerly waiting for ur next part.😍
singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mohseena

<br><br><font size="7">of course YAAAR!!! aur plzzzzz thora lumba bhi kurdaina part....heheheh.......<br></font><br>



Thanks for answering hun :)
acha pakka i'll make the next part longerrr n i'll include their 1st date!
singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki028

yeaaaaaaaaa.............u shud include mayur date in ur ff.....bt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz yaaaaaaaaaaar...................Mayur datewaala part toh lambaaaaaaaaaaaaa karna plzzzzzzzzz


thanks for answering my dear, hanji date ka part main lamba banahungi pakka :)
singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruky786

yh definetly include their date by the way the confession was WICKED i loved it cant wait for the next part<br>


thanks for answering my question first of all
thanks for reading the FF and i am very glad u liked the confession part :)

singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swarnima123

yes dear u should include mayur date in ur next part.i am eagerly waiting for ur next part.😍


hiiiiii hunnn,
i knew u would respond eventually haha, thanks for answering n hanji i'll include the date then for sure :)
I-love-dmg thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: singh008

hey buddies, should i include mayur's first date in the FF? lemme know n then i'll write the next part :)



babe you gotta include it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i jus love ur ff.......... awesome yaar....... plz pm me wen u update it...😳😳
love loads
xxxxxxxxxxxx

I-love-dmg thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
babez... im sorry... i jus noticed dat i aven't commented on ur work and merely clicked like.... sorrryyyy.... i thot i did.... awesome work yaar.... aur tum plz mujhe pm list me add karna.....love ur stuff
love loads
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

<br><font color="#ff00ff"><br>babe you gotta include it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i jus love ur ff.......... awesome yaar....... plz pm me wen u update it...😳😳<br>love loads<br>xxxxxxxxxxxx</font><br>


hi sweetie,
i'll for sure include it in the next part... don't worry love :)
thank u sooooooo much for appreciating the FF....im so very glad u liked it this much and for sure i'll pm u when i update the next part :)
singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

<font color="#ff00ff">babez... im sorry... i jus noticed dat i aven't commented on ur work and merely clicked like.... sorrryyyy.... i thot i did.... awesome work yaar.... aur tum plz mujhe pm list me add karna.....love ur stuff<br>love loads<br>xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx</font><br>


hello once again hun,
well first of all thanks once again for appreciating my FF so much that soooo sweet of u :) n no its okay love thanks for writing this tho... its real encouraging.... also, thank you very much for reading the FF i'm sooo glad u r liking it!! main koshish karugi to write the next part soon lakin kinda been short on time lately sorryyyyyyy but as soon as i write it i'll pm u.. promise!!
singh008 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
This aggitates mayank and he starts to walk away in anger but Nupur holds him back by the collar of his shirt.
Mayank turns around in anger and yanks her hand off. Nupur gets a huge smile seeing his anger.
Nupur "By God Mayank! tum abhi bhi gussa nak pe hi rakhe ghumo ge?"
Mayank starts to walk away in anger again.
Nupur screams "Mayank" and he turns around to see Nupur's eyes fuming.
Nupur says "Mayank, ab tumhara ye gussa nahi chalega. Jab bhi dekho gussa. Ek min dekho to itna pyar karte ho aur phir ye gussa. Is hi ki vaja se ye sari confussion huhi thi. Mere emotions ke saat kehlna band karo ab. Mere anson tumhe itne pasand hai kya?"
Mayank goes near her and holds her face and Nupurs anger just melts.... a smile again creeps up on Nupur's face
Mayank goes near her ear and whispers "kya karu main esa hi hoon na?"
Nupur just melts and hugs him. She doesn't even say anything back, she just holds him and silent tears start rolling from her eyes. Mayank holds her and feels at ease for finally knowing that she loves him too. After a mintue he feels his shoulder getting wet. He pulls Nupur away.
Mayank at first just kisses her cheek and then says "Nupur tum toh heroines se bhi zyada emotional ho" he gets a smirk on his face as he adds on "By God" Nupur slaps his chest for making fun of her and just hugs him again. They hug for a moment after which Mayank says "Nupur madam hum abhi bhi college main hai" Nupur gets shy and moves away.
Mayank notices that and says "acha chalo toh phir ab lagta hai mujhe tumhe date pe lehjana padega"
Nupur gets back to her bubbly self and says "acha toh mujhe date peh le jakar ehsan karoge kya?"....

Here's the long awaited part 9 my dear buddies.... sorry i took so long to write it.... the next one will b there date... any suggestions???? ..... thanks for reading the FF everyone.... i hope u guys like it :)

wese i hope i lived up to all the promises in this one!! if not then sorry :(
Edited by singh008 - 16 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".